PV OS - MY GOODBYE - Chapter 2 page 4

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Hum, no pm 🤔, I almost missed this. 😭
A summary of sort of their struggle to create a long lasting relationship. The road to understanding, acceptance and love has not be easy at all. At first the kids binding them together, then the slow discovery of their personality, the start of liking each other, the misunderstanding, the hurt, the sacrifice the destiny events , the hope, the love. They went through it all.
This was the sadess emotion I felt reading this goodbye letter: "my already non existent self-esteem plummeted to an all time low.." . I know there are so many moments that will stay with me watching PV, but I vividlely remenber that scene with the Pallu being stuck on the car, it was so intense full of unsaid with the perfect song highlighting the scene.

Beautiful OS Bee, well written, I truly enjoyed it .

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Fandu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

B what a goodbye letter. It summarized all of the events that happened in their lives, and Arti's count of their journey so far. I would love to see Yash's reaction to the letter, through his self talk and what was going through his mind. What do you say!!!

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Themmy
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Although I was scared of the tittle before seeing the os in front, thought you were also leaving😭

B i too had the sam e reaction when i saw the title🤣🤣

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: premap
Fab. The letter has covered almost all of the serial ! Very well written . It will be interesting to continue with Yash's reaction to this letter. Thanks

I second this 😃

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Fandu
B what a goodbye letter. It summarized all of the events that happened in their lives, and Arti's count of their journey so far. I would love to see Yash's reaction to the letter, through his self talk and what was going through his mind. What do you say!!!

See B we want more want more 😆😆

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: bongalisoo
Awww what a wonderfully sad os ,I wanted to read more and know yash reaction ,anywho U said everything that I thought aarti should have said to yash,its a really beautiful os 👏

Agreed with this comment 😆

We want more 😆😆😆 Yash's reaction 😆😆

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hi B I know that i am greedy 😆 but i have been gone for almost six weeks now trying to catch up 😆 I love your stories and this one is awesome Aarti's reaction/emotions all in one update she had to put some distance between herself and Yash because that is what he thinks he wants. Yash is still fooling himself beliving that the dead Aripta is the most important person in his life and refusing to acknowledge what is right in front of him or maybe his changing emotions for Aarti all because he want to stay loyal to a dead woman.This letter is a wake up call for him to acknowledge the feelings he has for both Aarti and Ansh, and do something about it.

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ShonaGc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Amazing os
You make me sad now make me happy with yash pov please

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jhil

@jhillyarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

I hope you once again find a love like the one you had with Arpita

How painful the line is. It actually pained my heart and lot when I read it. I mean how it would hurt her while saying or writing. Saying this to the man whom you love like anything.. it is torture, more than torture.

I must say you put your heart in it completely.. The situation for her was so complicated that he had to take the step which is not right also. Actually I wanted Aarti to leave and Yash to suffer and realise her place and importance in his life.

The way she accepted every thing, said everything, every little things, Every little feelings, every little expectations she had with him it was just enough to make your eyes moist. Though she expected very little from him but I have doubt that she got even forty percent of what you expected.. She expected love and acceptance for her Ansh which he got but there was more expectations too which she never exprested. ..

One thing which I noticed that is Aarti recorded a message for Yash which he never got and later Yash put a message for her on TV that also she never heard. I would like to see the reactions, the real and pure reaction. I hope you understand the hint..

And I am really not taking it as end, better you hurry up and give us the thing we want..

I hope I kept my promise now it's your turn.

And I must say I hope I could handle something from PV brilliantly like you did..