PRC&Sanyo-Pyar Ki Imtihaan*New Ch14 added on pg24* - Page 6

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen

Thanks for your lovely words Zoah and so glad that you felt you were in their world😊

Wow👏.Wonderful update.Prithvi is caring husbend ,brother and also friend .U put emotion it in the story very good way.Very good written.Keep it up.

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen

Okay girls i know that i said i would only post 1 update a week but what can i say you guys have inspired me that my head is full of so many ideas, its hard to keep track😆😉. This is a short update for you all i hope you like it😊.

thanx saima 4 taking our request in2 consideration...its gud tat ur head is runng wid many ideas as v r also hungry 4 mre..thanx dear!!!!

Precap: Prithvi and Sanyo romantic moments😳😉

Chapter 4

'Bhaiya' Pratha shouted as she came breathlessly to a stop in the middle of the bedroom that her brother, his lovely wife and her gorgeous neice shared.

As her brother stopped stroking his wifes hair while she laid asleep in his arms, to raise a finger to his lips to indicate the need for quiteness, Pratha completly forgot the reason that had braught her to his room.

awesome way 2 introduce pratha...prcs carg nature 2wards her junglee billi aftr 4 yrs also is so touchng..tats wat i like abt him...he knos how 2 handle everythg...his indication 2 quieten up speaks of his authority....😃

She watched as her brother tenderly lifted Sanyo out of his arms to place her on the bed and after making sure she was covered bent his head to tenderly place a soft kiss on her forehead. As she continued to watch she saw her Sanyo Bhabi smile even in her sleep when her Prithvi kissed her and then felt like a introder when she watched her bother pick up his wifes hand and kiss it before placing it against her heart. saima i like his kissg of her hand n placg it agaginst her heart...these last lines speaks so much...wow man...so much sensitivity!!!!

Watching the simply moments like these between Prithvi and Sanyogita always made Pratha happy but also envious and her one wish was that she would find someone who would love her the same way that her brother loved his wife above and beyond anythiny else. As she was thinking this, a face popped into her mind.

Turning away from his wifes side to talk to his siter Prithvi wondered what had brought the smile to her lips and the colour to her cheeks.

'Kiya baatha hain' Prithvi asked bringing Pratha out of her dream world. As he watched his sweet little sisters cheeks turned even darker in colour, having been caught day dreaming, he continued and asked 'Meri Pyari Behna Ki Khusi Ka Karan Kone Hain' he asked.

'Koi Nahi Bhaiya, Hum sirf tum ko batane.. she stammered but before she could finish she was interupted

hes so aware..so sharp aww prc i jus luv u...saima i want 2 kiss ur forehead 2 4 such a brilliant piece of writg!!!😃

'Prithvi' Hearing his name Prithvi turned and with a shocked but happy laugh went to greet the newcomer.

'Samar Singh, tum yaha. Chittoragh mein sub teek tho hain' he asked automatically putting duty ahead of friendship.

'Sub teek hain, humko Delhi ki yaad aiye tho hum chaale aiy' answered his friend as they hugged, but Prithvi had noticed that Samar's gaze had moved to Pratha as he spoke.

As he watched his sister and friend communicate without communicating using their eyes, the way that him and his Sanyo did even in a crowded room, he surely can read minds n actions...silence speaks a lot!!! n Prithvi realised that somewhere along the years his siter had grown into a beautiful young woman just like his wife, and that the little girl who had followed him around and begged him to let her stay with him, might be ready to leave him. so touchng is tis line saima.... i luv the bondg of prc n pratha.....well written dear Continuing to watch his sister he thought about the man that had just greeted him.

This man who against all odds had gone from being an worthy opponent to a valued ally and who was know as dear to him as his childhood friends, and Prithvi thought about how maybe it was time that he gave him a new much more valuable title and wondered how Samar Singh would like Brother in Law.

wow wat lines saima...so rightly put in...so well described abt samar....

While Prithvi was lost in his thoughts, Samar had gotten equally lost looking into Prathas eyes. Golden Brown eyes, set in face that when framed by her long wavy hair stood out against her lovely tanned skin and made her cheeks look liky rosy apples when she blushed.

She knew that she was blushing and that her cheeks were flushed, she knew that her brother was in the room and she should look away from him but it had always been like this between them, starting from the first time they had met four years ago when he had come home with her brother and his wife.

beautifully described pratha...no wonder samar lost his heart out 2 her...love is such pure n a beautiful feelg ...tat i can almost relate 2 tis sweet couple😳

She could still remember seeing him walking into the Mehel behind Prithvi and Sanyogita, with Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir, his arm in a sling a testemont to the help he had provided her brother in bringing his new wife safely home. No it had been the look in his honey coloured eyes which had first stolen a piece of her heart.

His eyes had glowed like warm honey so that a stranger would have been forgiven for thinking that it was he who had been fighting for the one he loved. In his eyes she saw someone who belived in and was willing to risk everything for love.

wow👏👏👏 superb lines...saima i dunno wat 2 say...ur lines hve so much meang so much dept in2 emotions n feelings...im in awe as 2 how u write so perfectly

'Aach huwa tum aagaye hai, tum hamare saath humari pyari behan ki jaanem din ki kushi mein shamal hona' Prithvi said cheerfully while sadly thinking that this could be the last time his precious sister celebrated her birthday in Delhi if his mother agreed with his propsal and of cause he would have to ask his Junglee Billie he thought with a smile becuase if she thought an injustice was being done to her younger sister she would do worse than just calling him Bigdaa Rahees. so cute ...hes so smitten wid his jungleebilli!!

Hearing her brother voice Pratha rememebered where she was and quickly mumbled 'Hum Nandani ko dekh aithi' and hurried out of the room with one last look at her Samar.

Seeing the smile on her face as she left Samar knew that he had made the right decision in coming to Delhi, his heart felt lighter and for the first time in months, in fact since the last time he saw her Samar was truely happy.

As he watched the smile form on his friends face Prithvi felt sure that the decision he had made was the right one and as much as his heart ached with the thought of letting his sister go he was just as happy in the knowledge that she would be happy and most importantly loved.

hes so quick n he knos the decision tat hes taken wud b right 4 his sister...wat aman he is...a perfect hubby n a obeident son n a lovng dad 2 his sister....

'Chaalo' Prithvi said as he patted Samar on the back on the way out of the room, but not before stopping to make sure that his Billie was still sleeping.

awww ...i luv u saima... 😳

Hope you all enjoyed the update😊

wow, saima di, this was just outstanding! i dnt hav enough words to describe this, truly beautiful especialy the way u described pratha and samar was just mind blowing!