Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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1HappyGrl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams
@Jac: Aaah, those parts that you quoted in your post...Love them! And I was just reminded of the fact that I have many, many, many parts of this story to write comments for...Because that detailed response of yours reminds me of what my own comments used to look like once upon a time!

Borna! 🤗 Just love the way Indu has Yash cleverly drawing Mishti/Aarti's true feelings out. I think Part XI will go down as one of my absolute favorite updates.

On the detailed comments, completely understand since time isn't always available. But I always love reading your insights on Aarti, Yash, KS and GC, and Indu has been wonderful in giving us so much meat to chew on in Sparsh, so I'd love to read your detailed comments on different parts whenever you do have the time.

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Fabulous update. Oho, Maya here again, she will always with her bad mouth for Aarti(Mishti). Yash is fabulous with his scolding to Mr. Pawan saying she is not available.

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cynthiagem

@cynthiagem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

I was so wrapped up reading the story that I forgot that it was just an update, aww! Really looking forward to the next.

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Shobha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Lovely update, Indu! 🤗 So Maya also entered the arena now... ..the second thorn in the Yash-Mishti love...will we get the Taiji as well or is Maya representing both? 😛

Waiting for the next one...😊

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Ashwatha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Another fantastic update👏👏👏...

Poor Mishti she is not going to be left now... Mishti and Yash both are stubborn... If she is not going to let him know her identity then he too surely is not going to leave her... Ahhh... Mishti you are gone. He knows every little detail of hers now..

The war of (for) love has begun... Those red roses with him tending to her wound were beautiful😳😳...

Mr. Lamba quite an interesting character as far as he does not pose a problem to Mishti and Yash... he is going to be the one kindling Yash's possessive senses😆😆

Hate Maya... she always creates problems for Aarti...

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drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

wonderful chapter

I can't wait for the next chapter

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

wonderful 👏😊.loved very much.

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

OMG i am getting addicted to ur story by every part. The act in mishti to hid from her love for yash is so cute and another threat here goes to maya again with her taunting and hurting comments.

But I am now curious to read the next part. plz continue soon dear

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

@Jac: You make my day...seriously you do. You love Sparsh, and that is so evident that I feel this thrill go through me when I read your comments. You make me go back and read the update once again just to read it from your vantage point. Thank you so much my friend. It is so fulfilling to share a work of love with someone who not only shows equal love but also points out the nuances you want the reader to notice so much. On that context, I have been so fortunate to have most of the readers hit upon the feeling behind a word.

I so loved your one-to-one with Borna. I have been waiting for Borna to get some time on hand and give me a synopsis of all the past chapters. I am also awaiting my other friends like Samana, Kirthi, Maham to have some time to waste on me...at least once before Sparsh ends.😳

Thank you...and a very happy new year to you and your loved ones too!!🤗