ArYa SS: A Father's Trial - PART 5 Up (PG 22)

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Hi Vinu - you are back!! I was missing you 😭.

Yes, I do feel that the Payal in the show is different - she's more of a free spirit. At least, that's how I see her. So I built on that. Glad you liked it.

Let's see how the inquisition shapes up - haven't started writing it yet.

Take care and thanks for your input.

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

I am srs u knw they better don't put Pooja lyk urs in their story I will cry out of shame🤣

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Jazmin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

just ready part 3...loved it! i love the bonding that the parents have with the children...Ansh and Yash are too cute!! just adore them!! loved the inquisition...thats hilarious...i'll be back to read the next part shortly

JAZ

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@FireLordPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Kat I read all four parts in one sitting! It was amazing and I loved part 4 because of the way you depicted Payal's character. She hardly appears in the show and the way Samana and you have made her character in your respective stories makes her more real and appealing. I also loved the part where Paridhi had a miscarriage and Payal became the ray of light in both Prateik and Paridhi's life after their incident. Can't wait for your next update!

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

@Kat - Aww...aren't you the sweetest! 😊 Thank you and you're most welcome! Oh I have definitely noticed the lack of Bua. Please if you have to include her just make it a funny cameo! 🤣

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

What an intriguing update and as for Payal ,wow she truely has a very unique prsonality and a great sense of business

just another awesome update by you

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

awesome update dear. Continue soon

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Morris

@morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Fabulous update. 👏

Loved how you've presented Paridi-Payal relationship. Beautiful.

Waiting for the next update and thanks for the PM. 😊

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Yash as a father is soo soo adorable n loveable 😛
His possessiveness for Pooja was beautifully written 😛
Yash-Aarti scene was Gud 😉
This Vikram guy is in a fix 😆
Papa wants to rot him through inquisition 😆
update soon 😊

Naureen 😛

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

@Kesha - I think it would be hilarious if they showed a child like Pooja in the show!! Oh, and you had asked the meaning of "petu" - its an affectionate term for "glutton" 😆.

@Jaz - thanks. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

@Nina - thank you! Reading all 4 parts must have taken a while - thanks for taking that much time over my fiction. Glad you liked Payal - the thought was brewing for a while and I finally penned it - glad she turned out in a way that people liked her.

@Vanny - I don't have to include Bua - I would rather put her through an inquisition herself!!! But lets see if she decides to pop in to torment Vikram - haven't decided yet.

@Cutestar12, Maha9 - thank you!

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