ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
ansh yash sindia ohoh so artpita is no more ?
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
So, Ansh is Yash and Arpita's son. That's amazing! Just one question, in that last scene were they in Vidhi's mayka or sasuraal?

Great Update, Kat! The descriptions were spot on! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Naeema, Rasheeda, Freya, Miti, Sheen, Alekhika - thank you so much.



welcome dear .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Kat, another brilliant update dear. I loved how u focused on Aarthis unshed pain. You gave the situation the necessary focus and did'nt just rush to the next scene of healing. The emotions and pain need to be shown cause this is the reality of life. You portrayed this so well and so true to the emotion that when we are alone is when we break down and deal with our hidden feelings. Also happy like Zoya that finally she let her guard down n let free the held in tears. So glad they convinced Aarthi for this Mumbai trip...sure this is going to be the start of a new chapter. Eager to see how you bring about Yash into the story and what exactly is Yash's status. Wondering how u are going to portray Arpitas character. So so happy with the intro of cutiepie Ansh Yash Scindia...who undoubtedly is going to be Aarthis magical remedy to recovery. So so so eager for the next part so please update soon and thanx for the beautiful update n pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent update finally she reached mumbai and i loved vidhi and sunaina part, Ansh in vidhis hand... Aww emotional update , mmm waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

beautiful update

feeling bad for aarti...



Thank you, Goldenmoon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Her pain became my pain Kat.


Not just Aarti's her friend Zoya--seeing her friend wasting away like that and helpless at doing anything about it.
Pratik: Seeing his gundi didi become a shadow of her earlier self.
Heart breaking.

A very emotional update

Her cutting herself away from kids to protect herself from remembering what she could have had.

And then Ansh entering her life...

WOW!! I do not know where Yash is in his life now. But I soo want Ansh to bring AarYa together.

Did I say bring Yash later. I retract.
Bring him in now. LOL😆




Ah, thank you Deepti. If you could feel her pain, then i achieved at least some of what i had set out to do. Losing a child has to be one of the most difficult losses to deal with - and in Arti's case, it pretty much takes her back to square one - no family, no one to call her own. And i didn't want to lose sight of that - so this part and the next (both of which are actually one chapter) focus on how she deals with losing her child.

Re Yash - et tu Brutus?? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: balaraba

Wow nice update dear. I love d way u portrayed Aarti condition. nd Ansh had come into d line. So Arpita had given birth. let me guess a little I think Arpita died or something so vidhi is taking responsibility. I don't know d way u re taking d story, bt I really loved it, do update soon can't wait to see Aarti's relationship with Ansh



Thank you, Bala. Well, there has to be something na, for an aunt to take care of a newborn, rather than his own parents. The next part lays it out - not in detail, but the bare facts are there. Thank you so much for getting into the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb update. beautifully written yet emotional. Seeing Aarti in this state is heartbreaking. Looking forward to the next update.



Thank you so much Saf. Arti is finally on the road to recovery and hopefully i can clear the path for her by the next update. Thank you for staying with her, and me, through this difficult journey.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

That was very emotional Kat 😭


But loved it. So now Aarti will meet Yash again 😊 Waiting to know what happens next. 😊



Thank you, Nikki. Lol - yes, Arti will meet Yash again, that was a given 😆.

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