AarYa OS: Choices and Decisions - Page 2

Hmm i should join the trading word. Res. Am jst speechless.

Amazing👏
Could have been title a mother love and ultimate sacrifice. They were living in a prison of their making, but what to do when your child is very sick.
Aarti is a mother and any mother would do anything to save her child. However, in the process she forgot to shower love on her second much alive, in need of a break child, Payal. The eye opener was so painful when she overheard father and daughter talk.
Yash could not deny his wife wish to conceive to save their baby, despite the consequences, even though he too wanted to save Palak, but realizing over the years that the family was breaking and Payal needed to expand beyond being a donor. He tried to maintain the peace but maybe he should have confronted the situation with his wife. However, I do like how he was there for her when she finally broke down. He knew one day it would happened and was ready to help her come to term with it.
Palak despite getting a reprieve from her sister she dearly loves, is not happy at this half-life and realizing that her baby sister life has to be about her for a change. And able to make light of a very dramatic situation.

Payal: rebellious and trying to make her mother sees her. Her act serve as a catalysis for Aarti to realize how badly she messed up but her deep fears change the direction of their lives.

At least they were able to be a family, for the first time, reconnect, therefore all the sacrifice were not made in vain. Palak gift before she left was to bond mother and daughter, because they would need each other dearly once she's gone. All Payal needed was Aarti soothing motherly touch and words to fill complete and not just a by-product to serve her sister. Of course, she loved her sister and gladly help her but the family needed to also open to each other and accept each other, faults and doubts and hope. The laughter at the water resonated with Palak who could peacefully let go and Aarti was able to make the ultimate heart wrenching motherly act, end her beloved daughter suffering.

I take back the ccc comment about not happy Aarya (although I was rethinking it, with the ending), this is about life, shade of grey, human emotion, fears, desperation and indeed how some choices can hurt the people you love the most. But it's never too late to rectify mistake or seek forgiveness.

Again I love this, it was different, captivating but mostly poetic.

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Hmm i should join the trading word. Res. Am jst speechless.

wow wow wow if they wanted to kill Aarti i would have done the honours by killing her with a butter knife for what she did to my payal. Am still heart broken. Beautiful Os sis.

Originally posted by: B-onesie

res

until when?

Originally posted by: surili1

😭very heartbreaking. Also very well written👏.

thank you Suri Su 😊

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Beautiful Os Tessa⭐️once again I have to say you are a remarkable story teller⭐️👏and yes i read it and enjoyed ever second of it😆

thank you Didi! I'm glad you did not find it sad! 😃

Originally posted by: lassekool

Very well written. I'm sure we all can relate to the emotions brought out in the story especially if you have lost a loved one. Well done Miss T.

thank you so much LK, I glad you could relate 😊

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Heartbreaking OS

Couldn't stop my tears

Poor palak got leukemia at very small age

Couldn't even enjoy her childhood bcoz of her sickness

In all this process aarti neglect payal & that's really hurt payal

At least aarti heard payal conversation with yash

Bcoz of palak at least the family got happy family moments for the first time

They create beautiful memories together

But that became the last moment with palak

It was really hard time for aarya & payal but for palak they chose happiness over pain

thank you Manita. Yes the illness caused pain, divide, and resentment but finally Palak chose to bridge those gaps and unite them... They can now move on on the strength of that one memory. Here is a hug for the tears 🤗

Originally posted by: ksen

emotional os

beautifully written

everyone's feelings and emotions were penned down with great care

was able to feel the emotions of all four

brilliant work

thanks for the pm

thank you Ksen, I'm pleased you related to all four characters. 😊

Originally posted by: premap

Superb ! You have 'turned' a tragic story into a sweet , memorable one ! When you ponder over the story you remember only the sweet memories , Palak has left behind , not the earlier unpleasantness or unhappiness ,her illness created !!! Thanks for this lovely concept !

thank you so much Premap 😊 that was the idea and I'm glad I was able to capture it!