AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth' - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tleshni

hey there Nikki..

Liked this OS of yours alot👏...since it's an alternate version of what the Cvs gave us..sans all the drama😆... I liked how Yash wasnt all Hulk mode after getting to know the truth and he truly redeemed himself by accepting Aarti's flaws as well...

it gave me a warm feeling to know that Aarya didnt do the deed that day itself..but decided to get to know each other..I can already imagine hw cute they will b if they go for dates etc..😉..Anyway thanks again for this OS...😃..hope to see similar stuff...

Thanks Tleshni for reading and commenting 😛

I tried to cut all the drama, we already had enough of it in PV 😆. We had more than our share of Yash's hulk mode dose. So no more in this OS 😆

In this OS I felt that AarYa still have to discover and learn about each other. That's why I stopped then from moving ahead in their relationship. This is a one part OS, so I won't write anything about them going in a date.
Will try my best to write more AarYa stuff 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: anu93

Hey Nikki Thats such a Awesomeee part yaar😳
I like this understanding matured Yash who is ready to listen Aarti's side and accept her with that👍🏼
Best part was that confession part 😳 So sweet of Yashuu😳
Naughty Yashu want 50 to 100 kisses each day as Aarti's punishment!!☺️
Nikki dear plzz continue with this OS soon

Hey Anu, 🤗
I think you're commenting for the first time on any of my stories 😲, welcome to my world of AarYaland 🤗

I love this understanding and mature Yashu , he was so understanding that he gave 100 kisses as a punishment to Aarti 😆 ☺️

Sorry Anu this was a one part OS, but you can read my other works, if you are interested 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

Thanks Sara 😛

Originally posted by: gafulu14

wow interesting n keep move on

Thanks Alka, yes I'll keep on moving forward with my stories 😛


Thanks Meenu 😛


Thanks ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Ken309

Omg, this was really a good one.
Really wish something like this did happen in the show..
and really hope u do continue on your other stories soon, u are really a talented writer *hugs*

Thanks Ken

OMG we all wished the same thing, but we never got any such scenes.
Yes I'll continue we all my other stories 😛, thanks for the compliment and encouragement 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sb1410

Hi Nikki love your version of KC this is what I wished PV had instead of that Prashant tract, so happy yash overheard the conversation and realize the intentions of the Dubeys, I love the possessive Yash who staked his claim on his wife and son, Aarti told yash the truth simply put , no unnecessary drama and her punishment 🤢 50 -100 kisses daily now that is a lot of work 😆

Thank you so much Sharlene for loving my version of KC track.
Didn't we all hated Prashant track so much , ruined the whole show, which resulted in the abrupt senseless ending

Yash is a very passionate man (loved this side of him 🤢) once he makes something or someone his, he won't hesitate to claim his stake also, without caring who is standing in front of him 😳

Poor Aarti will be tired at the end of the day, fulfilling her promise 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Awww!! This was lovely!

Thanks Iqra 😛

Originally posted by: nan0102

fabulous OS,,totally awesome..really enjoy reading it so much..👍🏼

Thanks Nan 😛


Thanks 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow the Karva Chauth was such a amazing yet memorable and sweet occasion

a really beuautiful story

Thanks Taahir.
It became a sweet and memorable evening for them, as Aarti confessed and told him everything. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

OMG Nikki Di what have you done ...😲...you said that you are not in the mood of writing and here you have grabbed all my attention by your awesome writing again...😳😳😳
This is first time when I have read about KC though I know much about this festival but I have never read any OS on it.SO I must say that you have made my first time even more special...👏
Di though I loved PV more than anything but it's also true that my suffocation about the show began with KC episode and after that it only increased with the continuous lies .May u or someone be upset with my bold confession but it's true.After MU rack I was so upset with Yash for his hulk mood.With the passing of each and every episode my anger was increasing for him but I never felt such suffocation that I felt with the continuous lies of Prashant track .But I wanna thank you from the core of my heart for writing something on this track and making it just perfect with the touch of love and trust that is the base of any relation specially in husband and wife's relation I think love and trust play the role of soul and heart but our CVs have made a fun of this and may be that can be the reason we have lost our lovable show PV so early...😭😭😭
After reading your OS I just felt that I wish you were there in the writing team of PV...I wish I could see such scenes in PV episodes...such revelation of Arti's past...such confession of her love...such intensity of of Yashu's love (Though we save seen it later but along with the fear of Ishita..😡😡)...kash humein ek mouka mil jata in sabhi palo ko ekbaar aur jine ka...kash...😭😭😭
Each and every line...each and every emotion that you habe put in this OS is just perfect Di...👏.It was like a wonderful KC special episodes for me which I can see again and again..😳😳😳
The promises of Yash just brought big smile in my face...and that promise of 50 kisses made me🤢.
I alz wanted to see Yash and Arti like this coz actually PV means to us a lot (I cant express it in words) and you have just portrayed a perfect picture of PV before us ...you have presented the character of Yash and Arti in the most amusing and perfect way...👏
I am not faking di but I really feel that you are a perfectionist when comes the question of writing related Arya...👏.SO never try to stop writing coz it will be an immense loss for all of us which we wont be able to bear...😭😭😭
And I am extremely sorry if any word or expression of my comments have hurt u coz I alz wanna see you happy and smiling and you know that...😳😳😳
Last but not the least a big Jaddo ki Jhappi for our angel of PV forum ..our lovable Nikki Di..🤗

Mukti don't you know by now, what kind of a crazy person I'm 😆. Even I don't know what I've done
Just kidding 😆

It was my first time also to write something on KC, ☺️

Mukti I'm with you when you saw that after this, the whole PV went downhill 👎🏼. First Prashant's entry ruined everything, and then what was leftover, was ruined by Ishita's entry and then later Aakash and Radha.
But what's done is done, except for crying, we can't do anything about it 😭

So through writing, I fulfill my wish for the stuff that I wanted to see in PV.


The 100 kisses scene, well I don't know how it came into my mind, 😆, poor Aarti, her whole day will go in keeping her promise 😆

Hundreds of hugs to you also, my DQ ❤️ 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Wow Pooja, it's beautiful.

Thanks for this ❤️




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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice os.thanks for pm

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