ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10)

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@FireLordPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Kat that was a marvelous update! I feel for Aarti, the poor girl has grieved for Prashant but she needs to grieve over her baby as well. I loved how described Aarti's appearance and what she was going through, I have seen it happen to many people in real life as well when they become a shadow of their former selves.

Yash's baby? Awww! I have a feeling that Ansh will help Aarti come out of her grieg and pain.

Looking forward to the next update!

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi
Res!!!

EDITED..

Loved The Whole Chapter 😃
Hats Of To U Kat 👏
Feeling Pain of Aarti 😭
Poor Gal
Nanha Ansh Yash Scindia is here 😛
Yashu bhi aane wala hai is ka matlab 😉😆

Sheen - this HAS to be one of the sweetest pictures i have seen of GC and Divyam. Thank you so much!! And its so very appropriate here for Ansh and Yash.

And yes, jab nanha Ansh is here can Yash be far behind 😛? He's almost here...

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: villager00
OH! this is gonna be exciting👏

Thank you Kat, i'm waiting for the next update..

Lol, "exciting" Enid? 😆 You make it sound like a thriller - but i am glad you are enjoying the tale. The fun will start...soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: Zetter
Awww that was a very emotional update and I loved everything bit of it ❤️
Great job Kat 👏
Can't wait for more 😉

Thank you Zetter. You are always so encouraging pal - thanks 😳.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: ksfan2
ok thats a suspense...ansh yash scindhiya which means yash is married??..waiting for the suspense to be unfolded...love the way u write kat..keep it up the good work di 😊

Thank you, Rasheeda.

Yes, Yash is married - he and Arpita got married i think one week after Vidhi-Pankaj. And Ansh is their first child.

Lol - the "suspense" as you call it will unfold soon - very soon.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: guruandkratz
That was heartbreaking...😭

Here enters our Ansh...😃⭐️

Waiting to know more about Yash's part now!!😉

Great part...please continue soon!!!👏👏

Thank you, Guru.

Yash is coming too - can't be too far behind Ansh, can he now? 😉

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vidya29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

It is very saddening to read how aarti's been coping after the death of her little family.

And you pen it down so well,I could picture it all in my head and it pained even more.

I like how you put forth the words.clear and concise.

Finally,Vidhi gets to be the big sister along with zoya in aarti's journey of healing. Allways loved her,Pratik ,Zoya and Sunaina.

Payal is adorable .

Ansh Yash Scindia,he's born to be just that.

Why do I have a feeling that Ansh is going to be the one who brings Aarti back and bridges the distance between her and Yash.

There's another thing thats nagging, Arpita's either dead or she left Yash.

Anyway,I'll let you satiate my curiosity.😊

Loved the update and Thank You for the PM😃.

Kindly Continue Soon.

Take Care😊

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vidya29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Vidya - welcome to Dil Jaanta Hai. And thank you so much for coming.

This whole story started because of Prashant you know - he was such a ...normal person in the show. Probably the most normal, closest to reality character and i wanted to explore that further. I really wanted to keep him alive after the accident and see how things panned out between him and Arti - but this version is a fan-fiction dedicated to PV - so Yash has to come na. And hence, Prashant had to die. Sigh...I am thinking of an alternate version though...let's see, maybe one day i will pen it down.

As to how Yash fits into the equation - wait. I'll make him fit 😆. He is the reason i "killed" (as some one claimed) Prashant so he will fit in. When he arrives and the story embraces him, let me know your thoughts on the fit - i will be very anxious to hear back from you.

Once again, thank you so much for joining me and my characters here. And thank you for your detailed comments.

Thank You for the warm Welcome😊.Pleasure's all mine!

I love Prashant in your story,I can't hate him.His relationship with Aarti really doesn't bother me.For me he was a character that had immense potential story-wise(in the show).He could have been handled differently instead of the way the CVs went about.He was flawed,human.And Yash is just beginning to look human to me.anyway, that's a story for later.

If you do get up to write something with Prashant-Aarti,do let me have a look.

I will be anxious to let my thoughts be known,literally.Technology hates me back at the hostel.

but I'll let you know,promise.

Yes,I do tend to get carried away and give quite long reviews,Kindly bear.😊

Take Care.😊