AarYa OS: Choices and Decisions

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

Don't know how I'll be able to comment on this Heartbreaking, Heart-wrenching story 😭

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Sorry Tess I don't think I'll ever be able to comment on this story. It brought back some painful memories. I too had lost my uncle the same way Palak died. He was on ventilators and doctors had said that he won't be revived, they suggested to remove him from ventilator as there was no point as he has gone into vegetative state.

But my Aunt didn't want to. They said that they will take the decision the next day, and that night he died.

He was my moms brother. My mom said that he didn't want his family to blame themselves for taking him off ventilator so God helped him and he breathed his last when the whole family was waiting for the next morning.

I was not there in India but I can still feel the pain of losing him. This story made me cry the way I have not cried even on hearing the news of my Uncles death. Even while writing these lines I'm crying badly. I don't know what words I have written in here as I don't have it in me to read them again. I won't even check for your reply on this comment.

I hope you will understand if I don't comment...

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surili1

@surili1

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Posted: 8 years ago

😭 very heartbreaking. Also very well written 👏.

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful Os Tessa ⭐️ once again I have to say you are a remarkable story teller ⭐️👏 and yes i read it and enjoyed ever second of it 😆

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lassekool

@lassekool

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very well written. I'm sure we all can relate to the emotions brought out in the story especially if you have lost a loved one. Well done Miss T.

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Heartbreaking OS

Couldn't stop my tears

Poor palak got leukemia at very small age

Couldn't even enjoy her childhood bcoz of her sickness

In all this process aarti neglect payal & that's really hurt payal

At least aarti heard payal conversation with yash

Bcoz of palak at least the family got happy family moments for the first time

They create beautiful memories together

But that became the last moment with palak

It was really hard time for aarya & payal but for palak they chose happiness over pain

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

emotional os

beautifully written

everyone's feelings and emotions were penned down with great care

was able to feel the emotions of all four

brilliant work

thanks for the pm

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Superb ! You have 'turned' a tragic story into a sweet , memorable one ! When you ponder over the story you remember only the sweet memories , Palak has left behind , not the earlier unpleasantness or unhappiness ,her illness created !!! Thanks for this lovely concept !

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Adama Ahmed

@chikcyy

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Tessa, this has to be your BEST piece yet. Aarti, in a labyrinth of emotions, has yet again not failed to be my favourite. Palak at a young age has to go through and endure so much pain. The father and daughter relationship between Payal and Yash is one I'm jealous of.

Reading this masterpiece while listening to Arijit Singh's Saware(Phantom) and K. Mohan's Ove Janiya(Katti Batti) made me 😭

AMAZING!!!

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bongalisoo

@bongalisoo

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

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Wonderful amazing os U really waren't kidding about the tissues, I can't put it in words how much I love this os and how it was written, I know the movie Ive watched it but i havent read the book and I have to say I like ur os better then the movie ,U were really able to put/write all the emotions one feels when U go through something like this having a sick family member and having to choice not to revive them or keep them alive cause dieing would mean them not having to suffer anymore and being in a better place , hats off to U for this beautiful piece of writing

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