New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I just read both parts. beautifujy written tanzie👏lovd pia's evry action. dis is hw it shud b. and u hv explaind abhay's pain and inner turmoil beautifully. ohh alina is angry nw. will she hurt pia? hope nt! oh my haseena is ct to attck pia bt m sure abhay will save her. pia landed herslf in trouble.she cn go to any extent fr abhay. update soon dear. me too dear.i'm hating dis currnt track😡still somehw m watchng the show unable to leave itso m nt visitng d forum . only reading the oss,ffs to calm myself. and tnx fr the pm dear🤗

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abhiya7fan

@abhiya7fan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

awesome os tanzie...

kaash serial mein bhi pia wud take sum initiative to find out wat the truth is bcz abhay wanting to keep her away from all this will not tell her anything...

and now with misha being attacked by haseena pia is right in her place...she needs to know what is going on bcz she loves abhay and doesnt want a situation to cum where she will be forced to choose b/w abhay and her family...espcially with arnab dobriyal going crazy over his vampire research..and finding out who the vampires are??!!!...

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

thnx tanzie for the amazing OS

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

hey nice part yaar, show mai to sab ulta pulta kar diya, but atleast ff mai to ham wo padh sakte hai jo ham chahte hai, really amazing yaarr, awesome, pia helping abhay and trusting him, yahi to mang rahe the ham lekn ye cvs ka dimag to shayad dehradun ke jungle shooting karte waqt chodkar aaye hai, anyways nice update

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Fatafati update. Mojar hoyeche. Show te arokom hote lage amar ekdam bhalo lagche na current tract ta.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Tor matha 😛 tor ta onk sundor chilo 😳 thanks... well you will see how i will make Alina neg or grey actually..hope you will like it 😳

Amar mathai akhon betha arambha hoye geche show tar jono. FF's, SS's r OS's guli pore matha ta thik thake please tui forum chere jabi na. Bangladesh ase kamor diye debo vampire der moton swear. Indo - Bangla border kasam.😆

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Superb job Tanzie...

I do not have the faintest idea what is going on in the show now...

But from the various rebellious OS's I do get a picture😆...

Loved the way Piya is dealing with things👏

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Nice update
dipu is such a b****
i hope, abhiya save haseena!
Continue soon
tc

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_Klaroline_

@_Klaroline_

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Lovely update...
I think finally in the show Piya's will solve all the pros...
Continue soon...
Love u...
renuka...

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy
Wow! I didn't know you wrote, too😲
Nice nice! I'm always open to OSs and I already know I'm going to love this from the title.
Thanks for the PM. I shall read and edit this tomorrow, Tanzie.

*Reserved*

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Tanzie!🤗
Like I anticipated, I'm loving how this OS is progressing. Specially Pia's possessive "You're mine!" to Abhay was so awesome😈
So, Haseena is going to attack Pia now. Great! Let's see what Abhay does now. I know he'll find a way to save both his mother and his lover😳
Continue soon!🤗.🤗

Thanks so much Neethz for reading 🤗

trust me I intend to write something else and I ended up in something else...driven by emotions I must say 😆. part 2 was supposed to be a very romantic one but I was so irritated tht I wrote something else But this OS is fully dedicated to Piya 😳 and I will make sure Abhay mends all the parts of Piya's heart very carefully which he has broken 😉

thanks 🤗