Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 44

That is very sad. Loved the interaction between little Yash and little Aarti.

My pleasure my friend 🤗

Oh gosh Indu you made me tear up this early in you SS.. People say that daughters are their daddy's apple of the eye and fathers love their daughters the most but Aarti was so unfortunate. Not only she didn't get the love of her father but worse she got his hatred and indifference. He doesn't even care whether she's dead or alive, in fact he would be happier if she was no more.

The way he considered her as a jinx and blamed her for his wife's death just made me so emotional and I cried the moment he went he should have made his wife abort Aarti. I thought maybe as years pass by, he might get attached to her but instead he hated her to such extents that even her presence made him mad. Then when I read that he saw Aarti was the splitting image of Shoba, I thought maybe he would get emotional and finally show some love but instead he demonstrated such rage that he physically hurt Aarti in the process.

I wouldn't even begin to talk about her family especially Maya who ruthlessly told a kid that she killed her mother. So unacceptable. How can a kid bear so much hatred, so much rejection. Usually kids who undergo this will attempt suicide or some sort of that. Maybe Aarti tried to later on but I'll wait for it to unfold.

Radhama is like an angel sent to protect Aarti from all the negativity around her. I'm really so happy that she has someone to look after her and love her. So Yash was actually her saviour not only after marriage but during childhood as without him, Aarti wouldn't even have gotten education.

Indu this was such an emotional update. I read this 12 hours back but couldn't bring myself to type out anything as I was tearing up. I'm so thankful to have parents who love me a lot even though I'm super mischievous, rebellious and drive them crazy. Plus I'm my daddy's little girl whom he loves a lot and continue doing so even though I'm rude or anything of that sort (which sometimes drives me crazy) as he doesn't want to accept that I'm already 23 and not 5 anymore. Knowing that Aarti never had that just made me feel so bad and made me realise how much I've taken my own papa for granted. Indu you're truly a brilliant writer and I just don't know how to praise you anymore and thank you for making me realise how lucky I am to have loving parents. Loved it and now instead of giving a hug I need one badly. but here is one for you for such a masterpiece 🤗

WOW Indu awesome update 👍🏼
I so feel for aarti she had to take such horror from her father 😭
anyways thanks for the pm

Aww indu, what a painful n sorrowful past Aarti had 😭 😭
Satya is one fool blaming her for shobas death which was destined to happen. And Maya 😡 oh god how could she say those harsh words to a little girl.
On the other side Bji was like an angel sent for Aarti who wants the best for her future even when he's gone .

Thanks for the PM. Superb update as usual 👏 👏

Originally posted by: saf24

Gosh Indu this update was something else. Whatever Aarti was made to believe and feel is something that is still prevelant in certain societies and I could imagine what those innocent girls have to face. My heart went out to Aarti for all that she has had to face and my admiration for Yash grew as in their interaction he was sensitive enough to realise that something was amiss and then as they got married the countless times he spent reassuring her just so she could forget what she was made to believe. Beautifully written Indu. Superb job. I could just imagine what you went through, while writing this.

Tell me about it my dear...and I am still not out of it. You caught me there. I still have to cover some portion of her past and well, I need to be with her on this...otherwise I will never be able to put it down. Nonetheless the difficult part is over. What else could go wrong...right??

Thanks Saf...You know I am privi to many cases of such girls. I still remember this young daughter of a jawan in my husband's regiment...very bright, aced the Class 12 exams, and wanted to go to college. I remember her coming to me with her report card and hugging me and saying she wants to study Commerce. One fine day I got the news that she had tried to commit suicide by burning herself. When I finally got to talk to her in the hospital, I asked her why she did this. She said her parents refused to bear expenses for further education for her as they wanted to spend the money on her brother (two years older to her). She said, "Aunty, all my life I was considered the second best. I didn't mind as long as I could study. I knew I'd be able to do well in my life and be something, but my parents refused to give me that opportunity." She fought with them but they beat her up...that's why she took that extreme step. I still asked why she did it. She said, "Just to teach them a lesson."

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Mind blowing update dear...👏 👏 👏

Aarti past was very painful😭 😭 😭 😭...Heart wrenching one💔 ...

Stupid sathya 😡 😡 and her father's family😡 ..How can the blame an innocent child ...

Poor aarti blaming herself for her mother's death😭 😭 ...

Loved the way suraj and gayatri pointed out Sathya's mistake.⭐️

Liked yash and aarti conversation..Sweet.❤️.

Glad aarti got her education because of yash😳

And last part was so scary😲 😲..Aarti physical hurt because of her father...and still aarti was still blaming herself😭 😭 😭

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next

Thank you so much Radha...I hope you didn't mind my using your name for a character.😳

Well, this is how Aarti's childhood was...when on the one hand she had her own family trampling on her self-worth and making her feel like an offender, and on the other hand she had people like Brij and his family, Radhama, Pandit dadu, Malti, and her school mates all treating her nicely, caring for her, and giving her the love that she so lacked.

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

*stunned silence*

*Reserved.*

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