Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 72

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Indu, that was a fantastic update. Yash was just amazing. Looks like the dadima here is equivalent to our bua and tayji. Fantastic. I can see Yash coming to arti's defense...waiting to see what he does and how he does .

Happy New year




@Alamelu: Thank you...and a very happy new year to you too.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

I'm finally caught up with this fanfiction and I have to say that I'm so glad that I read this! Thank you so much for the wonderful chapters! I'm loving every word of it! You write so beautifully Indu! Yash and Aarti are two stubborn people.

Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! 😊





@Saffi:
I thought I had lost you. Thank you so much for coming back and appreciating Sparsh. I'll take that as my New Year gift from you. Happy New Year!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Another mind blowing update.. This whole update was so captivating. I was literally going "Mishti spill it out, SPILL" 😆 and when she nearly did, I held my breath a while.. It was so damn good..

Just love the way yash is teasing aarti to such extents that even she can't bottle up her emotions anymore. little that she realises, all this arrangements are for her and her alone.. Yash's protectiveness cum possessiveness is the icing on the cake..

Loved it so very much and here's another hug (tighter than the ones before) from me 🤗





@Sheema: Thank you. Aha...I needed that hug. 🤗Gosh, I am always so nervous before and after each update. Thank God...all of you seem to approve so far.😳

You know the most beautiful thing about Yash's love for Mishti is that he doesn't need to tread so softly around her. He can so easily pull her in front of him and list out exactly why he know she is Mishti...or better still, go to Hoshangabad and dig out the truth, which should not be too hard to find. But he respects the decision she has taken so is trying to woo her from herself.


Happy New Year!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Indu: Yes, and I love the way Yash is going about doing exactly that! He prods her gently without being overbearing, and I am really enjoying these little moments where Mishti unwittingly lets a tiny bit of her true self, the one whose sparsh has stayed with Yash for so long, shine through more strongly even though she tries to cover things up with a veil.
I like the way your new characters fit into the world you have created for this story - and that's what matters at the end of it all! There's a merging of the familiar and the unfamiliar into one universe that is the writer's own...I do understand the apprehensive feelings that come with tweaking character relationships, though...
Please do continue with that! 😉 I am thoroughly enjoying myself! Ready to take the twists and turns in the road as always, Indu!
Aah, dragging! You know, if I sat down to write something about Yash-Aarti, I bet I would end up dragging everything until the end of time! 😆 All I can say is that I'm more than excited to see what you come up with or have in mind - slow pace or not! Things have been flowing along beautifully so far, and I love the pace...but I also love the details, too! You've got a very good balance here, I feel.
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thanks Sidu.

Happy New Year!!!🤗
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"Mr Lamba…I won't repeat this again. Aartiji here is not available for any other wedding till ours is over. She will be busy from this moment till she is through with my honeymoon. Is that understood? In fact I am taking her out now to help me buy my fiancee's engagement ring."

Indu, this is honestly my favorite installment to date. Yash is magnificent! ☺️ What he tells Pavan Lamba above is laden with so much delicious subtext. He's getting Mishti/Aarti to plan her own wedding without her realizing it, and, in the process, he's helping to draw the truth of her feelings to the surface. *happy sigh* Gah! I wish I could literally hug the following part as well:

"I mean I kept them for her in a box she gave me for safekeeping. She was so careless that she trusted only me to take care of her personal belongings. Anyway, coming back to the matter at hand…what do you want me to do with the flowers? Do you want me to make a hand bouquet or a stand-up one or with any other special background?….Please hurry up…I have other matters to attend into…"

Mishti stopped to take a breath and glanced sideways at him from under her lashes…Darn it, no one has the right to look so handsome!! Especially when the some one is so out to get her. Alright, Mr Scindia…you want war…you'll get war. Your Mishti won't back of. She'll make sure you see Aarti…feel Aarti….and believe Aarti…till you are certain that I am Aarti….so there...

Leaning against the wall, legs crossed, hands in pockets, Yash had thoroughly enjoyed her discomfiture along with her vain attempt at covering up the faux pax.

"Oh…make it as you wish. I am sure you'll know what appeals a girl. I am a bit rusty on that account. But now that I am in, I am going to make her the happiest girl in the world…I am going to show her how much she means to me…I am going to shower her with flower petals and then I am going to remove those petals one by one with my…..(at the sound of a dropping scissor this time)….What happened, Aartiji? Am I bothering you with my love talk?"

"Yes…you are….(she hissed through clenched teeth, keeping her back to him as she furiously pulled the flowers out of the paper binding)…Would you please wait in the office, I'll join….sss…ouch….."

"Mishti?????"

He leapt up from his relaxed position as he heard her soft cry of pain. She was holding on to her right middle finger from where blood oozed out from the thorn prick. He gently extricated her other hand from the injured one and pressed his handkerchief on it and then walked her to the corner water basin. He washed the finger tenderly, concern writ large on his face. Mishti just stared at him….numb. His one touch had erased all the pain. She didn't even remember what she told him about other men touching her. But he did…and he touched her now with full authority and he acknowledged her silent acceptance. He was not going to belittle her feelings by making her conscious about this very blatant blunder on her part….He cherished the first touch of her hand as he gently held it….savored its familiarity….the connection of it with his heart.

Have mercy! ❤️ So much love for all of it, especially the bolded sentences. The banter, the angst, the longing. This is my kind of couple. Skillfully written. Update whenever you can, my friend (and hopefully soon 😉).

I can't leave the thread without saying that I hope the start to your New Year is brilliant! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Indu Thank You for another Amazing Update.

It is nice to see Yash doing his work well to make Mishti accept that she is not Aarti but Mishti who loved Yash and will always love him.



@SAnonymous: Thank you, my friend. Yash is trying his best. He is bringing in old memories and presenting them afresh so that he can make Mishti look at her decision more positively.😊


Happy New Year!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Jac: Aaah, those parts that you quoted in your post...Love them! And I was just reminded of the fact that I have many, many, many parts of this story to write comments for...Because that detailed response of yours reminds me of what my own comments used to look like once upon a time!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64





@Saffi:
I thought I had lost you. Thank you so much for coming back and appreciating Sparsh. I'll take that as my New Year gift from you. Happy New Year!!!😊



No you never lost me! I promise I'm here! I was just so busy with school that I didn't have time to really read any fanfictions, and now that it's my break, I'm catching up on everything I've missed out on and I'm so glad that I did! Thank you so much for the wishes! Happy New Year to you too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ... Dear Indu excellent Update Yash is not going to give up neither Mishti Loving this stubborn Jodi, Maya Daadima she made Mishti cry still there are such women's in the society what to do?!
Love the way mishti hid the Rose under her dupatta and then slipped it in her office Draw, Mr.Pavan going Red when ever he sees Mishti and the description of Mr.Pavan , the room the flowers i enjoyed it dear Wonderful write up always. Masha Allah.👍🏼❤️🤗

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