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Busisiwe

@MrsNgozo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Awesome update i love it sis⭐️ 😊 i just can't wait for the next update to learn more about Maya's journey. Prakash is disgusting but what i know is what goes around comes around. I can't wait until his disgusting deeds comes and bite him on the ass 😈 then i will hope Yashu to forgive him.

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Hi Nikki 😃 spamming so when is the next exciting update???

And when are you going to reply to comments remember I am spamming so got to ask something 😆 😆

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

As usual superb update Nikki. Yash's story is heart-wrenching. He had gone through so much and his mother suffered so much because of that Prakash Sinha. Glad that Janaki was there with her in this bad phase and saved her from breaking down. It's nice that Aarti came to him and he willingly shared his past with her. Still there is one question if he suffered so much and that Prakash Sinha used his mother, then why he make such a deal with Aarti to sleep with her. Desperate to know how Yash's mother took care of him and how Yash cope when he came to know that his mother had cancer.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: sass8
Sorry for the late reply Nikky but here it is
So sad 😭and no wonder Yash is driven. He is not only running from his real heritage but also running after it to destroyed it. Prakash is the typical spoil rich man 😡 using innocent girl for his own pleasure. He went after his acquintance fianc without remorse and knowing that she could not resist. He played her. And poor Maya so innocent that she realized too late that she put her fate into the hand of an con man.

On a side note, I must say that I disapprove girl running away and hurting their parents in the name of love without thinking that the consequences are as bad for the family who are shamed, mocked and hurt by the gossip mills. She had made her bed and now she had to lie in it. It may seems harsh but its the truth. Don't get me wrong , Prakash deserve every bit of pusnishement and I will rejoiced when or if that ever happened.
That said , destiny was cruel with Maya and thus began the descent into hell , since she is no longer alive. The one silver linning is her friendship with Janaki and her love for the boys.

Good chapter Nikky

OMG! I didn't notice that you've commented 😲

Sorry about that.

Yes, Prakash went after an innocent girl and ruined her completely. Sadly Sassy I've seen couple of incidents where young boys and girls have eloped to get married. Boy or girls, family members of both have to face the consequences of their actions.

I was a little kid when some distant relative (cousin brother) eloped and married a girl from different culture. Parents had no option left but to accept the wedding. But by then both sides of the families had faced so much humiliation. Luckily they are still happily married and now their children's are also getting married.

But not everyone is lucky. That is what I'm showing in Maya's story. She blindly trusted and followed her heart. Like you said, she made her bed and had to lie in it.

I feel so bad for her. She was such an innocent soul and that monster completely ruined her.

I'll try to make sure that he also suffers 😡

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Res 😆

I wrote a short comment in page 15 😆 Nikki continue soon love this FF ⭐️ I love that you made Maya Yash's mother and she went through what I am sure many others have been through fooled by love or a conning man who was only after physical pleasure or shall I say he wanted his cake two types in fact yummy chocolate with extra sprinkles Maya and a vanilla Radha 😆 his parents are no better they are actually encouraging his behaviour as long as he is discrete
Weekend and I am spamming 😆

I'll reply on that short comment in the other post as now I'm copying you in bumping threads 😆

Thansks Sharlene for loving this complex story of AarYa 🤗

Yes, for a change I made Maya Yash's mother and not Gayatri 😆

Sadly, Maya got fooled by his father. No wonder he has become a bitter person in life. 😭

I loved your anology of Maya and Radha. Yummy chocolate cake and extra sprinkles and vanilla 🤣

Only you can make me laugh on such a serious chapter 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: cuteariya
after reading this chapter my heart broke for yash 🥺
he had worst childhood 💔
sorry to say but I didn't feel sorry for yash mom
how stupid she can be? just met stranger & fall in love more over she just runaway with him without know anything abt him
she was blind deaf in love with that ass hole she didn't even think for her families 😡
maya destroyed her life killed her families reputation & most important she destroyed yash life 😡
I don't say fall in love is crime but she should have think before runaway with that ass hole
seriously that prakash sinha & his families r really ass hole how could they just ignore all those crime that prakash did? 😡
I wish yash will get his revenge from that ass hole prakash sinha for destroyed his childhood
continue plz

Yes, Maya was stupid to fall in love with him on first meeting. We humans are such that if they had a Happy life, we would have gushed at them falling in love at first sight. But here Prakash was a devil and hence we feel anger towards Maya and not sympathy for she is the one who Trusted him blindly and stayed with him for more than four years even after she had learned half the truth.

But she is not a weak woman. The moment she learned the entire truth she left him. She didn't care what sort of life she'll have to live now, all she thought was she couldn't live with a person whose everything was as fake as his love for her.

Manita, I don't think this story is for you. As I know you like strong woman who fights for herself. So if you want to skip this story I won't mind. 😳

I'll give you other stories that you can read and enjoy 😃

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cuteariya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Yes, Maya was stupid to fall in love with him on first meeting. We humans are such that if they had a Happy life, we would have gushed at them falling in love at first sight. But here Prakash was a devil and hence we feel anger towards Maya and not sympathy for she is the one who Trusted him blindly and stayed with him for more than four years even after she had learned half the truth.

But she is not a weak woman. The moment she learned the entire truth she left him. She didn't care what sort of life she'll have to live now, all she thought was she couldn't live with a person whose everything was as fake as his love for her.

Manita, I don't think this story is for you. As I know you like strong woman who fights for herself. So if you want to skip this story I won't mind. 😳

I'll give you other stories that you can read and enjoy 😃

its sure I love strong women rather then weak helpless

I'm fed up seeing that kind of character in tv show that's why I stopped watching them

But it doesn't mean I will skip ur stories as I trust u as passing time u will make them stronger

So no way I'm gonna skip any ur stories as I love u & ur stories😃

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Nicky nice update I enjoyed reading about Yash's history his mother suffered a lot at the hands of a creep.
When one is so young and innocent one becomes a prey to sick creeps who calls themselves a play a macho playboy Maya poor girl feel victim to her innocence and hormones.
Continue soon want to read more 😆
By the way I unreserved page 13 😆

Hey Sharlene I'm replying on your second comment 😆

I'm not done with Yash's history and Maya's story

There is more to come, so much more to come and that all will be very emotional as now Maya's life after leaving Prakash will be shown.

I'll try to update soon as I know you and few others want to know what will happen next. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: CookieBee
Awesome update i love it sis⭐️ 😊 i just can't wait for the next update to learn more about Maya's journey. Prakash is disgusting but what i know is what goes around comes around. I can't wait until his disgusting deeds comes and bite him on the ass 😈 then i will hope Yashu to forgive him.

Hey Busi how are you? 🤗

You've become very scarce these days and we miss you around here.

It's was a nice surprise to read a comment from you. 😳

Maya's journey will start from the next chapter.

I don't think it'll be easy for Yash or anyone else to forgive him after the way he used Maya and ruined not only her life but Yash's too.

Let's see how this story progresses 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Hi Nikki 😃 spamming so when is the next exciting update???
And when are you going to reply to comments remember I am spamming so got to ask something 😆 😆

Hey, Spamming Queen, This is your third comment in this one chapter and I'm enjoying replying on your every comments 😆

Which means I've replied on all three comments of yours 😆