AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth'

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: palbhar
My dear Nikki...truly loved it!!! Liked the waves of emotion Yash went through when he heard the divorce truth and the joy when he heard her love for him...this is the Yash I love and adore!!!

The best for me was to know that this is Yash 's first KC...he never did it for Arpita!!! 😛

Thanks Bharthi.

It was pointless to show him get angry and go hulk once again, so I showed that he immediately heard Aarti's true confession and her true feelings for him.

That's why he also acted rationally this time.

And yes even I loved the fact that this was his first KC also. In fact it was both of theirs first KC, in the real sense. Hence the title 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Leevi05
loved
awesome update as usual
waiting for ff update

Thanks Leevi 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ns1970
Loved it Nikki amazing as always a lot of ups and down emotions but at the end it's always prefect 👍🏼
PLEASE PLEASE continue soon with MTB i'm just waiting to hear aarti's side to this

Thank NS for loving this OS 😛

And I've updated MTB 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: mick89
Im silent reader...
Nice update😊

Wow!!!!!!😉

Welcome to My world of AarYaland 🤗

Thanks for breaking your silence and finally commenting 😳

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: melodica
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its beautiful Nikki di...👏👏
all those promises...OMG...
continue wid MTB nd dont loose ur interest coz ur readers r only 2 increase...u r a wonderful writer indeed !!⭐️🤗

Thanks Aish 😛

I'm so glad that I was to take you to dream world with so many promises 😳

Thanks for your encouraging words Aish 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
Great update nikki di...👏👏👏
Awesome os...
Even i expected in the serial that yash heard from their talk...So happy after reading this os.
Liked the way yash heard the aarti confrontation and her confession to shoba..Liked the way he didn't get angry to aarti and understood her..
Yash-Dubey conversation nice..The way he told to them its their first karva chauth and also he wants ansh also to be their home...So wonderfully written...
Loved aarya Vrath breaking scene...
Aarti was surprised yash nature and yash assured her to say full truth..That was lovely part
Aarya promises scene so amazing and cute...Liked yash naughty..and loved their moment
Fantastic ending
Once again superb os
Thanks for pm🤗

Sri I'm so happy that I've become a writer, cause now I can write on the scenes tags I so wanted to see in PV but never got to see them. This is my way of fulfilling my AarYa dreams.

This is what I wanted to see in PV, Yash hearing everything and not freaking out, like he always did. Poor Aarti had to suffer every time. This way he was more understating towards her.

I'm also happy with the fact that you loved all the scenes, which are my favorite also.

Love you Sri. And take care of yourself ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: saf24
Nikki this was simply fantastic. I was glad you wrote this scene in a different light with Yash actually overhearing Shobha and Aarti's conversation so that he could realise how much she loves him and the fact that hiding the truth was not really something she wanted to do. Beautifully written as always. Loved every bit of it.

Thanks Saf

I always hated it that Yash always reacted in a hulk mode, whenever Aarti made a blunder. He never tried to give her a chance for explanation. So this was my way of showing what I really wanted to see in PV at one point or the other.