Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 71

Another spectacular part that was extremely fun to read!

Originally posted by: rutu83

loved it - oh yash 😈

ye maya aur prashant har jagah aa jate hai😡

@Rutu: Thanks. Ab phool hain to...kaante bhi honge naa!!!!😃

Indu, that was a fantastic update. Yash was just amazing. Looks like the dadima here is equivalent to our bua and tayji. Fantastic. I can see Yash coming to arti's defense...waiting to see what he does and how he does .

I'm finally caught up with this fanfiction and I have to say that I'm so glad that I read this! Thank you so much for the wonderful chapters! I'm loving every word of it! You write so beautifully Indu! Yash and Aarti are two stubborn people.

Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! 😊

Another mind blowing update.. This whole update was so captivating. I was literally going "Mishti spill it out, SPILL" 😆 and when she nearly did, I held my breath a while.. It was so damn good..

Just love the way yash is teasing aarti to such extents that even she can't bottle up her emotions anymore. little that she realises, all this arrangements are for her and her alone.. Yash's protectiveness cum possessiveness is the icing on the cake..

Loved it so very much and here's another hug (tighter than the ones before) from me 🤗

Originally posted by: Zetter

@Indu: Oh my that was another magnificent update my friend 👏 👏 👏 👏...hehehe Yash babu is really getting under Mishti's skin, the way eh make her revealed that she kept the flowers was very sly of him 👍🏼 😳

Yash taking care of Mishti wa beautifully done and not to mention the way he possessively told Mr Lamba that Aarti already had plans made me smile like a teenager 😆 ❤️ 😃

Well even as a grandma Maya is till at it 😛 haha I hope it's Yash who is there given Mishti support 😉

Can't wait for Palak to see Mishti in the mansion 😊

@Zet: Thanks bud🤗...You said it...Yash will be there to support her, but will she take that support? She has been fighting these feelings and him for valid reasons...and those reasons are proven right when Maya daadi speaketh her Paleolithic mind...Yash has to understand her reasons by himself, because Mishti won't give an inch. She knows him and she knows what his reactions will be. Poor girl is fighting a lone battle!!😭

Originally posted by: saf24

Indu that was another amazing update. I love how it was written and enjoyed seeing Yash get under Mishti's skin. Fantastic job as usual

@Saf: Thanks, pal...Yeah, Yash is trying his best to make her admit.😊

Happy New Year!!!🤗

Indu Thank You for another Amazing Update.

It is nice to see Yash doing his work well to make Mishti accept that she is not Aarti but Mishti who loved Yash and will always love him.

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Another spectacular part that was extremely fun to read!

If Mishti isn't going to give up, then Yash isn't going to either...I'm loving how Yash's words are striking Mishti straight in the heart every time - Mishti's attempt to recover from her impulsive confession about the red roses was wonderful! The war of words between Yash and Pavan (can't really call it a "war" since Yash overpowered the poor guy, haha) was quite entertaining, too, as was Mishti's reaction to it all! Yash and his passionate possessiveness, Mishti and her stubbornness and the feelings that she's trying so desperately to fight off...

Adored all the little moments and details as always, including Yash's "Aartiji here is not available for any other wedding till ours is over. She will be busy from this moment till she is through with my honeymoon. Is that understood?" Aaah, that was fantastic! I had the largest smile on my face as soon as I read "She is not available."

Oho, and Mayaji is here, too. Another thorn in Mishti's path to the dream that Yash is hoping to weave for both of them...? I guess time will tell! From the last line, I'm hoping that we won't have to wait too long.

@Borna: Thank you my dear friend. Well...what Yash is doing is no rocket science...He is trying to give her the space she requires, yet trying to weaken her barriers by striking at her weak points so that she opens up herself. I am glad you were fine with the new characters I introduced. This is a story of Yash and Aarti, with inspiration taken from Yash and Aarti of PV. As such, I am always apprehensive when I tweak the relationship of a character or introduce a new character. The last thing I want is to hurt the sensibilities of the readers who are so attached to PV.

I thoroughly enjoyed writing that Pavan/Yash verbal duel...I guess I love my Aartis so much that I wanted Yash to show his weakness a little. 😳

As for Maya daadi's opinion, I have personally seen such atrocious attitude in my close family so wanted to bring that out...Let's see how this goes. I have been maintaining that I don't want to drag the story, but somehow when I sit to write, situations in the story keep pushing me not to upset the pace. I don't know, Borna...the insecurity that a part might seem a drag bothers me a lot.



Happy New Year!!!🤗