AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth'

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: palbhar
Looking forward Nikki...and please, do not lose interest on the other works... I'm so looking forward to MTB, YAMR and BOY updates!!!!

Bharthi I might delay the updates, but I'll never abandon any of my works. That much I can promise you.

So I'm sorry in advance for the delay in the updates 😭

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Hi Nikki love your version of KC this is what I wished PV had instead of that Prashant tract, so happy yash overheard the conversation and realize the intentions of the Dubeys, I love the possessive Yash who staked his claim on his wife and son, Aarti told yash the truth simply put , no unnecessary drama and her punishment 🤢 50 -100 kisses daily now that is a lot of work 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ksfan2
nice one..loved this too...good work di

Thanks so much 😛

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Lovely os,lvd it.

Thanks so much 😛

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shalini28
loved it di.😃
u better continue with ur works otherwise I am not going to talk with u 😡 and I am damn serious about it😡

Don't get angry Shalu Ma, I won't leave any one my work. I love them the way you love them ❤️

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

superb write up nikki di⭐️👏⭐️

i am glad yash heard Aarti's confession nd her love for him which cooled down his confused emotions😕😳
i love aarti's determination here,😳 she wasn't blackmailed with d dubeys now, i used to hate their blackmails in PV which made aarti delayed in telling Yash the truth

love the fact that aarti said she believed this is her first Karva Chauth😃 true😊

superman Yash caught his wife aww! love how he prefered breaking his fast at their home and he wants his full family😉

love the pooja and break fast/dinner scene so cute feeding each other😛

poor aarti she taught yash will react like post mumbai when he knew bits of her confession but glad he listened to her calmly nd his punishment hmm.. oh Yashji😆 100😲🤣

enjoyed reading it dear awesome..loved it❤️
keep it up di, nd thanx for d pm😳

ur note dear @ d beginning, i won't say anything because u have updated, i think u got lots of threats😆 but please don't do that again di, it will breaks our heart okay? we re with u until we see the last chapter of MTB, YAMR, BOY😊.forever and all ur future write ups.😊

Edited by billieberry - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
An excellently written Karwa Chauth Special Nikki...
A fast without a Promise - a true one towards one's soul mate - is baseless...

This was great..the beautiful moments of love, trust, patience to hear out and listen and accept the circumstances under which certain things are done...not meant to hurt at all...

Loved it dear...

Yash is such a sweet heart to give Aarti the chance to come up with the truth

Great OS!

Thanks Shanti.

Agre with you, that a fast without a promise is baseless. And here Yash made her promise so many things. Which will only strengthen their relationship, as he himself was making those promises along with her.

I tried to show a different side of Yash. One who is more understanding and more patient. Because of which Aarti was able to confess everything without holding back.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wow the Karva Chauth was such a amazing yet memorable and sweet occasion

a really beuautiful story

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

@nusratjahan505

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

OMG Nikki Di what have you done ...😲...you said that you are not in the mood of writing and here you have grabbed all my attention by your awesome writing again...😳😳😳
This is first time when I have read about KC though I know much about this festival but I have never read any OS on it.SO I must say that you have made my first time even more special...👏
Di though I loved PV more than anything but it's also true that my suffocation about the show began with KC episode and after that it only increased with the continuous lies .May u or someone be upset with my bold confession but it's true.After MU rack I was so upset with Yash for his hulk mood.With the passing of each and every episode my anger was increasing for him but I never felt such suffocation that I felt with the continuous lies of Prashant track .But I wanna thank you from the core of my heart for writing something on this track and making it just perfect with the touch of love and trust that is the base of any relation specially in husband and wife's relation I think love and trust play the role of soul and heart but our CVs have made a fun of this and may be that can be the reason we have lost our lovable show PV so early...😭😭😭
After reading your OS I just felt that I wish you were there in the writing team of PV...I wish I could see such scenes in PV episodes...such revelation of Arti's past...such confession of her love...such intensity of of Yashu's love (Though we save seen it later but along with the fear of Ishita..😡😡)...kash humein ek mouka mil jata in sabhi palo ko ekbaar aur jine ka...kash...😭😭😭
Each and every line...each and every emotion that you habe put in this OS is just perfect Di...👏👏👏👏.It was like a wonderful KC special episodes for me which I can see again and again..😳😳😳
The promises of Yash just brought big smile in my face...and that promise of 50 kisses made me🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢.
I alz wanted to see Yash and Arti like this coz actually PV means to us a lot (I cant express it in words) and you have just portrayed a perfect picture of PV before us ...you have presented the character of Yash and Arti in the most amusing and perfect way...👏👏👏👏
I am not faking di but I really feel that you are a perfectionist when comes the question of writing related Arya...👏 👏👏👏.SO never try to stop writing coz it will be an immense loss for all of us which we wont be able to bear...😭😭😭
And I am extremely sorry if any word or expression of my comments have hurt u coz I alz wanna see you happy and smiling and you know that...😳😳😳
Last but not the least a big Jaddo ki Jhappi for our angel of PV forum ..our lovable Nikki Di..🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by nusratjahan505 - 11 years ago