ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 49

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hi Kat, another brilliant update dear. I loved how u focused on Aarthis unshed pain. You gave the situation the necessary focus and did'nt just rush to the next scene of healing. The emotions and pain need to be shown cause this is the reality of life. You portrayed this so well and so true to the emotion that when we are alone is when we break down and deal with our hidden feelings. Also happy like Zoya that finally she let her guard down n let free the held in tears. So glad they convinced Aarthi for this Mumbai trip...sure this is going to be the start of a new chapter. Eager to see how you bring about Yash into the story and what exactly is Yash's status. Wondering how u are going to portray Arpitas character. So so happy with the intro of cutiepie Ansh Yash Scindia...who undoubtedly is going to be Aarthis magical remedy to recovery. So so so eager for the next part so please update soon and thanx for the beautiful update n pm:)

Thank you J. You overwhelmed me with so much praise...now u left me speechless.

Yes, it was important for me to show Arti's pain and how she recovers properly. There is one last part to go for the recovery and then i will go back to moving the story along.

Ansh - call him the magical remedy or what you will, but yes, he will help Arti see her way around her greatest loss.

J - thank you once again for being so supportive.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Excellent update finally she reached mumbai and i loved vidhi and sunaina part, Ansh in vidhis hand... Aww emotional update , mmm waiting for the next part.

Thank you so much Naeema. You see, Arti's birth-place is also the place that gives her a reason to live again, shows her the way to do so. Hence - Mumbai and all the love that's associated with the city for Arti.

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Great update👏👏👏... Oh poor girl Aarti!!! i so wanna hug her... Her only family that she created she had lost it.

I hope Prateik and Vidhi will bring her out of this grief... And what about Yash??? his is still a mystery

Thank you, Ash.

Yes, Arti's loss is big - almost like clearing the slate of her life. Good or bad - time will tell, but only if she learns to cope with it. And her loved ones and the little angel of mercy - Ansh -will help her. Yash - mystery man, huh? 😆 Chalo, let him remain shrouded in mystery for just a little while longer.

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

So , they are bundling up their forces together now .

Hope that Zoya and Vidhi could do some thing for Aarti and her happiness .

And mere mentioning of Ansh lit my face up .

😊 - Ansh was born to bring smiles to everyone's face - and he did his part with you.

Thank you for reading and commenting Keerthus.

Originally posted by: zahra15

And I believe that Arpi is already out of the picture.
Well, am not sure though but I have a feeling that she might be no more or she left them or something happened to her.

Ansh is Yash's son. I really liked this. I mean for a change, this time we have Yash with a son.

I wonder whether even here, it will be Ansh who will bring AarYa together indirectly.

Thanks for the PM.

Hi Zahra!

Lol - no love for Arpita here i tell you!! You'll find out what happened to her in the next part 😊.

Yes, Ansh is so truly Yash's son in the show i just wanted to complete the biological gap here.

Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

Originally posted by: princess4120

great update.. so sad the state of arti.. but interesting end.. wonder what the story is with ansh yash schindia.. and why vidhi has him ... cant wait to read the next update.. hope you update soon..

Thank you, Princess.

The next update will tell you why Vidhi has Ansh - though no promises about telling the "Story" about Ansh and his parents 😆. Yes, i do plan to update soon - later today hopefully.

Originally posted by: sallybaby

awnnn aaarti!!! felt her pain...

loved the introduction of ansh!!!!!

nice update, looking forward to the next one!!!!

Thank you, Amina.

We all love Ansh so much he deserved a special entry - or rather the limelight 😛. I am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: aman93

just strtd reading ur ff... Its owsm.

Welcome Aman! I am so happy to have you join me and the characters of DJH here.

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Kat: I know I am very late...I am really very sorry. Have been so busy. I had left yours and Deepti's SS for this weekend...both needed a catching up I was dying to do. Didn't want to read in a hurry.

Coming to the story, just one word: Brilliant! I just took a dip in the sea of Aarti's emotional trauma and her attempt at getting back on her feet. I just loved that last bit about Ansh. So, finally we have Yash making contact with Aarti via his ansh...beautiful! I am very curious now as to how you will bring upon the meeting between the father and the would-be mother.😊

Indu - no apologies necessary at all! Its a pleasure for me that you were able to catch up. Hope your mother is better now.

I was so unsure - still am so unsure - on how to portray the grief, pain, and recovery without going overboard. From the feedback it seems that these parts at least resonated with you all - and that's a big relief. One last bit to go on the recovery ... - hope i manage to keep a hold on the reigns through that one...

Lol - wait and watch how the two finally meet 😆.

Mula, Sunrio, Luv_lvndr, Alekhika, Taahir - thank you so much! These last few parts have been difficult to write - so when you comment on them, it makes my day 😳.


Carissa - thank you for sharing your name. And what a beautiful name it is!