New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

awesome update
loved it
I hope show mein aisa ho jaye

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

👏the ending is really nice i wish this os will be little longer ...😳

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Finally everything is in place..

AbhIya are where they belong in each others arms...

Haseena cured and in Chands arms😆

Feeling bad for Alina but hoping she will find a way back

Thanks for the PM Tanzie

Enjoyed reading this OS

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

awsum update dr!!!!! abhay sang a song... cool yr... n d ending is beautiful i hope cvs get some idea frm ur os n ff... waiting 4 more...

thanks 4 d pm!!!!

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

HEY tanzie awesome part I so loved it.So deepu is controlling Alina & Alina is controlling haseena.Oh it was gud Pia helped her future saasu mom.And the bst part was Abhay taking Pia 2 date.Oh so cute of him 2 sing 4 her.😳

LUV U🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: abhiora
res..waitng tanzie
EDITED..i luvd it tanzie..gr8 writing..lol u made abhay sing!!bt i was a nyc hatke idea that he is nt in sadu mood..the words of the song were soo touchng..glad how u portrayd piya!fantastic,..n it was gud to make alina grey!
p.s.waise i slept at 5 and gt up at 7..n read 2nd part..nw rplyng in clg brk..khub bhalo laglo shokale pore!

Awww... thanks darling..i'm so happy u started the morning by reading this 🤗

I dont want her neg yaar...she is so sweet so I made her grey... i have plenty of ideas to turn the stories.. sometimes I really wish will they hire me in the creative team? 😛 bcoz my brain works faster the then CVs tht I can boast 😆

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: madhuri16
awesome OS tanzie🤗🤗...u ended it perfectly⭐️...luved d last part.😳...abhay playing piano n asking sorry by singing☺️...wow...it was sooo romantic☺️😳...piya watching vampire diaries😆...stefan's father has given her a nice tips.😆😆...i really don't know y each tym i read ur ff r os i wish d cv's steal some of ur ideas.😊...

Thanks Madhuri 😃 Thank you... i thought of many things for making it romantic but all seemed very common to me so I wrote which is impossible for Abhay Raichand 😆 Thanks dear... I wish tht too.. there are soo many talented writers in the forum and trust me all of them are better then Cvs... at least they have so many different ideas 😕

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
awesome ending.It couldn't hav a better one.I wish Dey could hav taken sum idea 4rm ur ff's n OS..😳 Will wait 4 more OS's..🤗

Ei Tanzie n Tora,toder ki dark circle porar voy nei?? vorbela obdi jege achis!!! 😆

Thanks dear 😳 They wont... 😛 I will try to write soon dear... it will keep my head cool 😆

nope.. amr dark circle porena 😎 ami kal sararat ghumaini 😕 so likhe sehs kore felechi 😆

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.Crystal.

@.Crystal.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Beautiful update...loved the ending
Finally Abhiya together...and Haseena cured. 🥳
Enjoyed the OS and thanks for the pm

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

ok..m late...now...😆...koi na..i will comment now...

awesome update tanzie...i loved it...everything fell in place..and abhay is singing...😲...woh ILU ke alava kuch nahi gaata...haila...but i will believe in you...he sang...and abhiya were so cute...haseena is fine..alina evil..i still think it will happen in show...

btw...written very well...thanks for pm..