Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 56

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Yash's outburst at the end made my heart jump into my mouth!

Loved the details about the coffee as well as the red roses...Oh, and Ansh in his Mickey Mouse pajamas, asking Yash to teach him karate!

Enjoyed every moment of it, Indu! But the coffee shop conversation - that I hope is only just about to begin - was fantastic.

"In fact she is here...now...sitting right in front of me, isn't she? Isn't she, Mishti?"

*Borna dies*

You would be a brilliant show or film writer...I can imagine everything you write so vividly. Sights, sounds, sensations...And that culminates in an incredibly powerful impact, every single time!

@Borna: Thank you my friend. I am glad I could elicit a response out of you with this one. I am glad you enjoyed those details...I had enjoyed writing them.

Aww Borna, that last part...you are much too sweetly biased my dear. Love you for that... 🤗 Well, I know my limitations...I am an editor, remember? So I am my own professional critique as well. And my advice to me would be..."Keep doing what you are doing, that is enjoying the writing...and don't start getting any ambitious ideas!!"😃

Originally posted by: maha9

Wow dear ur writing is going on to be excellent for each part by part.

I just want to say

Poor mishti too shocked to see the reaction of her beloved yash !!!

Please continue soon dear

@Maha: Thank you for the peach heart...🤗

@Isya, sweetone, Shree, and AmeTz: Thank you so much.Your comments and appreciation keep me going. 🤗

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Its mind blowing... I feel like awarding you Best writer award.. Wow.. Cant wait for your next update..

Thanks Puvi. Oh wow...that's the compliment of the highest order. You are such a sweetheart.

How have you been? Take care. Lots of hugs and best wishes go your way...🤗

Originally posted by: anushaarja

glad that i made you remember your grand pa... grand pas are the best in the world... and the update was wonderful!!! WONDERFUL indu... i loved it... but i don't like the fact that you always stop it at a cliffhanger... i was like...


jaldi update karo...😕😳

INDU,

My Dadu used to do the same thing
He used to start a story but it never ever used to end
But that was the beauty

ANU,

You are right friend
she always leaves us in cliffhanger
hope she listen to us for a quick update

Poor Indu !!!
kidding friend
take your time
creativity takes time
we know

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome Update Indu

Please Update the next part soon

@SAnonymous: Thank you so much my friend. 😊

Originally posted by: gcluv

Wow !!!! superb update INDU,

just superb
I am flowing with the emotions which yash and misti were going through
Oh !!!! I am so loving this Yash -- so sure of his misti ...
Misti --- Poor girl !! trying to fight her destiny . Doesn't she knows her yashji will find her by her mere presence

INDU ,
please update the next part soon as I am desperate to know the feelings of misti when confronted by her yashji

@Aditi: Thanks, my dear. I agree with you...Mishti should have known better than to take pangas with her Yashji...The man is a living radar where Mishti is concerned, sensing and picking up even the smallest wavelength emanating fro her.😃

I am trying to update every third/fourth day. Actually, each writing drains me completely...I get so emotionally involved with it that it takes a day plus for me to get over the hangover and even think of the next one. I hope you'll understand.😳

@Anusha: Trust you to have come up with such a thing to jolt me into a jaldi update.😆
Thanks...but I thought this was not much of a suspense and that you must have some idea now how Mishti might react... after she decides to lose her fish expression that is.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Anusha: Trust you to have come up with such a thing to jolt me into a jaldi update.😆
Thanks...but I thought this was not much of a suspense and that you must have some idea now how Mishti might react... after she decides to lose her fish expression that is.😊

am glad that my comment made you make your update come jaldi jaldi... but seriously... i have no idea... NO IDEA about Aarthi's reaction...she may again lose him...😕 wait she already said that she found him once and lost him twice... don't make her lose him for the third time

I've Got nothing to say but AWESOME!!!😊