ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 48

awnnn aaarti!!! felt her pain...

just strtd reading ur ff... Its owsm.

@Kat: I know I am very late...I am really very sorry. Have been so busy. I had left yours and Deepti's SS for this weekend...both needed a catching up I was dying to do. Didn't want to read in a hurry.

Coming to the story, just one word: Brilliant! I just took a dip in the sea of Aarti's emotional trauma and her attempt at getting back on her feet. I just loved that last bit about Ansh. So, finally we have Yash making contact with Aarti via his ansh...beautiful! I am very curious now as to how you will bring upon the meeting between the father and the would-be mother.😊

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Awesome part with emotional parts! 😭😭😭 Nicely written, Kat! 👏👏

Ow.. Can't see Aarti in pain during the initial part.. 😭😭😭

Zoya is a good friend.. 😊 Finally, the reunion of Sunaina- Pratik and Vidhi happened!

Oh.. so Ansh is Ansh Yash Scindia.. would love to read more! 😃😉

Update soon! 😉

Thank you, Isya.

Arti is blessed with loving friends - the article of her own goodness and inner beauty. And at the most difficult time of her life they are banding together to help her out.

Ansh - the little bundle of joy 😊 - yes, you will read a lot more about him 😉.

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Kat that was a marvelous update! I feel for Aarti, the poor girl has grieved for Prashant but she needs to grieve over her baby as well. I loved how described Aarti's appearance and what she was going through, I have seen it happen to many people in real life as well when they become a shadow of their former selves.

Yash's baby? Awww! I have a feeling that Ansh will help Aarti come out of her grieg and pain.

Looking forward to the next update!

Thank you so much Nina.

I was wondering how to portray the difference in Arti. I suck at descriptions (reason why you will find practically no description of the physical appearance of my characters) - so it was hard to figure out how to show the difference in her physically 😛. If that came through, i am very glad.

Yeah Yash's baby - wanted Ansh to be Yash's son in this one. Debated about Palak...but let's see what the future holds.

Originally posted by: vidya29

It is very saddening to read how aarti's been coping after the death of her little family.

And you pen it down so well,I could picture it all in my head and it pained even more.

I like how you put forth the words.clear and concise.

Finally,Vidhi gets to be the big sister along with zoya in aarti's journey of healing. Allways loved her,Pratik ,Zoya and Sunaina.

Payal is adorable .

Ansh Yash Scindia,he's born to be just that.

Why do I have a feeling that Ansh is going to be the one who brings Aarti back and bridges the distance between her and Yash.

There's another thing thats nagging, Arpita's either dead or she left Yash.

Anyway,I'll let you satiate my curiosity.😊

Loved the update and Thank You for the PM😃.

Kindly Continue Soon.

Take Care😊

Thank you so much Vidya. It is difficult to portray grief without going overboard and melodramatic. If you can read and visualize it, then it really gladdens my heart.

About Ansh - isn't he?? Born to be Ansh Yash Scinidia - in the show so i decided to go the whole hog in my FF 😛.

I will "unfold" the story with Arpita soon - the next part will give the bare facts but the real story will unfold through the continuing story line.

Oh and your note about Prashant-Arti story: looks like i may really need to write that alternate version one day 😆. And if i do, i will definitely let you know. Thank you for the interest.

Oh and don't worry or apologize about long reviews. The more detailed the better, especially if you critique what i write. So - thank you for the detailed reviews 😊.

Originally posted by: Shwty

Loved it! Can't wait for Yash and Aarti to meet. Hope Arpita is out the picture too so that Yash and Aarti can bond over their loss.

Thank you, Shwty. Poor Arpita - there's no love for her here 😆.

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome part

ansh yash sindia ohoh so artpita is no more ?

plz continue soon

Thank you, Levitha.

What happened to Arpita will be "revealed" in the next part. Though it won't tell you what happened to Yash 😛.

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

So, Ansh is Yash and Arpita's son. That's amazing! Just one question, in that last scene were they in Vidhi's mayka or sasuraal?

Great Update, Kat! The descriptions were spot on! Thanks for the PM!

Thank you, Iqra.

So i managed to surprise you huh? Good 😉 - i like doing that!

They are in Vidhi's maika - which is in Mumbai.