New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

great work tanzie..i luv da way u described alina's inner battle..n dat dipu part was fab..wow piya does have guts..gr8 gng!!cntnu asap tanzie!

Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

(part 2 update complete 😳)

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Nice OS, why can't the dumb cv's show us something like this in form of Piya.

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Nice tanzie thanks for pm sorry right now not in a state of mind to comment

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Wow! I didn't know you wrote, too😲

Nice nice! I'm always open to OSs and I already know I'm going to love this from the title.

Thanks for the PM. I shall read and edit this tomorrow, Tanzie.

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Tanzie!🤗

Like I anticipated, I'm loving how this OS is progressing. Specially Pia's possessive "You're mine!" to Abhay was so awesome😈

So, Haseena is going to attack Pia now. Great! Let's see what Abhay does now. I know he'll find a way to save both his mother and his lover😳

Continue soon!🤗.🤗

Edited by PurpleFairy - 13 years ago

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.Crystal.

@.Crystal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Awesome update...so piya knows the truth now.
dis is much better than the epis nowadays...wish it would go dis way in the show too...plz post the next part soon and pm me

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: notepad697
Awesome update...so piya knows the truth now.
dis is much better than the epis nowadays...wish it would go dis way in the show too...plz post the next part soon and pm me

Thanks 😳 I was supposed to write a romantic update but I was so upset that I lost track... 😳 But next update will be the last and exactly show the meaning of the name of the OS 😳

thanks for liking it dear... it's not that good but I guess we are soo frustrated witht he Cvs and a change would be more thn welcome 😆

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srija

@-srija-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Wow tanzie superb.
I love this piya.in show c is so dumb yar.
Abhay is so sad yar bt he created this problem himself.ek potrayes raichands as the dumbest vampire.i really hate it.
Deepu manipulate alina,alina manipulate haseena,loved the concept.
What wil alina do now?
Continue soon.

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Brilliant update!👏

Now i don't expect anything from CVs.😡They are ruining this show by introducing illogical tracks. Loved the way Pia was helping Abhay to protect his secret from her father.I 'm happy that finally she got to know about Khuranas.I always wanted her to support Abhay... Even i have a feeling that Alina is the one who is controlling Haseena! Continue soon.Thanks a lot for Pm.😃

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago