Originally posted by: Tessaloni
Res!
Edited!
Indeed, hers and hers alone! there are no more ghosts between... everything that happened on this journey was always bringing them closer together. Every diamond needs polishing before it can shine after all, isn't it?
But what I loved about this piece is that you penned exactly how I imagined Yash to feel through it all, and you did it so poetically! the poet in you came through and I could feel every emotion very vividly, I could imagine him pouring out his soul to her, baring himself to her so she could see his heart, at last. see that it was beating only for her, no one else...
If only we had hindsight in the present, we could do so many things differently; but then, what would happen to that experience?
Aaman was brought onto their path to make him realize that he was fooling himself. He felt possessive, he felt jealous, he wanted her to be the same way with him, he wanted to be the reason for her laughter... he had to ask himself why, and the answer was one he could not admit...
He went berserk and hurt her so much, but in not lashing back, she made him question yet again... why was it that her moods affected him? then she left him, that's when he could no longer deny the blatant truth even when he could not voice it yet... not until what was meant to break them finally brought them closest to each other, finally made him confess. it does not even matter that their circumstances aren't ideal, it does not matter that they are now outcasts... all that matters is that they have each other. they are simply happy knowing that nothing can ever come between them again.
Now they are not just the best co-parents, now they are the best of friends, the best of lovers, and everything in between. Now any place that the other is at, is home, because it has nothing to do with the physical, but really to do with what they have come to mean to each other. The knowledge that they will always return home where the other is... very profound Honey-Bee!
I loved it as I told you, I have read it quite a few times and still did not have enough poetic, heartfelt, BEAUTIFUL! ❤️
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a wonderful and blessed happy birthday to Neli! May the day be filled with love, laughter, and life's beauty! 🤗
Happy birthday to you once again, Leelorh...
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