AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth' - Page 4

Originally posted by: roserosey

di 🤗❤️🤗...
before reading ur update i never knew that karvachauth could be this wonderful and now i really wish how we could have seen such a beautiful karvachauth between aarti and yash😳😳...

beautiful wonderful awesome👏...
i loved it di just loved it😳😳...
best part of the update is the promises that aarthi made to yash⭐️..ha i n between the lifetime promises they made this naughty yash and his naughty promises😉😆😆...omg 50-100😲☺️🤢...poor aarthi is dead..she made her promise thinking that it is a easy task...😉

another best part is how yash talked to shoba maa and dubey indirectly he staked his claim on aarthi and ansh .i loved it di i always wanted yash to talk like this😳😳...

amazing di amazing i dont have words to say now⭐️

and regarding ur special note:
di i already told u that pls keep ur mind peaceful and think abt us the MTB lovers u know na di amongst all ur works i love MTB more😃😃...i m unable to bear the fact that u r loosing interest😭😭.i dont know how to inspire u to start writing MTB again😕...but pls di for the sake of readers atleat u start writing MTB😃...
i m waiting for the update of MTB ...and u cant ignore my request/wish/demand😃...
all the best di👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: Abie10

Nikki, Fab Fab OS!👏👏

Loved how yash learnt the whole truth from Aarti-Shobha convo and at the same time heard those words on how his Aarti ji loves him and only him. He had so much emotions in him but the confessions by his Aarti ji make him forget all the betrayal and lies. He was there to hold her when she lost her balance and loved those assuring words to always be by her side.😳😳

Do I just love how he told Shobha that its their first Karva Chauth so he'll take his wife and son home and do all the rituals at their home only.

Their pooja which follows by that revelation from Aarti was awesome. She was surprise that he knew part of the truth but was still calm. Hehe, with all the promises which were all spot on and naughty ones. Hayye...they kissed!☺️☺️ Was loving the bold Aarti who wasn't shy.😉😉

Awesome..awesome Nikki!❤️

You better update the other stories before..you know me na!😡😡😭

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Beautifully written dear. Loved the part where Yashji overhears the conversation and how he deals with his emotion and later how he set things to make the flow easier for his Artiji. The power of 'Love' worked and the number of promises set rolling - only to be embraced later with passion. Once again Nikki - well done !

Do you really need a kick of words for encouragement - you better read your own OS - once again - don't look out - it is very much there. 🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Abie this is my 18,700th post, and it's for you 🤗

Abie I always wondered what would've happened if Yash had heard their conversation? So I wrote on it. And it wanted to use the cliched scene that he heard and MU happened and he lashed at Aarti. So I immediately showed that he heard Aarti's full confession and learned that she loves him and only him (this saved me writing one more chapter 😆)

He made his claim on his Aartiji but holding her and protecting her from falling down and then giving that reply to Shobha Ma 👏

Even I loved their Pooja, promises and the bold Aarti 😉

Originally posted by: caller123

Another fabulous work from you Nikki! I wish we were lucky to see in this PV.

I really loved the way you showed how Yash get to know about her past.

Wow I loved the way Yash told Dubeys he wants his wife his son and his family to be his side always . I love this possessiveness Nikki!

I was like

Breaking fast was awesome.😳

You have portrayed Aarthi's guiltyness perfectly and love how Yash made her to made break her fast and how Yash admit how he always jumped in to the conclusions with Aarthi but at last Aarthi is correct.

I really wanted Yash to say these dialogues in PV too. But we were not lucky enough for that.

Their romance.🤢

At last they started anew life in the KC day.

Thanks a lot Nikki for sharing this wonderful OS with us.

A big hug from me to you.🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Kate we were so unlucky in so many scenes and tracks in the real PV 😒

This was always my vision to see such scene in PV, so I wrote on it. Without showing that Yash MU Aarti and then went all hulk on her, this is what I wanted to always see, in PV. I'm happy that you all loved it.

And what better day to start their new life than the KC day

And a bug hug to you too 🤗, for being there with me ❤️

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Kate good news for you. I'm working on MTB. I've finished half of the update. So chances are there that you'll get it by tomorrow 😳

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Rose Rose Rosey 🤗

Thank you thank you thank you 😳

Even I didn't knew that KC can be this beautiful. But it has to be beautiful as our AarYa are in it.

The promises came pouring while I was writing. So even I loved the end result, as it added to the beauty of the whole scene ☺️

Aarti is intelligent, instead of promising for 100 kisses, she said that she'll try her best to keep that promise 😉. Who knows she'll end up giving him more than that 🤢 😆

Rosey Yash made his claim in front of Dubey's thus indirectly telling them that in future they won't be able to manipulate Aarti is any way. 👏

Regarding the special note, well MTB update is under process and is half ready 😳

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Kate good news for you. I'm working on MTB. I've finished half of the update. So chances are there that you'll get it by tomorrow 😳