New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 16

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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hey tanz seriously u should go n put some ideas in cvs brain , they r badly in need of it!! Lolz.. 😛 😆

i reli enjoyed reading ur version of this track!! glad u did 😊

ur os was dedicated to pia n u took out best frm her character, bt it doesn't mean, u didn't do justice to abhay's part, u did dat also very well!! Thanks dear.. you always go overboard in case of praising me 😆

i reli loved d way u av written abt haseena's n alina's fight wid their inner self, dat was something reli appreciable!!!👏👏👏 thanks I don wan Alina neg so made her grey and Haseena is my alltime fav u knw tht 😳

abhaiya part was beautifully written!!

n best part was pia's xplanation of her reckless act to abhay!!👏, u av defined it well dat love is all abt trust!! this convo is so much needed...seriously 😕

dat vampire diaries part solved two purposes,dat my confusion regarding dat herbal potion gt cleared n it added some humour to d story also! hahah... i got the idea from tht scene and i included it with a trick and humour offcourse 😆

dat was a lovely os n seriously it didn;t bother me much dat u left alina's part open ended, like i was feeling when we were dicussing it!! Ohh..i wanted to write more but thot its better to leave it like this... i will write another OS once this hooded figure will be disclosed in the show 😊

luv u loadss hun😳 luv u too 🤗

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie u didnt reply to my comment sob

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

I read it btw banner result is declared raisa won and sano is runner up

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

i m extremely sorry
i don't know how i forgot to comment on the first 2 chapters
bloody exams are really messing up my head big time No worries sweetz... im glad you are finally here 🤗
anyways the os was fab Thank you 😊
i wish cv's will steal ur idea no offences meant😆 I wish that too 😛
but seriously i also wanted it to be alina in this way we can get rid of many of the problems all at once I don want to get rid of Alina but I don wan to see her as neg either.. everyone is using her..thats bad
the best part was abhiya reunion in the end it was so emotional and so romantic thanks 😳
but abhay sang for pia😲 this is not fair yaar i m planning this for an upcoming update of my mini ff haila 😲 I also planned that Abhay will give a ring to Piya but u already wrote in ur SS 😛 so we are nor fair and square.. u read my mind b4 and now I did yours 🤣
anyways u are far more smarter than me and has written it quite well may be i will postpone that idea for a while now
thanks for pm and keep writing again embarrassing me.. 😳 will write another OS when this 24 hours will be gone 😛

Originally posted by: sunflower52

Amazing update. Hope something like this happens in the show.