PRC&Sanyo-Pyar Ki Imtihaan*New Ch14 added on pg24* - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
simply beautiful, u have written this so beautifully, full of emotions and romance. loved this update, simply outstanding!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
wow saima di...........ur update was really superb👏👏👏............the love between PRC, sanyo n their little daughter was so evident through ur scenes that I got slightly emotional😭............it was awesome....will wait 4 the next part.😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

o wow, fabulous, amazing, awesome
saima behna kya jadoo thum ne sprinkle kiya, i jus loved nandini the way she called prc's frends thatha, so sweet, plzzz continue it was fantastic, hot and sizzling, nxt update aaj karo plllzzzz, if u love us and show some romance, and if u excuse me tho hum phir se read karege



Hi Shona. So glad that you liked the update sweety😊 Will try and post an update soon but might not be today as i am in another town to attend a wedding and will be driving home later today so will not have internet access😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen


'Sanyogita, Kya Hua?' Prithvi asked as he moved across the bedroom to the bed where his wife and daughter were.
'Kuch Nahi Prithvi' Sanyogita answered as she drew Nandani closer to her chest, to try and reassure herself that her daughter was really back in her arms. As she ran her hand over her daughters lovely curly brown hair, and bent to kiss the top of her head, Sanyogita felt her tears start again as Nandani reached up and put her arms around her neck before kissing her on the cheek.
Loved Sanyo- d Mother here!!!😳😳😳...awwww....i hav heard tht being a mother changez evry1z world...this description of urz is simple at d same tym, it carriez so much emotion!!!😳😳😳 Loved it a lottt Diiiii😳
However, suddenly his heart tightened in pain as he watched tears form in Sanyo's eyes and he was already on the bed ready to catch the first tear as it fell from her eye.
Catching Sanyogita's tear in his hand he closed it into a fist and brought it up to his lips and kissed it,
Ohh My God..thiz Guy is jst amazing....wot a lovely Hubby he is!!!😳😳😳...Fallin in love wid em....😳😳😳(he makez me fall in love wid em every nw n then!!😆)...Dii...Thiz scene is wonderfully written!!!😳😳😳...How i wish 2 get em as My hubby!!!😉
He knew his lovely wife had matured alot since their first meeting at the Koteshar Mandir to become the only woman worthy of being Delhis Maharani, but Prithvi had forgotten that Sanyo hadn't grown up the same way that he had and that she wasn't used to living with fear and caution having grown up as the shelterd daughter of Maharaj Jaichand.
Sooo true...😳....
'Pagaali, tum ko paatha nahi ke jub thak Prithvi or Sanyogita is duniya mein hain thab thak un ki Nandani ko koi bi haath nahi laga saktha'...I miss Prc sayin thiz kina dialoguez!!!😭😭😭...Thankz a lottt 4 Bringing it up in ur ff,diii!!!😳😳
Looking into her husbands lovely eyes Sanyogita was reminded that this was the man that had faced and overcome challenges as a boy that had defeated the men before him, she saw Delhi's Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan instead of just her beloved bigdaa Rahess and she finally belived that if there was a threat to her or her daughter then this man, her precious Prithvi would make sure that they were never harmed.....Loved hw Sanyo's thot went here...beautifully ritten diii!!!😳😳😳
Picking up Sanyo's hands so that he could lace their fingers together Prithvi whispered 'Sanyo, humari nani si pari so chuki hain, kya hum bi...U...Mr.Romeo!!!...Go n do ur work!!!..U r Dilli's Maharaj!!😆😆😆
'Prithvi, Bhabi...'
Prithvi quickly released Sanyogitas hands and moved sligtly away from her as Chand started speaking......Lol...His frndz bein 'Kebab mein haddiezz!!!😉...Loved it!!!😳😳😳
Prithvi watched with a mixture of annoyance and amazement as one by one like a chain of dominos Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir ended up in a pile in the middle of his and Sanyos bedroom. Chain of Dominoz!!!🤣...Sanyoz description aftr this is fabulouzz..No wonder he fell in love wid thiz gal...she remindz me f an ANGEL frm ur description!!!😳😳😳..Miss Prc n Sanyo!!!😭
'Thathas' cried Nandani unable to pronounce her c's, as she saw Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir....awww..Nandani callin his frndz'Thathazz'😳😳😳...hww chooo chweet...wanna take her in my armz n kiss her!!!😃 But givin tht mwaaaaaaah 2 u Diii...4 thiz wonderful ff😳😳😳
Prithvi sank back onto the bed as Sanyo leaned back into his arms she said to her husband
'Prithvi,Humari Nandani such mein Bigri Billie hain' as she watched her daughter sweet talk Sanjum into lifting her onto his shoulders. Lol...she neva 4getz this word 'Billi'😆...r u tryin 2 blame PRC 4 spoiling Nandani or somthin?😆😆😆
'Nay Sanyo, Humari Nandani pari hain. Humari pyari choti pari billie' Prithvi said laughingly. Then when Sanyo had stopped laughing and was silent Prithvi spoke again.
'Meri Pyari Sanyo, Hum bi Akeley Hain....'...he alwayz wanna spent som tym wid his beautiful wife...but neva getz enuff tym😭😭😭..Bichara!!!😆😆😆



Thankz a lottt 4 thiz wonderful upd8 diiii😳😳😳....w8ting desperately 4 d next update😳😳😳...lve ya!😳..n Thankz 2 Mehraan diii aswelll😳😳😳 i got motivated by d way she giv reviewzz...so thot f givin review in her style!!😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: mirchy



Thankz a lottt 4 thiz wonderful upd8 diiii😳😳😳....w8ting desperately 4 d next update😳😳😳...lve ya!😳..n Thankz 2 Mehraan diii aswelll😳😳😳 i got motivated by d way she giv reviewzz...so thot f givin review in her style!!😳😳



Hi Adi. Thanks alot Bena for the lovely comments and am really glad that you enjoyed the story😊 I will try and put some romance into the next update, but can't promise😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen

Hi everyone thank you all for waiting for my update sorry for the delay, hope you like the update.😊

Recap: Prithvi and Sanyogita married with a little daughter called Nandani. Sanyogita wakes up one morning and can not find her daughter, as she gets worried Prithvi walks in with there daughter. Sanyogita happy to see her daughter, takes her into her arms.

Chapter 2:

'Sanyogita, Kya Hua?' Prithvi asked as he moved across the bedroom to the bed where his wife and daughter were.
'Kuch Nahi Prithvi' Sanyogita answered as she drew Nandani closer to her chest, to try and reassure herself that her daughter was really back in her arms. As she ran her hand over her daughters lovely curly brown hair, and bent to kiss the top of her head, Sanyogita felt her tears start again as Nandani reached up and put her arms around her neck before kissing her on the cheek.
Prithvi stood by the bed silently watching his lovely Sanyo and precious Nandani and felt his heart expand in pride and love as he witnessed the affection between mother and daughter. However, suddenly his heart tightened in pain as he watched tears form in Sanyo's eyes and he was already on the bed ready to catch the first tear as it fell from her eye.
Catching Sanyogita's tear in his hand he closed it into a fist and brought it up to his lips and kissed it, then using both hands to raise Sanyogita's head so they were eye to eye he said 'Meri Pyaari Junglee Billie Istra Itney Kemthi aasu bahoge tho sari duniya mein adasi chaal jaye gey' and then learning forward he kissed her tenderly on the forehead.
Sanyogita looked into the lovely chocolate brown eyes of her husband and saw not only his love for her but his confusion and she knew that she could trust him with her fears the same way she already trusted him with her life. Taking a deep breath, Sanyogita spoke.
'Kuch nahi Prithvi, Nandani hum ko nahi milli tho hum daar..before she could finish Prithvi had enveloped her and Nandani into a hug so tight that she could swear that she heard his heartbeat.
As he held the two most precious things in his life in his arms, Prithvi was in turmoil thinking that his Sanyo had been keeping all her fears to herself. He knew his lovely wife had matured alot since their first meeting at the Koteshar Mandir to become the only woman worthy of being Delhis Maharani, but Prithvi had forgotten that Sanyo hadn't grown up the same way that he had and that she wasn't used to living with fear and caution having grown up as the shelterd daughter of Maharaj Jaichand.
Drawing away from Sanyogita, Prithvi looked down at his daughter who had fallen asleep in her mothers arms and knew that his life would be over if he ever lost either of his two girls. Lightly brushing back the hair that had fallen over his daughters' eyes he bent his head and softly placed a kiss on her head. As he lifted his head, Prithvi saw Sanyo was watching him.
'Prithvi, Hum..' before she could finish Prithvi brought a finger up and put it across her lips to silence her and then he spoke in his soft velvety voice.
'Pagaali, tum ko paatha nahi ke jub thak Prithvi or Sanyogita is duniya mein hain thab thak un ki Nandani ko koi bi haath nahi laga saktha'
Looking into her husbands lovely eyes Sanyogita was reminded that this was the man that had faced and overcome challenges as a boy that had defeated the men before him, she saw Delhi's Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan instead of just her beloved bigdaa Rahess and she finally belived that if there was a threat to her or her daughter then this man, her precious Prithvi would make sure that they were never harmed. Seeing the smile on Sanyos face, Prithvi felt himself begin to smile aswell.
Leaning forward carefully Sanyogita reached up and put her arms around Prithvi's neck and then whispered softly 'Ha Prithvi, jub thak Prithvi hain thub thak Sanyogita or Nandani ko kuch nahi hoga' in his ears before kissing him on the cheek. Prithvi grinned at Sanyo and seeing her blushing face her started to laugh softly.
Sanyo watched her husband and knew that he was going to say something to make her blush more by the twinkle in his eyes.
Picking up Sanyo's hands so that he could lace their fingers together Prithvi whispered 'Sanyo, humari nani si pari so chuki hain, kya hum bi...
'Prithvi, Bhabi...'
Prithvi quickly released Sanyogitas hands and moved sligtly away from her as Chand started speaking.
'Marf kardo Prithvi..' Chand started to say as he came to a sudden stop in the middle of the room after spotting Prithvi and Sanyo together, 'Hum...' but before he could finish he fell facedown on the floor with the breath knocked out of him.
Prithvi watched with a mixture of annoyance and amazement as one by one like a chain of dominos Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir ended up in a pile in the middle of his and Sanyos bedroom. As he started to speak the sound of Sanyo's laugh made him forget everything else. Turning to look at her Prithvi was left speechless, her eyes were twinkling like diamonds, her smile was the widest he had seen it since there little miracle was born, her skin had a glow and her cheeks were rosy red, she was simply stunningly beautiful.
Before Prithvi could say anything his attention was caught by a small hand and a pair of curious brown eyes. As his daughter saw that she had his attention, she lifted her arms up, smiled and said 'Papa' in that sweet little voice of hers that always melted his heart and made him her willing slave. Lifting Nandani out of Sanyo's arms he kissed her on the head and then threw her up in the air and caught her in his arms again just to hear her sweet little laughter. As she was sitting on her fathers shoulders Nandani spotted some of her favourite people.
'Thathas' cried Nandani unable to pronounce her c's, as she saw Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir.
As she started to kick her legs and pull his hair Prithvi knew that his choti billie was ready to be let down. Lowering her to the ground Prithvi watched as she made her way over to his friends but then suddenly stopped half way there and turned around again to come towards the bed and her mother.As she reached Sanyo she put her arms out to and waited until Sanyo picked her so that she could put her arms around her neck and kiss her, once she had done that Nandani walked over to Prithvi and pulled him down so that he was kneeling on the floor and then put her arms around his neck and kissed him to, before making her way back over to his friends.
Prithvi sank back onto the bed as Sanyo leaned back into his arms she said to her husband
'Prithvi,Humari Nandani such mein Bigri Billie hain' as she watched her daughter sweet talk Sanjum into lifting her onto his shoulders.
'Nay Sanyo, Humari Nandani pari hain. Humari pyari choti pari billie' Prithvi said laughingly. Then when Sanyo had stopped laughing and was silent Prithvi spoke again.
'Meri Pyari Sanyo, Hum bi Akeley Hain....'

I hope you all enjoyed the update😊

Oh Wow Sandy lovely Update buddy..👏⭐️ Awesome...😳😳😳 I am short of words for praising this part of the update buddy.😃 Keep it up would be waiting for the next part!😳😃 3 cheers & 3 hugs for this update!😳😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

simply beautiful, u have written this so beautifully, full of emotions and romance. loved this update, simply outstanding!



Thanks for liking the update sweety😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow saima di...........ur update was really superb👏👏👏............the love between PRC, sanyo n their little daughter was so evident through ur scenes that I got slightly emotional😭............it was awesome....will wait 4 the next part.😳😃



Oh thanks Kalyani so glad that you enjoyed it. Will try and update next part as soon as i can😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mehr, thank you co much for your comments you all ways leave me in depth comments which i really appreciate it as i am never certain that what i have written is good so it is realy nice to have feeback and appreciation. Thanks😊
ur welcome dear....we r alys here 2 guide u...mre importantly..we appreciate the hardwork n efforts tat u put in writg the ff...infact all of u...ur ff has touched my heart n waitg 4 ur update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Everyone, i went to a wedding today and was feeling all happy, so thought i would try and write a update with a bit of romance😊😳. Hope you enjoy it - its a bit short as i did it in the car on my way home from the wedding (obviously i wasn't driving😆)

Chapter 3



Precap: Sanyogita shares her fears with Prithvi. Prithvi upset that his Sanyo has been keeping her fears hidden. Nice moments between Prithvi and his daughter Nandani and we meet Nandani's Thataas😆 Prithvi and Sanyo left alone in their bedroom😳😉

'Meri Pyari Sanyo'Hum akeley hain' Prithvi said as he leaned forward to move sanyogitas hair away from her neck so that he could blow along it softly.
Hearing her Prithvi speak in a soft velvety tone of voice which she knew was reserved just for her sent a thrill through Sanyogitas body and when he blew softly across the back of her neck she got goosebumps all down her spine, and knew that her husband would be able to convince her to do anything he wanted when he set his mind to it, but Sanyo knew she had to resist him, atleast for know.
Sanyogita moved around on the bed so that she was sitting face to face with her husband because she needed to tell him something and she wanted to be looking at her Prithvi when she told him.
Bringing her hands up to frame Prithvi's face, Sanyogita used one hand to brush his hair, which just likes his daughters tended to, had fallen into his eyes. Pushing his hair back behind his ear Sanyogita again framed his face with her hands and looking into his eyes spoke.
'Mera Pyara Prithvi, Humko thumse Shukriya Keyna Hain'
'Kis Leye' Prithvi enquired
'Humari zindagi ke leye' answered Sanyogita
'Mutlab' asked Prithvi, not understanding what his Sanyo Billie was saying
'Mutlab, Tere pyar ke liya shukriya' Sanyogita said as she leaned forward to kiss Prithvi on the cheek.
'Mutlab, Humari nani si pari Nandani ke leye shukriya' she continued as she moved to kiss him on the opposite cheek
'Mutlab, Humari Zindagi ke leye shukriya' she repeated again as she kissed him softly on the forehead, before leaning back to look in his eyes again.
Prithvi knew tha if his friends saw him at this moment they would never stop teasing him but Prithvi honestly didn't care who saw the tears in his eyes that his wifes words had just produced. Just like he didn't care that his wifes kisses had made his cheeks turn redder than hers when he teased her, because as he watched his Sanyo watching him, all he could do was to thank god and his father for sending this precious woman into his life.
Sanyogita thought she knew how her husband would react to her words but even she never expected to see those lovely eyes of her Prithvi luminous with unshed tears.
'Aassu?' Sanyogita asked Prithvi as she reached up to wipe them from his eyes.
Catching hold of her hands Prithvi brought them up one by one to his lips and kissed her on the back of each hand. Lifting his finger he placed it under Sanyogita's chin and tilted her head back so that he could see her better.
'Jis tat hum tumari Zindagi hain, is tara tum bi humari zindagi hain. Mein tere bina nahi jee saaktha Sanyogita' he said before he softly placed a kiss on her lips.
His lips were as soft as a babies skin, Sanyogita thought at the first touch of Prithvi's lips on hers. She was always amazed as she had been from the first time he kissed her, at how soft his lips were, she just couldn't believe that even after 4 years and humdreds of kisses the same thought always seemed to pop into her head each time Prithvi kissed her.
As her body started to tingel Sanyogita knew that she would have to be the rational one and so reluctantly pulled away from Prithvi.
'Prithvi, Koi Aajaye Ga' she whispered softly as Prithvi tried to kiss her again.
'Such kaha thumne leken jub thak woh aaye hum dono yaha rai ge' Prithvi replied as he pulled Sanyogita back into his arms.
Giving up being responsible Sanyogita instead decided to lean back into her husbands arms and just enjoy being with the man she loved before the real world intruded again.

I hope you all enjoy the update,sorry its a short one😊

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