Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

OMG Pal! that was just marvelous 👏 👏 👏...I loved the way Yash lost his temper when Mishti was trying to make him think that she died that day, he just couldn't take her denying it any longer when his mind body and soul are telling him that she is his Mishti.

You handled the first meeting between Yash and Ansh perfectly 😃 👍🏼 and what's this about Mansi? thanks goodness Yash didn't look at the pic cause his heart will always belong to Mishti 😳 😳

Can't wait for what comes next 😉

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Mamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

OMG, Indu!! What a fabulous update!!😃 Loved it to the core! 🤗 I must say you make a really good writer. Just the right amount of suspense and romance...and leaving us on a cliffhanger..😆

My favourite lines:

Mishti was indeed looking at him as if he had grown horns in the last six years. Here she was…nervous to the last bone, sitting across him after six lifetimes, and trying to word sentences that would ward him away…while he…he sat there coolly throwing most flirtatiously outrageous lines at her. She narrowed her eyes, suddenly feeling an annoyance creep up, and crossed her hands on her lap and spoke in her most serious tone.

@bold: 😆😆😆 I can imagine Yash with that smirk of his and Aarti all flustered, not knowing what to say... Wonderful imagery there!👏

I am so glad I came across this SS, dear!! Keep giving us quick updates 😳

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Tahitien-moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Again superb work indu😉

Awesome Work!

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

grat work Indu... wonder how creatives you alll are makes me feel all charcters alive...

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nanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Amazing update, it was like I was holding my breath for what is going to happen next. Truly superb!

Edited by nanvi - 12 years ago

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Alamelu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Indu

Did not know about this, till today. Just finished reading the whole story so far, what can I say. Just BRILLIANT!!! I loved how you have woven the story so far. If Arti is ziddi, so is Yash, she should know that...waiting to see what you have next..

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Morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Fantastic update, Indu 👏

Right from the time Yash and Aarthi entered the cafe, I was smiling like this 😃. In a way, I was sure Yash is confident that she is his Mishti but I was wondering how Aarthi planned to keep him away. So I was happy her plan got disturbed even before she started by Yash's laid-back attitude.

Like PV CVs, you too know to give us cliffhangers. I was like please God let Indu not stopped the story immediately after AarYa meet but see you've stopped exactly there. 😳 😆

Please continue soon. 😊

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sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Yash knew it.. he knows it..its not just a hunch...from the bottom of his heart.. thats his Mishti...!! 😊

OMG !! The sudden, angry outburst did surprise me..but more than that... relieved.. Yash said it in front of her..once an for all...!! 😊

Though Aarti has her own reasons..there is no going back for her.. she can't hide anymore..!!

The COFFEE part was intriguing... Yash said to order coffee.. and Aarti (out of habit) asked for Black with 2 cubes of sugar... !! Mishti will be caught at this I guess...😆

Do continue.. Thanks.. Indu...😊

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Old username: salvatore-nina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Oh my God Indu, another brilliant update 👏. I love how Yash cut through the small talk and said straight on that she was Mishti. And poor Mishti came prepared with all her lines, and here was her Yashji throwing flirtatious lines at her, breaking down her walls 🤣. I am loving the suspense in the story.

Edited by salvatore-nina - 12 years ago