Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazinggggggg work Coco i love ur storyline can't wait for the nxt few episode.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another great chap... I felt kinda sad for kabir... That shows how good you are dear... Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
great chap...!!!! lovely update..!
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sam Misha scene was amazine..I think Sam is the perfect man for Misha..but he's behind witch cross..!!
Btw What happened abt Pia's History..mystery..??
I'm so much waiting for that too..OMG I Just luv to read this..
Pia n Kabir scene was beautiful..I luved Kabir..he is worried for Pia n knwing the factor that he'll loose her in future,he comforts her..the I really felt bad for the flowers they were completely thrown out of scene..
OMG it was Awwwwwww moment..totally luv it..can't wait to read more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Poco,
Yet again..............Awesome Update.
Sam-Misha and poor Kabir, loved it.
Keep Going
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Posted: 14 years ago
totaly gr8 parts Poco!
can I call you that?
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Abhay was standing outside his car , pacing around calmly in the moon light. And as his eyes went back to the road coming from the Dobriyal mansion , he saw Sambhav's car turn around the corner and appear in front of him. Sambhav sees Abhay's imposing profile in the light of his headlights and calming himself , he brings the car to a halt. Sambhav gets down from the car and walks upto Abhay who is glaring down at him.

Sambhav ( matter of factly)- Stalking me, Abhay? You are way too inspired by Piya Jaiswal, aren't you?

Abhay ( his hands in the pockets of his coat scanning Sambhav)- I don't need to stalk you to keep a track of you, Sam. You have been stalking me for a 100 years and more , so I can sense where you are and what you are upto exactly. And don't get Piya in this.

Sambhav ( sitting on the bonnet of Abhay's car and smiling sinisterly at him)- Aha, possessive! You like that chick, admit it, Abhay'.( goes a little wicked)'. With Mailthli , it was love at first sight, I remember. Ah, the early 1900s '..you were such a charmer back then, Abhay. I wonder what happened to you.

Abhay grits his teeth and grabbing Sam by his collar he holds him firmly close to his face. Sam gets aggressive and clenches his fists but doesn't attack Abhay.

Abhay ( angrily )- I didn't call you here to discuss my love life, Sambhav! And don't you dare think that you can hide behind this dark humour. Understand ? Now , look at me and answer me without acting smart. What is your scene with Misha Dobriyal? This sudden surge of affection for that teen?

Sambhav ( feeling suffocated in Abhay's grip)- Abhay, I know that you can kill me this instant with your fangs because I cannot attack you until that once in a blue moon night '..but for me to talk , you need to behave civilized with me.

Abhay releases his collar and Sambhav literally coughs to catch his breath. Abhay relaxes.

Abhay ( rolls his eyes)- You are way too dramatic , Sam. Aren't werewolves supposed to be super strong in their muscles?

Sambhav ( almost growls )- I am not here to fight with you, Abhay. You know that I cannot kill you and you can kill me anytime. And yet you let me live'. Because I know where Maithli is'.( Abhay is furious and Sambhav can see the veins rising and pupils changing colours in him )' okay, chill. I will not rub on that. Misha is a nice girl''I mean she is pretty and I am but a man behind a beast.

Abhay ( looks at him sharply)- There is only one person in this whole world Sam with whom you can play NO GAMES. If you are trying to tell me that you have suddenly fallen in love with Misha's lovely skin and doe eyes, I am going to drain you out of blood rightaway!

Sambhav( raises his eyebrow)- Abhay, since when have you been noticing Misha's skin?

Abhay ( smirks )- I am a vampire. Skin and scents are basic to me. Looking at you and knowing you , I know you are going to cook a million lies on the spot about how besotted you are with Misha but am not buying any of that crap'.i can see that you want something from her and through her'.and trust me, I will find that out. In the meantime, Sambhav'.( straightens Sam's collar) ' I . AM. WATCHING. YOU.

Sambhav's expressions tighten but he says nothing. Abhay grins and opens his car door and then, with a teasing expression turns towards Sambhav.

Abhay ( clearing his throat )- By the way, Sam. I heard that you had sent some men to find out about Piya's history'..i don't know the reason though'but I took care of them. Jack is still on the loose though.

Sambhav is stunned to hear that and he looks angry and shocked at the same time.

Sambhav (furiously )- WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!....Abhay , what the hell did you do to them?

Abhay ( winks at him)- Drop in home sometime. Mom will love to tell you''( becomes stern)'.Keep away from Piya .

With this Abhay drives off and Sam stamps his feet.

Sam (screams )- Why doesn't he open an official women protection squad!....Damn him! He has captured my men.Abhay Raichand, am so gonna kill you!

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Next morning, at Raichand Mansion.

Abhay is just out of bath and is getting ready , slipping on a black T-shirt when there is a knock on the door of his room.

Abhay ( ruffling his hair dry)- Come in.

The door opens and a confused maid servant comes in.

Maid ( timidly )- Sir'.

Abhay ( looking at her image in the mirror)- Ya, Himaani. What happened?

Maid ( looking down)- There is something that you must come and see downstairs, Sir'..rightaway.

Abhay turns to look at her. He is struck.

Abhay ( walking towards her)- What happened?

Himaani( making way for him)- Please see for yourself. Haseena mam is really really upset.

Abhay gives her a puzzled look and brushing past her , he goes out of the room. As soon as he looks down from the railing , he almost freezes on the spot. The hall is swarmed with countless bouquets of flowers.

Abhay ( coming down the stairs in fury)- Flowers! What are they doing in my house?

Haseena ( looks at him)- Why don't you tell us , son?

Abhay looks very mad at the sight of flowers and it seems he would burst into tears any moment.

Abhay ( seethes)- Carnations! I hate carnations.....I CANNOT STAND THEM!

Enraged, Abhay kicks the bouquets and screams at his servants.

Abhay ( shutting his eyes )- GET THESE FLOWERS OUT OF MY SIGHT!

The servants spring into action and clear the flowers. Abhay relaxes a little and collapses on the couch, covering his face. Haseena goes to her son and puts her hand on his shoulder. Abhay doesn't look up.

Abhay ( vulnerable and depressed)- Who brought these flowers, mother? '..WHO!

Haseena hands him a pink envelope and Abhay takes it. He opens it and there is a small note in it '

"I am sorry, Abhay. Please forgive me. Waiting for your answer, Piya. J ".

Abhay crumples the paper in his hands and looks disturbed.

Haseena ( smiles wickedly )- This Piya'.

Abhay ( shattered )- Leave me , alone, Mom''.Just go'..

Haseena looks at him and decides not to say anything. She goes away and Abhay looks down at his feet and there is a carnation under his right foot. Abhay gets up and almost runs upstairs.

TO BE CONTINUED'''''''..

Edited by Pocahontas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome as usual!
really Love Piya's gesture of sending Abhay carnations!!!:)
Sam is so adorable!! lol yeah! I find him adorable.....luv his character!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I ❤️ the conversation btw Abhay n Sam..
Finally Sam plan has been failed but, till when I think u'll surely let us knw what exactly was Pia's history mystery.. Jack has been captured..but Abhay will leave him..OMG I luv his attitude..
Flowers Awwwwwww..one side Pia does not even sees Kabir flower n on other she sends a room full of carnation's..*intersting* ..So,Abhay can't even stand bunches of flowers..or is it the Carnation's related with Maithili..!!
I'm enjoying every next wording of u're O.S..can't wait to read more..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, Poco! Awesome update!! Abhay hates carnations???! I love carnations!!
And Sam! I'm liking him more day by day, and not only because he's bringing out Abhay's weakness for Pia! Ok, I've just woken up from a nap so I'm really sleepy can't really think too much. This was the best part. Both their dialogues were amazing! As I said, too tired too pick up dialogues individually😛

Abhay ( looks at him sharply)- There is only one person in this whole world Sam with whom you can play NO GAMES. If you are trying to tell me that you have suddenly fallen in love with Misha's lovely skin and doe eyes, I am going to drain you out of blood rightaway!

Sambhav( raises his eyebrow)- Abhay, since when have you been noticing Misha's skin?

Abhay ( smirks )- I am a vampire. Skin and scents are basic to me. Looking at you and knowing you , I know you are going to cook a million lies on the spot about how besotted you are with Misha but am not buying any of that crap'.i can see that you want something from her and through her'.and trust me, I will find that out. In the meantime, Sambhav'.( straightens Sam's collar) ' I . AM. WATCHING. YOU.

Sambhav's expressions tighten but he says nothing. Abhay grins and opens his car door and then, with a teasing expression turns towards Sambhav.

Abhay ( clearing his throat )- By the way, Sam. I heard that you had sent some men to find out about Piya's history'..i don't know the reason though'but I took care of them. Jack is still on the loose though.

Sambhav is stunned to hear that and he looks angry and shocked at the same time.

Sambhav (furiously )- WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!....Abhay , what the hell did you do to them?

Abhay ( winks at him)- Drop in home sometime. Mom will love to tell you''( becomes stern)'.Keep away from Piya .

With this Abhay drives off and Sam stamps his feet.

Sam (screams )- Why doesn't he open an official women protection squad!....Damn him! He has captured my men.Abhay Raichand, am so gonna kill you!😆

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