FF - Breathe Me ll Chapter 3 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Milady, what an incredulously intriguing update you've made!

I dint mean to deliver alliteration, though.

You write so very well, for one. And then, you never cease to keep the punch of the story as constrained and scanty as possible, to leave your reader wanting to uncover the entire thing.

Misha's interaction with Kabir indicated of her tiff with Pia, and solemnly portrayed hers along with some of Kabir's traits. It was a delightful read!

And I shall be waiting onto this, I wanna read further!

Thanks for the PM!

Kankshita

I have one request, please keep on using big big words...it has a GREAT effect on my existing vocabulary! 😆 See, I learned 'constrained' and 'scanty' in your one reply! Trust me, I am not kidding!

Thanks for the wonderful review! 😃

Originally posted by: Angelic_J

Before I write anything Mais, I just want to applaud you for the bolded part👏👏 That is some very deep thinking on your part and very aptly put👏 That one line stood out from everything else you have written😳 Maybe its just me but I found it to be extremely profound

Anyway I loved Kabir and Misha's interaction although I don't really understand why Kabir would get so mad at Misha for asking that simple question. I didn't think Misha's question was that big of a deal🤔 Maybe it has something to do with their history😆 I love how you always keep up on the edge of our seat with all this mystery surrounding these characters. And I must say I was EXTREMELY surprised to read this is all taking place in the 21st century😆 As Misha said, I thought I was reading something out of Jane Austen's novel as well😆

Can't wait for your next update😃

👏

Well, its got something to do with Kabir-Piya's relationship which will be revealed as soon as I stop getting lazy and update frequently 😆 Kidding! And, did you honestly think it was some old story? You should read Kanky's stories...those are the ones I call 'classic'. My writing always had the colors of classic writing sprayed here and there. Like I have already said, modern writing and me don't go hand in hand. Btw, I made Misha tell that it was 21st century because I was worried many people would be under the impression that its an old classic story 😳

Thanks for commenting! 😉

Originally posted by: --sunshine--

Well u knw that how mad I am for ur writting read 1 chapter nad u justified that I am right for going mad for ur writting. you represented Pia(girl) so well. The horror and susupense element were used so properly. It was just awesome and everything was done so well. I ws just craving that what will happen next

Okay till now I am done with 1 chapter only now going for next one😳

You read the first chapter now!?!?!? hawww! Slow girl! 😆 Kidding, sorry I don't think that I PMed you...from now on if you LIKE the chapters, I will PM you! PAKKA! 😳

Love the way you write... I am hooked :-) Very intriguing so far... and unless you had made Misha say it is the 21st century I had started off thinking that it is set in some 18th century or something :-) Ihad imagined some victorian settings :-) Now need to rework on the settings in my mind :-) Looking forward to reading more from you.

res! 😆

Originally posted by: solembaum

Love the way you write... I am hooked :-) Very intriguing so far... and unless you had made Misha say it is the 21st century I had started off thinking that it is set in some 18th century or something :-) Ihad imagined some victorian settings :-) Now need to rework on the settings in my mind :-) Looking forward to reading more from you.

Hahahaha, that was exactly the reason why I made Misha say it...too many people were thinking of this as a classic Victorian age story 😛 Thank you so much liking and commenting! 😃

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

res! 😆

kameeni 😛

why could not u be the writer of the show? u will do more justice to the character than the cvs, and ekta mata have done? this is what a def of a dark love story is supposed to be like🤔😳

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

res! 😆

-edited-

kabir-misha? seriously? i remember i used to love these two, as individuals ofcourse - i still do - but when people started asking for them as a couple, i sortof gave up on them because i, for one, couldn't see them as a couple. 😳😆 and now.. you're making me like them!? NOO. ;O don't do this to mee. you promised me different couples in different updates, i hope you remain true to your word, chammak challo. 😆 i just HAD to add those last two words. 🤔

anyway, i'm not gonna go in to that how fabulous of a writer you are because you know it already. 😆 just.. i LOVED the update, and SORRY for reserving. there are times when i can not help itt. 😆

Oye hello! You took it too literally Jaan! What I meant is that there are gonna be many couples and no particular endgame to any couple 😆 And I feel PROUD to make you like MishKa! I tweaked their couple a little bit...but for that you have to wait.

Love the name Chammak Challo! 😉 And I know you can't help reserving...I am used to that 😆

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hey mais wondeRful updt

i was thinking the girl is T the slowly slowly

i ealised its Misha...lol

loved theiR dialogues...

im curious 2 know this 7 years ago past

n the lines r really beautiful

=) =) =)

lovely work

continue when u can

love yaaa

Hahaha! T? That was unexpected. Don't worry, she'll come soon! Thanks for reading! 😳

Originally posted by: syria2014

why could not u be the writer of the show? u will do more justice to the character than the cvs, and ekta mata have done? this is what a def of a dark love story is supposed to be like🤔😳

Thanks for these kinds words...well my characters are basically my own imagination but true, Cvs killed the characters and the show!