Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 61

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Ehh Indu ⭐️ ⭐️ you are awesome, superb update 👏 👏 Aarti family are horrible just want to get rid of her to anyone Dubey is the worst of all. Aww her convo on the phone gave her the courage to refuse the proposal. Love love the update continue soon.

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Yupiee..Me first 😛

Great update 👏

" Holding me up'...from within

You helped me to begin."

Awesome lines..So touching 👍🏼

omg😲..Pandit died😭 😭..so shocking...Poor aarti..😭

bua how dare again hurting aarti and blames that was her curse.Bua was totally sick she burnt her painting also😡 😡

Glad that radhama able to save finished painting.Loved painting descriptions.👏 👏.

he Gita lay open at the tenth chapter, as a pair of reading glasses lay on it (exactly like Panditji's). Next to the book lay a brush and a pen as a girl's hand reaches across to pick them. On the upper right side, a haloed, smiling Panditji stands against a bright light, his hand raised in blessing.-Just superb 👍🏼

I myself imagining the painting looks.😳

Wow aarti topped😃..Again aarti's family so disgusting😡 😡..happy that aarti got a chance to complete her graduation.⭐️

naanimaasi and yash were angels in aarti's life❤️..First yash made aarti confidence and able to voice out against her family and naanimaasi gives freedom to her👏 👏

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Radha...thanks pal. I really appreciate your words there. 🤗You have no idea how happy it makes me to have someone point out the ares they liked. It relieves me in a way.😳

Yes, this was the end of the first leg of the journey into Aarti's past...the final leg would be her meeting with Yash and thereafter.

Originally posted by: ksfan2

beautiful...superb writing..feeling sad for aarthi

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: sara1990

wonderful update...

Feel sad for Aarti's poor childhood...

Hope she meet Yash soon

Thanks Sara.

I'll touch a bit on Yash's journey upto the moment he finally meets Aarti...and then take the story forward with that convergence.😊

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Arati's family is just horrible. They just want to get rid of her in any way. More than her family only her father is responsible for her pain. How can he be so selfish that he don't even want to see his and Shobha's child. He don't want to love that child for whom Shobha even let go of her life. What kind of love is that he has for Shobha? or does he really love her? If he loved her he would have loved that last sign of her, their Arati.

It was very amazing how Yash understood Arati even without her speaking, they were connected with their silence also. I am really happy that Yash's advice had such a great effect on Arati that, for the first time she stood up for herself and glad that nannimassi came at the correct time to save Arati.

Those lines in bold Asha...exactly. How can he call it love when he can't even behold the child of that love? That's possessiveness to the obsessive degree and being completely self-centered. Given his twisted views on love, one wonders whether Shobha was really happy. After all she risked her life to have this child. She must have lacked something for her to want a child so badly, against his wishes and against her health.

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update

super

poor aarti

update soon

Thanks Leevi.😊

Just read the last two updates and it was so heart touching and heart melting updates. Aarti was not just emotionally abused, she also suffered physical abuse coming from her own family. Thanks to her naanimaasi and her Radhama who serve as her savior just in the right time not to mention Yash also.. OMG, your such a brilliant writer to make your readers crave for more...