Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 47

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

it was such a emotional episode...
hate those heartless women of Dubeys...
wow yashu-arthi part was so cute...

her father is so foolish n obsessed...

thanx for d lovely update

Thanks Kinny.

Welcome to the thread. Glad you liked what you have read so far.😊

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update poor aarti

Thanks Leevi.😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Great update...sad for Aarti 😭

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: jikky_84

It was really a heart wrenching update

Not only her father but the whole family never wanted her

Happy that she had Yash and his family to support her 👏

Thanks Asha...Yeah, I know. The update took an emotional toll on me as well.😳

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Amazing Update, Indu! 👏👏👏

But to be admitted.. This one is truly a very emotional and heart wrenching update!! 😭😭

I felt too angry now with Mr. Satya! 😡😡 He can't easily blame Aarti for his Shobha's death.. !! Poor little girl.. Taking all the pain and finally 'understood' that it was actually she behind her dad's anger! !!

Awww.. Yash is so cute with our little angel, Aarti! 😳 Loved that part a lot.. 😳

Update soon, Indu! 😃 Thanks for the PM! 😃

Thanks Isya.

It was indeed one of the most sad chapters I've written so far, including the ones in Sparsh.😳

Originally posted by: Shwty

That is very sad. Loved the interaction between little Yash and little Aarti.

Thank you.😊

wonderful update Indu

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Oh gosh Indu you made me tear up this early in you SS.. People say that daughters are their daddy's apple of the eye and fathers love their daughters the most but Aarti was so unfortunate. Not only she didn't get the love of her father but worse she got his hatred and indifference. He doesn't even care whether she's dead or alive, in fact he would be happier if she was no more.

The way he considered her as a jinx and blamed her for his wife's death just made me so emotional and I cried the moment he went he should have made his wife abort Aarti. I thought maybe as years pass by, he might get attached to her but instead he hated her to such extents that even her presence made him mad. Then when I read that he saw Aarti was the splitting image of Shoba, I thought maybe he would get emotional and finally show some love but instead he demonstrated such rage that he physically hurt Aarti in the process.

I wouldn't even begin to talk about her family especially Maya who ruthlessly told a kid that she killed her mother. So unacceptable. How can a kid bear so much hatred, so much rejection. Usually kids who undergo this will attempt suicide or some sort of that. Maybe Aarti tried to later on but I'll wait for it to unfold.

Radhama is like an angel sent to protect Aarti from all the negativity around her. I'm really so happy that she has someone to look after her and love her. So Yash was actually her saviour not only after marriage but during childhood as without him, Aarti wouldn't even have gotten education.

Indu this was such an emotional update. I read this 12 hours back but couldn't bring myself to type out anything as I was tearing up. I'm so thankful to have parents who love me a lot even though I'm super mischievous, rebellious and drive them crazy. Plus I'm my daddy's little girl whom he loves a lot and continue doing so even though I'm rude or anything of that sort (which sometimes drives me crazy) as he doesn't want to accept that I'm already 23 and not 5 anymore. Knowing that Aarti never had that just made me feel so bad and made me realise how much I've taken my own papa for granted. Indu you're truly a brilliant writer and I just don't know how to praise you anymore and thank you for making me realise how lucky I am to have loving parents. Loved it and now instead of giving a hug I need one badly. but here is one for you for such a masterpiece 🤗

Thank you so very much for such an emotional and comprehensive feedback. Love you for going into it so deeply.

*Sigh* I know Sheema...for me too the entire experience of writing this part was extremely heartbreaking...and it ain't over yet, though the worst is over.

Your last para touched me right here-->❤️ I lost my father a year and a half back, and I don't think I can ever get over that loss. To this day, he was the only person who understood me completely...yup, even over my ma and husband. Therefore, it broke my heart to write about a father who didn't even try to understand what a precious jewel he has... a man who refused to look beyond his role as a lover and fathom that he was blessed to be a father of the child whom his love brought into this world for him.

You have your hug right here🤗...but tell you what, go and give a tight hug to your ma/papa today...That'll be my reward.😳

Originally posted by: ns1970

WOW Indu awesome update 👍🏼
I so feel for aarti she had to take such horror from her father 😭
anyways thanks for the pm

Thanks ns.😊

Originally posted by: Abie10

Aww indu, what a painful n sorrowful past Aarti had 😭 😭
Satya is one fool blaming her for shobas death which was destined to happen. And Maya 😡 oh god how could she say those harsh words to a little girl.
On the other side Bji was like an angel sent for Aarti who wants the best for her future even when he's gone .

Thanks for the PM. Superb update as usual 👏 👏

Thanks Abie.

Satya is a fool alright. He kept grieving for a lost love, whereas all he had to do was lookat his daughter and see the image of his wife look back at him.