Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 45

Originally posted by: sara1990

Awesome update

Feel Sad for Aarti

Thanks for the PM

Thanks Sara.😊

Originally posted by: Surish

Absolutely superb piece of writing that kept me fully enthralled throughout!Kudos to you dear!

Thank you so much Surish...Missed your cute card this time.😳

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thank you so much Radha...I hope you didn't mind my using your name for a character.😳

Well, this is how Aarti's childhood when on the one hand she had her own family trampling on her self-worth and making her feel like an offender, and on the other hand she had people like Brij and his family, Radhama, Pandit dadu, Malti, and her school mates all treating her nicely, caring for her, and giving her the love that she so lacked.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

wonderful update Indu 👏⭐️

what a painful past of aarti, 😭How could a father blame his innocent daughter?💔 and the whole family are ignorant😲 about the little girl aarti, 😔
but i am happy aarti uncle hired radhama to take care of the little girl.

the yash and aarti 👍🏼interaction so sweet❤️ this is the best and sweetest part i loved the most.😎

last part so heart-wrenching😭.😒😭mm waiting for the next part.😊😎

Thank you Naeema... She did have a painful past, didn't she? That makes her present happiness all the more sweeter. When at one time she was cast outside the periphery of a family, today she is the central point around whom her whole family revolves...won't you call that poetic justice? 😊

Originally posted by: inlieu

Oh Indu! 😭 😭 😭

You are too good! I love love love the way the story's progressing!

Thanks Inlieu...I am much relieved now that I see the tragic past of Aarti has been accepted well. It took a lot out of me.😳

OMG Indu you are one amazing writer. Is writing your profession or passion. Either way this is one beautiful story. Just read all the 4 parts and what a life poor Arti has had. Unfortunately there are many girls like her who are unwanted in this world. But probably most of them are not as lucky as Arti to get a Yash!!! Lovely and looking forward to reading more of this Samarpan.

di just read last two parts

Originally posted by: Alamelu

OMG Indu you are one amazing writer. Is writing your profession or passion. Either way this is one beautiful story. Just read all the 4 parts and what a life poor Arti has had. Unfortunately there are many girls like her who are unwanted in this world. But probably most of them are not as lucky as Arti to get a Yash!!! Lovely and looking forward to reading more of this Samarpan.

note: if you ever publish a book i would absolutely buy it and read it, and probably all in one sitting

A passion...just a passion my friend...I am no writer. I just love writing. There's a difference there. But thank you for even considering the possibility that I am capable of penning an entire book. I appreciate your thought.

Thank you for liking Samarpan thus far. I agree with you...not every Aarti is fortunate enough to have a Yash...but if they have courage, they can find that Yash in themselves. One may not get support, but one can always give support.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Tell me about it my dear...and I am still not out of it. You caught me there. I still have to cover some portion of her past and well, I need to be with her on this...otherwise I will never be able to put it down. Nonetheless the difficult part is over. What else could go wrong...right??

Thanks Saf...You know I am privi to many cases of such girls. I still remember this young daughter of a jawan in my husband's regiment...very bright, aced the Class 12 exams, and wanted to go to college. I remember her coming to me with her report card and hugging me and saying she wants to study Commerce. One fine day I got the news that she had tried to commit suicide by burning herself. When I finally got to talk to her in the hospital, I asked her why she did this. She said her parents refused to bear expenses for further education for her as they wanted to spend the money on her brother (two years older to her). She said, "Aunty, all my life I was considered the second best. I didn't mind as long as I could study. I knew I'd be able to do well in my life and be something, but my parents refused to give me that opportunity." She fought with them but they beat her up...that's why she took that extreme step. I still asked why she did it. She said, "Just to teach them a lesson."

🤗 That is one heartbreaking story. I am just thanking my lucky stars that my parents are not like that.

nice update
good to know how much poor aarti has gone through during her childhood😭😭
poor her
waiting for next udpate