Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
POCO!! Mera time waste ho gaya..I was hoping to read Sam and Misha. 😭 Jk jk. 😃

Jokes apart, LOVED the update! Exactly what I want to happen in the show!! I told you once and I tell you again... YOU CAN BE MORE FAMOUS THAN EKTA KAPOOR IF YOU WANT! 😳

Show some Sam, please? :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Today I actually Imagined Anushka's face..n she was the same lady whom we had seen with Abhay in woods..
Haseena n chand r so not going to leave Pia now..
Abhay he's truely scared to fall for her..i.e he didn't faced her even..but said Pia u'll run out of words when u'll see me..
Hw charming can one get..!!
Pia said her Sorry with full Confidence..I'm glad atleast she spoke up it abt Abhay misguiding her.. I'm truely feeling this lyk heaven..wished real episode mai bhi kuch aise ho..!!
Thanks for the update..can't wait to read more..
I wanna knw abt Anushka more..
Poca..🤗
Edited by NIDIZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Poco,
Awesome Updates.............Loved it.
I am Loving yr OS more than the show now..........Thanks for writing such an awesome OS.
Keep going.
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for Piya to stalk Abhay.. hope Abhay doesn't give up easily..
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls continue poco cant wait

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful updates Nitzy 😃

Piyu wont give up easily Abhay Raichand has to Forgive her...😳

Awesomeness wud be waiting for the next update......😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Sam stops the car outside Dobriyal House.Or rather a little away from it. Misha looks at him.

Misha ( puzzled )- Sambhav, my house is a few yards away in case you suffer from night blindness or are you are scared of my pink ostrich sister Pancchi ? Don't worry , she doesn't fly at night.

Sam turns the engine off and his dimples going deeper turns his grey eyes at her with his eye brow raised in retort.

Sam ( teasingly )- Scared? Me? Who was shivering like a wet rabbit an hour ago, madame? You or me?

Misha laughs and opens the seat belt.

Misha (picking her bag)- But seriously , you can come in. My folks won't eat you up.

Sam ( laughs)- I know that , Misha. It is just that it is not decent to show up at a girl's house for a mug of coffee at 12 in the night. I don't want your Dad scanning me.

Misha ( makes a face)- He won't scan you, moron. You are not my boyfriend. Infact , mom doesn't think I will have a boyfriend in this lifetime.

Sam (shrugs his shoulders)- I don't know about you, lady but am absolute dating stuff. I am devastatingly good looking and charm is my name. So, your parents might get ideas.

Misha ( her mouth open and eyes blinking )- Are you related to Abhay Raichand?

Sam (struck)- No. Why?

Misha (rolls her eyes)- He is as self obsessed as you are.

Sam (immediately )- Abhay is not self obsessed. He is something else'.

Misha looks at him in surprise and suspicion. She looks at him sharply.

Misha ' Do you know Abhay well?

Sam ( hides behind his charm )- I am just trying to know you well.

Misha (getting out of the car )- Dream on, Sam.

Sam holds her arm and she bends down to look at him.

Sam ( with firm mischief )- I am not dreaming , Misha. And no, I am so not trying to flirt with you. We are buddies and am allowed the mischief.

Misha ( looks at the stern expression in his eyes )- Your eyes go a shade darker when you mean business, is it?

Sam releases her arm and gives her a disarming smile as he starts the ignition.

Sam ( pushing the gears )- No, sweetheart. I don't mean business yet. Get going now. I am waiting till you enter the gates.

Misha gives a deep look to Sam who just grins back and she walks towards the house gates. Sam beats his hand on the steering wheel and grits his teeth.

Sam ( his grey eyes going a shade darker )- The nerve of that chick!....if it was not for that witch's cross, I would have''.( calms down)'.focus Sambhav! You need Abhay and for that you need the witch's cross before he finds it!....Arghs! Sometimes I wish he falls in love with Piya and forgets all about Maithli! If only wishes were horses'. ( looking at Misha waving at him and he waves back with a fake smile)'. Misha Dobriyal, you are all set for a whirlwind romance and watch me drain out all this kiddish smartness of yours!

Just then, Sam's cellphone rings and he is shocked to see Abhay's number flashing.

Sambhav( starting the car)- Damn! He knows I am with Misha. Wow! Handle an attitude chick and a powerful vampire in one night!....( takes the call)' Hey Abhay, wazzup?

Abhay ( from the other end)- Sam, I am waiting down the road near the milestone. Here. In flat 5 minutes.

Sambhav ( trying to sound cool)- Yo dude. You know that am dying to see you.

Sambhav tosses his cellphone aside and drives down the road.

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Piya is pacing about like a mad tigress on the terrace of the hostel and that too without permission. She cannot get Abhay out of her mind and she cannot fight the recurring image of Abhay holding her close enough and strongly enough to kiss her and then pushing her away with extreme hatred.

Piya ( blowing hot and cold)- What is his problem? Do I have horns on my head or do I have long teeth of a witch that he can only hiss and bite at my sight! He is not bad but wants me to think the worst of him! Ridiculous! I'

Just then , a hand comes from behind and covers her eyes and Piya screams instinctively.

Piya ( irritated )- Abhay , will you just stop playing these games? I'

Piya is stunned as the hand loosens on her eyes and a confused and disappointed Kabir comes in front of her. Piya wants to bite her tongue there and then .

Piya ( faltering)- Kabir'.

Kabir ( confused)- Yes, Kabir' what's wrong , babes? Was Abhay here? Is he harassing you? This man!

Piya is so irritated and engrossed in her thoughts that she doesn't notice the flowers in his hands .

Piya ( holding her head )- Abhay has not done anything, Kabir.

Kabir ( confused )- I don't get you. Didn't do anything? Why? Impregnating and beating Maya was not enough? Don't tell me that you got swayed by Anushka's outburst. She is his sister , so it is understandable.

Piya ( sits on the parapet )- It is not Anushka, Kabir. It is Maya! Maya has herself confessed that I sent Abhay to prison for nothing! He is not her child's father!

Kabir is so stunned to hear that , that he almost drops the flowers.

Kabir ( still registering what Piya has just said )- Not the father? Are you sure? Maybe Maya was scared. Abhay can be quite a terror!

Piya ( near tears )- She is not lying , Kabir and she is not scared of Abhay. The father is someone else whom she says she cannot name' she allowed us to think the culprit is Abhay so that he can take the responsibility' she is in love with Abhay! Can you believe it ?

Kabir is looking at Piya with surprised expressions and his grip tightens around the bouquet.

Kabir ( observing)- Oh' in that case , you ' I mean all of us should apologize to Abhay, right?

Piya ( almost crying now )- I DID! I tried to say sorry but he doesn't even want to see my face, Kabir. He will forgive everyone except me. He hates me . He will always hate me'( hugs Kabir)' why does he hate me so much?

Kabir embraces her but looks rather affected and puts his hand on her head'..

Kabir ( looking lost)- He doesn't hate you, Piya'..my Piya is the bestest'how can anyone hate her? Stop crying now, okay?

But Piya doesn't stop crying and Kabir stands there , holding her. The flowers drop from his hand and he keeps looking at the fallen flowers'

Kabir ( thinks as he rests his head on her head )- I wish he hated you and you hated him' but that is not be'..i dread the coming days, Piya''I am scared'..

TO BE CONTINUED'''''

Edited by Pocahontas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Sam is playing big time with Mish! No! I don't want Misha's heart broken😭 But this Sam is something! I'm really really liking him!!
And Kabir! OMG poor Kabir! He's scared and for the right reason! He's going to lose Pia to Abhay! Aww!😒
Pia didn't even think about him!😡
I really want to know what happens next! I'm sure Kabir is going to give Abhay a cold shoulder!! Update soon, Poco and awesome work as usual!
P.S. Did I ever mention that I love the way you write?!😊
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG. Pocoz. Ab main chand ki neend karungi. A TERRIFIC Sam and Mishku part. Gosh. Yeah, Sam's evil, I got it, but would he like, really, really fall in love with Misha? Pahleasseeee I so want that! 😳

And.. I loved the KaPi part. Awww, I feel SO sad for Kabir. The girl embraces him and doesn't even notice the flowers. I am so obviously biased for him. 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb. I have read all the parts and they are amazing!

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