Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




@Aditi: Thanks, my dear. I agree with you...Mishti should have known better than to take pangas with her Yashji...The man is a living radar where Mishti is concerned, sensing and picking up even the smallest wavelength emanating fro her.😃

I am trying to update every third/fourth day. Actually, each writing drains me completely...I get so emotionally involved with it that it takes a day plus for me to get over the hangover and even think of the next one. I hope you'll understand.😳




Indu,
you take your time
I can understand
sorry to bother you

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: morris

Fantastic update, Indu 👏

Right from the time Yash and Aarthi entered the cafe, I was smiling like this 😃. In a way, I was sure Yash is confident that she is his Mishti but I was wondering how Aarthi planned to keep him away. So I was happy her plan got disturbed even before she started by Yash's laid-back attitude.

Like PV CVs, you too know to give us cliffhangers. I was like please God let Indu not stopped the story immediately after AarYa meet but see you've stopped exactly there. 😳 😆

Please continue soon. 😊





@Morris: Thank you.🤗
Oh Yash is pretty cheesed off...not only his entire being says this is Mishti but even Mishti herself is giving him reasons by slipping up. So he decided to go for the offensive...to shake whatever reasoning Mishti is working on. He has no clue about the Why...and he will want to be persistent till he find the answer to that.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago




Thank you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sia221

Yash knew it.. he knows it..its not just a hunch...from the bottom of his heart.. thats his Mishti...!! 😊

OMG !! The sudden, angry outburst did surprise me..but more than that... relieved.. Yash said it in front of her..once an for all...!! 😊
Though Aarti has her own reasons..there is no going back for her.. she can't hide anymore..!!

The COFFEE part was intriguing... Yash said to order coffee.. and Aarti (out of habit) asked for Black with 2 cubes of sugar... !! Mishti will be caught at this I guess...😆

Do continue.. Thanks.. Indu...😊





@Sia: Thanks Sia. 🤗

Yash has dared Mishti...and challenged her. Now it's up to Mishti to prove herself dead, because he won't take any flimsy reasoning.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Oh my God Indu, another brilliant update 👏. I love how Yash cut through the small talk and said straight on that she was Mishti. And poor Mishti came prepared with all her lines, and here was her Yashji throwing flirtatious lines at her, breaking down her walls 🤣. I am loving the suspense in the story.





@Nina: Thank you so much.🤗

Yup...Yash just tossed her carefully planned speech of three months outside the window by throwing her off balance...which was pretty much what he intended. It's like he challenged Mishti: "C'mon sweetheart...your turn now. Two can play this game."😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm. Sorry took so long to reply, as I wanted to read your update leisurely. And I am so happy that I waited and took my time to read it.

WOW INDU WOW. 👏⭐️👏

I just don't know how you do it. You are too good in writing and explaining even a smallest of thing. You don't miss a single detail. Each sentence, each dialogue is so thoughtfully written. They carry so much depth, so much meaning in them.

Your each update is ... I don't have words to describe it except 👏👏👏.

Please update soon and PM me again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Nikki: Thank you.🤗 Gosh, you leave me with no words to respond to such overwhelming comments...they are priceless and give me so much happiness...just to know that I managed a few smiles in you and in every single reader of Sparsh.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Nikki: Thank you.🤗 Gosh, you leave me with no words to respond to such overwhelming comments...they are priceless and give me so much happiness...just to know that I managed a few smiles in you and in every single reader of Sparsh.


I meant each and every word I wrote about you. Your imagination is amazing. 👏

Just loved this line so much " Yashji I found you once ... And lost you twice." It has so much depth in it. One could feel Aarti's pain in this very simple yet so meaningful line. 👏

I am glad that Yash recognized her, as he said in the end. Just hope that Aarti acknowledges this and not pretend that she is not misty. 😭

I don't like to see anyone suffering especially our beloved AarYa 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I meant each and every word I wrote about you. Your imagination is amazing. 👏

Just loved this line so much " Yashji I found you once ... And lost you twice." It has so much depth in it. One could feel Aarti's pain in this very simple yet so meaningful line. 👏

I am glad that Yash recognized her, as he said in the end. Just hope that Aarti acknowledges this and not pretend that she is not misty. 😭

I don't like to see anyone suffering especially our beloved AarYa 😭





Thanks Nikki. What Mishti does only she knows? 😃The problem with our genius dunces (even in PV) is that they think what they do for the other is always right and that to let go is a solution rather than a problem...so in doing the other some good they only end up hurting.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




@Ash: Thanks. I await your comments after each update. You have this cutely enthusiastic way of describing the nuances that catch your eye. I find that so endearing and fulfilling.🤗

(bokd) Aha...you caught that...good girl!! She might go all Saint on him at the moment, but at the end she is a girl who is insanely in love with her man...so there is bound to be a rattling in the heart on hearing that he is considering another girl.😉


I am always like that i tend to get involved in the story so much, become all the more excited and end up thinking about it all the time😆...
thanks a lot for that cute comment and i have always seen u take to each and everyone's comment and reply them personally... its really very sweet about u😳.
@bold... That's right after all she loves him with all her life and this is surely bound to disturb her. I hope Yash takes this chance to irritate her a little😉😆

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