New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 15

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awesome Update!!!👏 thanku 😳

Abhay sang song for Pia ...😍😲Loved the part where Haseena was trying her best to control her thirst and not to hurt Pia.Trust is an important element in any relationship. Abhiya's part was amazing!! IKR.. abhay sining..if it ever happens...i will faint 🤣 and aftall Haseena is a mother 😊

Haseena was already there doing her yoga classes infront of a hooded figure.🤣 Usdin jis tarah se Haseena was worshiping the hooded figure mujhe yahi laga 😆

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome ending! 😛 Piya saved the day! 😃 The Abhay-Piya conversation about trust was good and Piya referring to "Vampire Diaries" in their conversation was funny when she tried to justify her inspiration for drinking the herbal cure! 😆 I loved the scene where Abhay sang to Piya! The moment was so beautiful! 😳Fantastic job with this OS! 👏

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Fantastic Tazie Loved it. I must say you have excellent taste in songs.

Originally posted by: kuttu

That was a lovely ending and truly Abhay did show his romantic side. I wish soemthing along these lines actually happened in the serial. But all they show is some crap and finally it is left at an open end. So now I have stopped watching it only. But the stories here seem to be much more interesting and really worth reading. Hoping to read more from you. Loved the part were Pia gave Abahy a dressing down. Not the way creatives potrays the characters.

Alinas helplessness, Piyas jealousy and anger, Abhays righteous nature and also protective. But why disd he have to shout at Alina he does have a soft spot for her. And not to forget the fact that he was actually using ehr for his own ends. But it was a nice OS wouldn't mind reading what actually happens to Alina

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie hugs ending khup bhalo tha i am a crazy abhiya fan so i loved their romance haseena piya convo touching chand as always caring lol u made alina the mystery woman here 🤣 no thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -srija-

Superb tanzie. Thanks Srija 😊
Haseena doing yoga classes he he he
piya got the idea from TVD ha ha ha.bcoz I got it form tht scene I wrote so I mentioned it in a tricky way 😉
Liked the part where haseena tried hard 2 control her thirst n control herself frm attacking piya.
Aww...abhay sang 4 piya,so sweet.he surely knows how to mend piya's heart He always knows what to do...infact he is the only character in the show who does 😆. just sooner or later 😛

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Tanzie.. It was a very beautiful ending.. I've no words..!! You are such a wonderful writer and You are proving it each and every time!! 🤗 Awww thank you soo much dear.. you guys always keep my inspiration high 🤗

What an ending it was.. So smooth yet so powerful in terms of love.. The conversation between Abhay and Pia with love but still with anger made me mesmerized in their love.. The conversation was my fav part bcoz its needed in the show ...they need to clear things up 😆

Pia is very brave in this OS.. She drank the herb just in case if anything happens to her.. All because she got to see Vampire dairies.. She's crazy!! And Abhay's reaction to it..😆 I loved each bits.. thanks.. TVD part was to add some humor into it... otherwise this OS was way too serious 😆

Thanks for the PM Tanzie!!