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cynthiagem

@cynthiagem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Woh! What a relief that Aarti was saved at last! Yehey! For that escape and the unexplainable feeling of connection of Yash with Aarti as he advised her to make a stand for decisions she has to make for a new life. Yehey too for that inner strength that came to fore while she stood her ground and gave voice to what she wants to happen and do with her life (though inwardly quaking).

Looking forward to the next chapter. Always in awe of how you are able to vividly tell your tale. Thanks again !

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PADMA VARANASI

@padmavar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Poor Aarti, I feel so sorry for her. She loved her Panditji.
Bua should be ashamed of herself.
Fantastic update.

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Oh god Indu ji... I need a hug from you! 🤗 I really love this part as it is awesome.. 👏👏

I loved the starting lines.. 👏👏 The lines are so touching.. I am sad for Aarti as I got to know that Panditji has gone too far from her life! He had passed away.. 😭😭 My god.. The drawing.. 👏 Aarti will never left us without surprises from her fantastic drawings.. 👏👏

This buaji... She is so 🤬!! She should be so shame of herself of doing that to Aarti and speaking rudely to her.. 😡😡

Aww.. Yash! Again he acted like a silent hero in Aarti's life.. Saving her from 'danger' which are upcoming in her life.. I'm glad he had helped her in expressing herself towards others.. 😳

I'm just excited for more.. This is so beautiful! 👏👏👏 Thanks for the PM and update! Brilliant ji.. 🤗

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Superb update Indu. The journey through Aarti's past is amazing as you have higlighted the major events that have impacted on who she is today. Loved the bit with her and Yash where unknowingly they communicated through silence and somehow she has an impact on him without him even seeing her. Fantastic job as usual. Loved every bit of it.

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ns1970

@ns1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Wow another wonderful update I'm feeling so bad for aarti but also happy she is getting out of that hell whole .but what about yash and Bhopal?

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mitul

@123mitul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

poor aarti...thank god!!..she is saved!!

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Very Nice Update Indu

I feel sorry for Aarti

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kinny_ranvir

@kinny_ranvir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

great update..

pandit dadu dies..malti married n went away..but so good of her to help Arti in academics...

naanimaasi ji y didnt u come early...to save Arti..poor girl..
wow Yash advice to arti..great...

hate her father...

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sia221

@sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Phew...!! That was some update...Indu...!!

I sensed Pandit dadu is going to die in this one.. I was even abt to request u to.. not do so... in the last update...for Aarti will be all alone then...but I guess it was required in the story...and I can see..all her past ties.. relations that mattered to her...have gone.. nothing left for her...so she is leaving for good...😊

Yash yet again.. makes an entry.. and makes a difference in Aarti's life...!! 😊

Its interesting.. that suddenly Aarti decides to speak up.. just after Yash's advice..who had otherwise accepted her destiny.. and believed that she deserves all this.. !! what made her do that...??

I feel Aarti does have a self righteous streak in her.. just muffled.. hidden beneath the layers of all the sadness,misery...she had to take...and Yash is kind of a trigger to unleash.. to remind her that...!! Am I making any sense... ok.. will stop here...!! 😆

Hail to Naanimasi...!!

Very nice.. Indu.. Thanks and Do continue...!! 😊