FF - Breathe Me ll Chapter 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

Awww...! Thank you!! And don't worry about the length of the comment...as long as you liked it and told me about it, I am happy!

Yup! Will update soon! 😳

No no, I will definately give a bigger comment! Ur writing is simply FAB!!! Hayyyeee... Wish I could write like that? When will your next update be? Dying to know what will happen next! Lolz! If this is my haalat with the intro, najaane mera haal kya hoga jab next update padoongi! 🤣 LOVED IT TO THE CORE!! Wish I could press the like button 10000000000000000000000 times!

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

No no, I will definately give a bigger comment! Ur writing is simply FAB!!! Hayyyeee... Wish I could write like that? When will your next update be? Dying to know what will happen next! Lolz! If this is my haalat with the intro, najaane mera haal kya hoga jab next update padoongi! 🤣 LOVED IT TO THE CORE!! 😳😳😳 Wish I could press the like button 10000000000000000000000 times!

thank you thank you thank you thank you!!

the next update will be done in a few days! Hope you'll give me the same warm response as this one! 😳

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

thank you thank you thank you thank you!!

the next update will be done in a few days! Hope you'll give me the same warm response as this one! 😳

Koi shak? After this amazing update, I tho have no doubt that I will give u the same kind of response!

OMG!!! Masooma!!! This was so awesome!

wwwooowww

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

res!

-edited-

i'm FINALLY unreserving, kay?

to start with, you know how much i totally ADORE your writing style. it suits and describes everything to the max detail, creating a whole picture of a girl dancing, the knife, the lady, the change in the tone of the voice, the suspense, the horror, the mystery, the whole 'masooma' element - very nicely done.

i'm guessing the girl is pia? well, no shit sherlock. 😆 it's a nice change from the damsel in distress we're so used to these days. again, very well done + continue soon!

If it wasn't for these lovely comments, I would LITERALLY kill you for all your reserves! 😛 But then you unreserve and write the sweetest of comments and I melt right there. Now tell me, what should I do? 😳

Don't worry, now that you have unreserved, I'll continue it sooon! 😳

wow! i lovee it! please update soonn!😳

Oh this is brilliant👏 I am sorry I haven't been able to read before but I was MIA from IF for a few days😳 But once again you have captured the surroundings so beautifully. Your writing makes it hard to NOT imagine yourself as the protagonist😆 I could feel each and every emotion of the girl [Pia is it?😆] as if it was happening to me somehow. But as someone mentioned before I am happy to see a kick ass woman as your protagonist instead of the usual damsel in distress😛

I guess you will be continuing this so please do as I cannot wait to read more of it😳

Originally posted by: Angelic_J

Oh this is brilliant👏 I am sorry I haven't been able to read before but I was MIA from IF for a few days😳 But once again you have captured the surroundings so beautifully. Your writing makes it hard to NOT imagine yourself as the protagonist😆 I could feel each and every emotion of the girl [Pia is it?😆] as if it was happening to me somehow. But as someone mentioned before I am happy to see a kick ass woman as your protagonist instead of the usual damsel in distress😛

I guess you will be continuing this so please do as I cannot wait to read more of it😳

Yup...its Piya! I was also sick of seeing Piya being saved by everyone so I thought, why not make her strong enough to protect herself? Cheesy but true! 😉 Anyway, thanks for commenting! I thought you wouldn't! 😛

🤗 Love ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

Yup...its Piya! I was also sick of seeing Piya being saved by everyone so I thought, why not make her strong enough to protect herself? Cheesy but true! 😉 Anyway, thanks for commenting! I thought you wouldn't! 😛

🤗 Love ya! 🤗

You thought I wouldn't comment?😲😲😲 How could you commit the crime of thinking such heinous thoughts?😳 I would never ever do that intentionally😳 I wasn't here on IF for a few days and I got back yesterday and as you know my dabba gets filled rather quickly😳 Plus I have exams and all that crap so usually I am not on I-F much🤔