New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: abhiora
res..waitng tanzie

u still awake? 😲 its not done sweetheart... kalke poro 😳 shokale amr PM peye jabe 🤗

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

<font color="#6600cc" size="2" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">u still awake?😲its not done sweetheart... kalke poro😳shokale amr PM peye jabe🤗</font>

actualy pracs likhchi..tai 5ta obdi awake emniteo..bore hcchi

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

awesome OS tanzie🤗🤗...u ended it perfectly⭐️...luved d last part.😳...abhay playing piano n asking sorry by singing☺️...wow...it was sooo romantic☺️😳...piya watching vampire diaries😆...stefan's father has given her a nice tips.😆😆...i really don't know y each tym i read ur ff r os i wish d cv's steal some of ur ideas.😊...

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

awesome ending.It couldn't hav a better one.I wish Dey could hav taken sum idea 4rm ur ff's n OS..😳 Will wait 4 more OS's..🤗

Ei Tanzie n Tora,toder ki dark circle porar voy nei?? vorbela obdi jege achis!!! 😆

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Awesome Update!!!👏

Abhay sang song for Pia ...😍😲Loved the part where Haseena was trying her best to control her thirst and not to hurt Pia.Trust is an important element in any relationship. Abhiya's part was amazing!!

Haseena was already there doing her yoga classes infront of a hooded figure.🤣

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Awesome ending! 😛 Piya saved the day! 😃 The Abhay-Piya conversation about trust was good and Piya referring to "Vampire Diaries" in their conversation was funny when she tried to justify her inspiration for drinking the herbal cure! 😆 I loved the scene where Abhay sang to Piya! The moment was so beautiful! 😳Fantastic job with this OS! 👏

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Fantastic Tazie Loved it. I must say you have excellent taste in songs.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
awesome ending.It couldn't hav a better one.I wish Dey could hav taken sum idea 4rm ur ff's n OS..😳 Will wait 4 more OS's..🤗

Ei Tanzie n Tora,toder ki dark circle porar voy nei?? vorbela obdi jege achis!!! 😆

early to bed & early to rise makes a person healthy wealthy & wise.😆

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

That was a lovely ending and truly Abhay did show his romantic side. I wish soemthing along these lines actually happened in the serial. But all they show is some crap and finally it is left at an open end. So now I have stopped watching it only. But the stories here seem to be much more interesting and really worth reading. Hoping to read more from you. Loved the part were Pia gave Abahy a dressing down. Not the way creatives potrays the characters.

Alinas helplessness, Piyas jealousy and anger, Abhays righteous nature and also protective. But why disd he have to shout at Alina he does have a soft spot for her. And not to forget the fact that he was actually using ehr for his own ends. But it was a nice OS wouldn't mind reading what actually happens to Alina

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Tanzie hugs ending khup bhalo tha i am a crazy abhiya fan so i loved their romance haseena piya convo touching chand as always caring lol u made alina the mystery woman here 🤣 no thanks for pm

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago