AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth'

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

This was such a sweet OS Nikki.

However did Yash always manage to miss all the critical conversations in the show?? Pathetic timing! So i like the change here - he finds out the truth and the more relevant bit about Arti loving him while she discusses with Shobha. And oh - i loved the way he gently, but firmly over-ruled the Dubeys and took his family back with him.

I found your index!! Now i have to catch up with your other stories too.

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ksen
very nice os.thanks for pm

Thanks 😛

And you're welcome 😳

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: kdsubs
This was such a sweet OS Nikki.

However did Yash always manage to miss all the critical conversations in the show?? Pathetic timing! So i like the change here - he finds out the truth and the more relevant bit about Arti loving him while she discusses with Shobha. And oh - i loved the way he gently, but firmly over-ruled the Dubeys and took his family back with him.

I found your index!! Now i have to catch up with your other stories too.

OMG Kat, I can't believe it's you 🤗

After a long time saw you here.

OMG Kat, I always hated it whenever Yash missed those conversations. And even if he ever heard them, he misinterpreted them and went into hulk mode.

This is what I wanted to see for a change. So I wrote my own version.

And take your time to read my other stories. They are increasing in numbers, every week 😆

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: billieberry
superb write up nikki di⭐️👏⭐️

i am glad yash heard Aarti's confession nd her love for him which cooled down his confused emotions😕😳
i love aarti's determination here,😳 she wasn't blackmailed with d dubeys now, i used to hate their blackmails in PV which made aarti delayed in telling Yash the truth

love the fact that aarti said she believed this is her first Karva Chauth😃 true😊

superman Yash caught his wife aww! love how he prefered breaking his fast at their home and he wants his full family😉

love the pooja and break fast/dinner scene so cute feeding each other😛

poor aarti she taught yash will react like post mumbai when he knew bits of her confession but glad he listened to her calmly nd his punishment hmm.. oh Yashji😆 100😲🤣

enjoyed reading it dear awesome..loved it❤️
keep it up di, nd thanx for d pm😳

ur note dear @ d beginning, i won't say anything because u have updated, i think u got lots of threats😆 but please don't do that again di, it will breaks our heart okay? we re with u until we see the last chapter of MTB, YAMR, BOY😊.forever and all ur future write ups.😊

Thanks Billie 🤗

If Yash had left from there, he'd have missed the rest of Aarti's confession and might've gone in the hulk mode. But luckily he listened and calmed down.

Not only that he made it clear to Dubey's that they can't intimidate Aarti anymore.

Aarti either was never determined to tell him the truth. Or when she was determined, her timing was wrong. Like during their marriage and then when she massaged his head, and he went to sleep.

Glad it happened this way. At least Yashji got her to make a promise for 100 kisses daily 😆

And sorry to scare you with my note. But no matter how much I panic, I'll never leave any of my works midway. I love them so much. Especially MTB ❤️

Love you sweetie for showing me your support and encouraging me ❤️

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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🌹Vinnas💙Chandu🌹

@vinnas

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

nikki di i unreserved my place in pg 3,,,hope you like it...

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Wow this is such a great OS ...

Love every part of it ...

Keep up the good work ..

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Good work nikki liked a lot.

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

nikki omg omg wat a os dear loved it to the core as one of kind of hidden desire to make yash know every thing on KC n you did it man

how his anger subdued in the 3 musical words from his lady love and then taking her all worries in his embrace n ready to fight with her her past demons

n then while driving he realized wat aarti bear in his craziness n later his promise to his mother aww

their cute moment while completing their KC rituals n then necklace one ..issshhh

yashji long finger on aarti trembled lips😳 n then her self lighten in front of the men she loved the most n he n his punishment all any lady can ask for

again golden words repeated to hear it for eternity n then without inhibitions they met

well may be hear health may not bring them to their peak but the desire to be for each other is beyond this n that what yash words echoes

oh really you are turning out to be so brillian at your work i just drown myself in aaryalnad thks sweet for this wonderful os👏👏

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: vinnas

just loved it❤️ to the core di it was a beautiful phrase nd in pv also they shown yash mature nd his dailogues beautiful in the way👏👏👏 ...
⭐️⭐️..you taken a beautiful place to explore the entire situation under control😊😊 the karvachouth really came a biggest festival for aarthi👍🏼,,,,yash taken a sweet way to regret from aarti from her guilt.😭...all the all was very beautiful,👏👏👍🏼,,,,,love❤️ care ❤️understanding❤️ so beautiful nd dutyful...aarti confess all truth to yash in right time👍🏼...
yash hears all ther convo in kitchen nd control himself so well 👏👏then he feels aartis pain 😭
yash stand by aarti nd ther romance🤢 ...ther cute promises 😳😳soo lovely😊😊
you written all so well that we fall in love with them🤗
this type os are very much needed us to feel refresh like you di😳😳
hope you come up with more for us🤗
waiting for another beautiful journey soon by you