Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 55

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Indu, another fantastic update...🤗...I felt such a rush of emotion at the end...I can hardly wait for the next one!

And I will definitely do what I told you earlier...once the whole story is over, I am going to sit and read it from the beginning to end at one go...and relive all the emotions! 😊

@Shobha: Thanks, pal🤗...When you do read this in one go later...do not forget to tell me whether it felt anything different.😊

@Sarah: Thanks for the hugs and kisses...I am the greedy one where love and affection are concerned. 🤗...Aha, the coffee slip...so you noticed. There was another one there...bolo-bolo, tell-tell!!😃

Well...his Mishti is stunned to statue at the moment, but she is no quitter...so let's see, what she does when the shock wears off!!!

Its mind blowing... I feel like awarding you Best writer award.. Wow.. Cant wait for your next update..

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Awesome...Awesome...Awesome👏... Indu Di... u r simply perfect in letting out those minutest details.

Oh Poor Mishti!!! i actually could not help laugh at that specification for coffee she gave on behalf of Yash... At one word "coffee" she jumped into all that specifics. She does not want to let the identity out but that one simple secret said it all... Above all she has started to wonder about the girl who he is to marry. Does that mean she is slightly jealous??😉

Yash is definitely not going to leave her now and given that he is such a stubborn person.

I am waiting to see her reactions and how she is gonna defend her lie...

Its getting really interesting and i cant wait for the next update

@Ash: Thanks. I await your comments after each update. You have this cutely enthusiastic way of describing the nuances that catch your eye. I find that so endearing and fulfilling.🤗

(bokd) Aha...you caught that...good girl!! She might go all Saint on him at the moment, but at the end she is a girl who is insanely in love with her man...so there is bound to be a rattling in the heart on hearing that he is considering another girl.😉

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Fantastic Update dear

Waiting eagerly for the next

Thanks Rachna.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Sarah: Thanks for the hugs and kisses...I am the greedy one where love and affection are concerned. 🤗...Aha, the coffee slip...so you noticed. There was another one there...bolo-bolo, tell-tell!!😃

Well...his Mishti is stunned to statue at the moment, but she is no quitter...so let's see, what she does when the shock wears off!!!

Aha...Indu Ji!! Yaad hai mera 😆😆 , yehi hain na?? "In any case he did approve of the girl, maybe liked her even…"I wonder how she looks like?"

Wow! Fantastic part. Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

Awesome Update Indu

Wow !!!! superb update INDU,

just superb
I am flowing with the emotions which yash and misti were going through
Oh !!!! I am so loving this Yash -- so sure of his misti ...
Misti --- Poor girl !! trying to fight her destiny . Doesn't she knows her yashji will find her by her mere presence

INDU ,
please update the next part soon as I am desperate to know the feelings of misti when confronted by her yashji

Originally posted by: InduG64

Dear Gosh Anusha...you just made my day with that comment. I sat laughing for a whole minute. You reminded me of my grandfather. We were a bunch of six grandkids who would pester him for a story every night during our vacations. After few days, he would begin his stalling tactics; for example,"...the ogre had a tummyfull of goodies and went to sleep. The prince waited for him to wake up, etc..."...and then he would close his eyes for a nap...and when after a few minutes of waiting he wouldn't open his eyes, one of us fools would tentatively nudge him, "Dadu, what happened?" And he would murmur with his eyes closed, "Shssh...wait..the ogre is still sleeping. The story can't proceed till he wakes up." And we would sit there quietly...waiting for the ogre to wake up while our clever dadu had his nap. 😆

glad that i made you remember your grand pa... grand pas are the best in the world... and the update was wonderful!!! WONDERFUL indu... i loved it... but i don't like the fact that you always stop it at a cliffhanger... i was like...


jaldi update karo...😕😳