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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Thanks for updating will read tomorrow morning and comment

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sass8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Sorry for the late reply Nikky but here it is

So sad 😭and no wonder Yash is driven. He is not only running from his real heritage but also running after it to destroyed it. Prakash is the typical spoil rich man 😡 using innocent girl for his own pleasure. He went after his acquintance fianc without remorse and knowing that she could not resist. He played her. And poor Maya so innocent that she realized too late that she put her fate into the hand of an con man.

On a side note, I must say that I disapprove girl running away and hurting their parents in the name of love without thinking that the consequences are as bad for the family who are shamed, mocked and hurt by the gossip mills. She had made her bed and now she had to lie in it. It may seems harsh but its the truth. Don't get me wrong , Prakash deserve every bit of pusnishement and I will rejoiced when or if that ever happened.

That said , destiny was cruel with Maya and thus began the descent into hell , since she is no longer alive. The one silver linning is her friendship with Janaki and her love for the boys.

Good chapter Nikky

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Res 😆

I wrote a short comment in page 15 😆 Nikki continue soon love this FF ⭐️ I love that you made Maya Yash's mother and she went through what I am sure many others have been through fooled by love or a conning man who was only after physical pleasure or shall I say he wanted his cake two types in fact yummy chocolate with extra sprinkles Maya and a vanilla Radha 😆 his parents are no better they are actually encouraging his behaviour as long as he is discrete

Weekend and I am spamming 😆

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saf24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Superb update. I liked that Yash was open enough to start telling Aarti his story. Great job as always.

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ksen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

amazing part

loved it

felt bad for maya

looking forward to know how she raises yash

and what happens to her

will be waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Divya333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Nice update...Poor Maya, got cheated in the name of love...looking forward for the story... Waiting for next update

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Excellent Chapter

Man like Prakash truly gives a bad name to all men , Maya though an innocent and naive shy girl followed the rules and regulations of her parents got engaged to Raman and like any girl she perhaps thought after marriage she'll fall in love with her husband but she was introduced to Prakash on their first meeting already Maya felt goosebumps she felt this strange feeling that she never experienced with Raman there was already attraction between Maya and Prakash

though she knew she is engaged tried to fight off Prakash but its also difficult when a charming man follows and insist makes an innocent girl like Maya believe he truly loves her only its obvious she too would believe and fall deep in love , her love was pure and innocent and her reactions towards his letter made her leave her family because of her innocence she didn't think about her family image all she thought about was the man she loves I'm sure she thought later her parents would understand and accept both and Prakash but that didn't happen

while Prakas already been married played her got married to her and he knew the marriage was null and void but I somehow think and believe that Maya marrying him its her first marriage so from her side she believed its a legal marriage she kept on sacrificing because wanted her husband to become successful and his family to accept her to accept their marriage but instead Prakash was just using her playing her because he felt she is beautiful he wanted her to always stay in the dark his every move was well planned his lies his motives everything was well planned and Maya fell for everything well there was no reason for her to doubt her husband until she learned the bitter truth he was already married and even had a son his wife was pregnant too

Prakash had no remorse for whatever he did to both Maya and Yash yet he expected Maya to still stay on as his mistress yes from here on she will struggle without his money and apartment but at least she took that stand to walk away with dignity

I certainly don't blame Maya for her choices neither do I feel she was wrong anywhere now I'm looking forward to see how she struggled to grow Yash

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Mbakwe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Wow.I am hooked. Pla update soon. Thanks for keeping the forum alive.

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Fandu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Hi Nikki: First if all sorry to hear that you are not your usual self because you are dealing with some personal issues. Much blessings and my prayers and thoughts are with you and wish the best for you.

Secondly awesome update. I feel for Maya. I can understand how she would become entangled in Prakash's web of lies. She who had lead a very sheltered life and was very naive and innocent would not be able to see Prakash's cunningness. He is a bas***d who will do anything and stoop very low to get what he wants. I question Radha's character who knowingly allows her husband's affairs. Although after listening to Prakash's dad I am not surprised of Prakash's behaviour. I am happy that after learning about Prakash's true colours she walked out on him. Will wait to see how she deals with the challenges she will face as a single mother who has no family or any other support. However I am very confident that as always you will do great justice to the story. I am happy that Yash is opening up and confiding in Arti. Impatiently waiting for the next update. Hats off to you.

Above all please take care of yourself.