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DMKJ_VB

@DMKJ_VB

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

awesome update yet again. I love how u have sketched Payal here. and of course Yash the father! awesome stuff. can't wait for the inquisition!

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Fab update Dear 👏👏

Haha oh my sounds like Aarti cooked a buffet 😛😆

I'm wondering the same thing Aarti how did priti get married? 😉

Can't wait for more...thanku 😊

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sweetone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

lovely update as usual. thumbs up.

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--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Lovely Update! Payal is indeed very sweet, she did what no one else could have done. I can't wait for the next update! Please Continue Soon! 😳

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

@Kat : O h so you thought of me wen u were making Pooja's character I feel so special😛😆 but I hope CVs don't take ur Pooja idea because I would feel so bad for Yash and Aarti tht they got a daughter who behaves lyk me 🤣 the real actors might wanna run away😆 good update though Yash is just lyk me wen it cums to making plans of physically abusing sum1😆

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PuvZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Awesome yar. The storyline is just getting better to amazing.

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Kat, firstly I'm replying to your post before your update. 😊 Thank you so much! And special thanks for considering my request and listening to my overactive mind's ramblings! 😆

Coming to your update, Pari had a miscarriage. Wow! That's really sad but I loved the way you used that situation to develop Payal's character! That was brilliantly done! 👏

Yash is a riot! 🤣 Firstly, he said "Ram Dulare and his minions"!! 🤣🤣 Could almost picture Bua's button eyes reaction to that, topped with the famous "Mere Bhagwan Ki Kasam"!! 🤣

Secondly, his awesome(according to him) idea of the inquisition! 🤣🤣

Simply loved it! 🤗

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Wow awesome update
payal loved her and yash practically pushing
vidhi and aarti away from the kitchen is so
nice i think CVs should give some rest to
vidhi from the kitchen for a while.
waiting for yash inquisition mmm sounds interesting.
pls update quickly.

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

@Kat: Such talent should come out of IF and more and more people should get a chance to appreciate such talent.

This is not amateurish stuff but very very adept storytelling by our in-house author.

Keep it up Kat !!!

You are staying true to the characters from the soap and still having them develop in your own unique way.

I don't know which characters i like more PV's or yours. LOL.

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Kat! You don't even know how much I am loving this.

Paridhi had a miscarriage,that's sad but you showed it so beautifully and Payal characterization is awesome!👏

Oh my! Yash,he is riot first his dialogue of "Ram Dulare and his minions" and then his idea of inquisition from Vikram.🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣That had me all cracked up!

Aarthi,her dialogue "I wonder how Priti ever got married",actually after reading this update I wonder that too!.🤣🤣🤣

Loved it!👏

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