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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miti16295

it was really a emotional update

loved every bit of ur writingπŸ‘
i actually felt aarti's pain
feeling really sad for her😭

so Yash has a child named Ansh
waiting to know more 😊



Thank you, Miti. These parts have been difficult to write so when you tell me you felt Arti's pain, it makes me all warm and fuzzy. Thank you!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Aarti journey while coming from turmoil is very heavy oh dear how difficult it has been for you and hats off you write p last word echo when she got letter

Finally frnz have started their part to bring aarti back.. gundi was and when lost..n you recalled us aww the difference can be truly reflected in your each word

Vidhi carrying baby and aarti feeling shih is so natural and then you stopeed 'that's unfair Kat.. Ansh Yash Scindhiya

But then I think new update will be kinda new journey to begin for aarti which I will eagerly wait

Thanks for update and pm πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘



Thank you, RA.

Its the first time i am writing something like this so i tried to pick the scenarios i would look for while reading to understand the character - hence, P's last words, comparison of Gundididi. I am glad it worked out and you can see what i had in mind.

Sorry!! Actually, the chapter continues just a little way beyond where i stopped. But i did it on purpose - so many of you have been anxious to know about Yash, and Ansh Yash Scindia's entry gives at least an inkling of where his dad is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘... Oh poor girl Aarti!!! i so wanna hug her... Her only family that she created she had lost it.
I hope Prateik and Vidhi will bring her out of this grief... And what about Yash??? his is still a mystery
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Posted: 12 years ago
So , they are bundling up their forces together now .
Hope that Zoya and Vidhi could do some thing for Aarti and her happiness .
And mere mentioning of Ansh lit my face up .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update. Looking forward to know what happened to Yash
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Posted: 12 years ago
And I believe that Arpi is already out of the picture.
Well, am not sure though but I have a feeling that she might be no more or she left them or something happened to her.

Ansh is Yash's son. I really liked this. I mean for a change, this time we have Yash with a son.

I wonder whether even here, it will be Ansh who will bring AarYa together indirectly.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.. so sad the state of arti.. but interesting end.. wonder what the story is with ansh yash schindia.. and why vidhi has him ... cant wait to read the next update.. hope you update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess121993

wowie...please update soon



Thank you, Charmie. Next part will be up soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

Ohhh! This was so much needed. The coming out of the grief state. If it was not there, then it would have looked like a fake story which we don't want at any moment of your story.

So Don't worry, we will definitely bear with Aarti and you.

gonna read chapter 6A

Omg! 😭 Such an emotional update. As said earlier, ur update was as realistic as it could be.
Beautifully written and expressed each and everything.
Finally Aarti broke down. Thank god. But getting over her lost baby is may be even more difficult.

and yes! u have finally shown
something from Yash's side.
Really eager to read the further story dear.

thanks for the quick update

waiting for the next.


loads of love


Vinu




Vinu - thank you pal! I try to keep my stories as close to real life as possible so am really glad you found it realistic and liked the realism.

Yes i think losing and grieving over a lost child is even harder than that of your partner. There is a component of selflessness in one's love for a child that is not present in any other relationship. For Arti it would be doubly painful - dd the sense of being completely alone with no chance of having her own family again. Poor woman. And i must be a sadist to make my characters go through all this πŸ˜†.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Lovely and emotional update. You have nicely portrayed the pain of Aarti after losing her husband and her child. Hope this little Ansh Yash Scindhiya will bring a new ray of light in Aarti's life.



Thank you, Shashi. Let's see the role Ansh plays in Arti's life - ray of sunshine, way of life...who knows πŸ˜›?

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