Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 54

Fantastic Update dear

Yash's outburst at the end made my heart jump into my mouth!

Wow dear ur writing is going on to be excellent for each part by part.

Wow.. I'm totally speechless of your update everyday.. I felt it's just too awesome to read your story! You are a definite brilliant writer.. And yaar! Again a suspense! I'm loving Yash's character very much.. He's trying to dig Mishti.. The last part make my heart beat fast.. Do update soon! ASAP.. 😛

yet another amazing update. every time you write, you always leave me speechless and short of words to define your creative ability. kudos.

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

INDUUU...OMG this was again a more than fantastic update. I seriously wanna give you the biggest and tightest hug this world has got to offer. I really don't know how you do it but you never fail to make your updates better and better each time. I always have super high expectations reading your updates and you always deliver better than my expectations. I loved the way you delicately laid down arti's and yash's emotions throughout this part and in the last paragraph, I could feel every ounce of Yash's anger that I was baffled and stunned (I was putting myself in Mishti's shoes the whole time). You were THAT amazing in writing this part that I could easily slip into each character's shoes.

SUPERB JOB INDU... I'm really looking forward to Aarti's reactions to Yash's anger and his conformation on her being his Mishti.. LOVED it BIG TIME...

@Sheema: Thank you...and that hug is taken with a big smile. Well...Yash had to be angry, right? Here his senses, which have never failed him where his Mishti is concerned, discover a miracle...that she almost certainly is not only alive but also refuses to acknowledge him. Her entire being is a give away but she is not giving an inch away...and that's what's baffling him and is the basis of his anger.

Originally posted by: miti16295

awesome update

eagerly waiting for the next part

Thanks Miti.😊

Originally posted by: saf24

Oh my gosh Indu this is too good. I was waiting for this to happen and you did not disappoint at all.🤗 Fantastic update. Loved it

@Saf: Thank you. 🤗

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

I would reserve but I already have the major post on the other page😆. Didi, so much suspense is bad for my young heart😕

@Kadeen: What suspense? What did I do? ***Di pouting*** I won't hurt you even with a flower petal...that heart is too precious.🤗