New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 8

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

hello dear...awsm updt...👏lvd d way u shwd abhiya cnfrntztn n pia's turmoil...👍🏼so pia s off to help abhay takng all risks????? i lv ds pia...who instead ov only questning ds sm actn also...😆omg...dt ws a nyc cncpt...alina doing it cz of deepu????😡n haseena doing it cz ov alina?????alina s bng manipulatd...awww...poor soul...😭lvd d way u shwd hr feelngs n disputes wd hrslf...⭐️oh...i love ds pia agn...😳finally arnab ki paagzlpanti kuh kaam aai...😆pia's idea ws awsm...👏o my abhay...hes so sad...well i hope he bcms fine agn...wtng 4 d final showdown...😛do cont soon...loasss ov lv...😳

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Nice update! I'm glad Piya knows the entire truth now! Hopefully, she'll tell Abhay asap that Alina is controlling Haseena, and Abhay will soon find a way to free Haseena from Alina's spell! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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tanz dat was a gr8 update!! Thanks heenu 🤗

v all were badly in need of dat, after today's episode!! same here

i liked ur way of taking d story to khurana's house , pia in ur os is much stronger for her love than in d show, she is angry bt still she is nt loosing it, she understands him so well n her vary act of entering in lions' den herself proved it!! i reli loved ur imagination of this whole track!! Thanks you do..this OS is fully dedicated to Piya. I always focus on Abhay what whatever I write...this ones for her 😳

nw coming to alina's part, her character is grey n u av potrayed it well, dat mirror imaged scene was beautiful, hats off to u for dat!!

although i gt confused at dat point where u wrote abt dat small bottles containing some dired herbs!! I love grey characters and reading all most everything I wrote u sud knw tht by now 😛 things will clear up in the next update. abt Alina..love is blind and rest on the next update 😆

bt again u av done justice in defining abhay's inner turnmoil, his human-cum-supernatural act (calling pia n then trying to connect wid her), defining his situation very well!!

continue soon hun afterall I love ABHIYA...so when im writing I try to make justice to both of them.. 😳

luv u🤗 luv u too huny

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

HEY TANZIE AWESOME update I so loved it.Alina is showing her true colors.Hey plz continue watching show 4 TRPs sake.I love the way u showed Abhiya dilemma.I hope ki both Abhiya fight wid this problem together😳

LUV U🤗

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Thanks so much Neethz for reading 🤗

trust me I intend to write something else and I ended up in something else...driven by emotions I must say 😆. part 2 was supposed to be a very romantic one but I was so irritated tht I wrote something else But this OS is fully dedicated to Piya 😳 and I will make sure Abhay mends all the parts of Piya's heart very carefully which he has broken 😉

thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: abhiora

great work tanzie..i luv da way u described alina's inner battle..n dat dipu part was fab..wow piya does have guts..gr8 gng!!cntnu asap tanzie!