PV OS - MY GOODBYE - Chapter 2 page 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I can't type long replies at the office

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Posted: 8 years ago
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A beautiful piece. The memories, stories, expression all just so beautiful. I loved every bit of it. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Regrets. 😕 such a difficult feelings to carry.
Regrets at having misbehaved with his wife, regret of not treating her like a human being, regret at blaming her for his confused state, regrets of not helping her with the kids and the family when she did not abide by some rules, regrets of not fullfiling his marital vows, regrets at being blind to her needs and wishes but above all regrets at having deeply hurt her.

...but thankfully for Yash, he stops fighting against his own feeling and starts recognizing the treasure in his life. She forgave him his initial cold shoulder attitude and inconsiderate behavior toward her little boy, she did not take offense when he humiliated her in front of everyone when she was only trying to help a little girl, excused him when he committed the ultimate sin by blaming her for a perfectly normal union between man and wife, incidentally taking advantage of her inebriated state.

...she only left relieving him of his vow so he did not hurt more culminating in pouring her feelings into her goodbye letter for the good of their precious child.

..but in the end, it finally registered into his thick 😊 brain that he needs her like he needs air to breathe and when he commit he does indeed. What a declaration of love, when he stood up against his father and acted like a true husband, man and father.

👏 wonderful Bee
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Beautiful os!!

Very well written..

Thank you😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

dear r u gonna continue?

Sorry, it was only supposed to be a one piece. I only did the 2nd part because of requests.

So that was the last part.
Edited by B-onesie - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: CookieBee

awesome story I loved it.

Thank you so much😃

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