FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 8


Nitin called Pratigya to meet at Chaitganj...Krishna knew very well if Nitin will call, Pratigya will come,if Pratigya gets any hint that Krishna is also there,she will never come.


Pratigya listened everything,her eyes were spreading fire on Krishna,Krishna was smiling..this is such an insult for Pratigya.Nitin was looking guilty..Manorama was silent.Pratigya said,"You two soon get married,else Manorama's Dad will spoil everything"..

"Arre aap fikar naa kare Pratigyajee,in dono ki saadi ki jimmedari humari hai..hum dekhte hain kaun sala rokta hai in dono ko.."..Krishna said cheerfully..

"You shut up..I am not talking to you..Nitinjee and Manorama..I wish you all the happiness in life..best of luck.."..Pratigya said and left that place.She went to her Uncle's house and said to Dadi,"Pack everything,we are going to Allahabad..get prepared soon.."..

Dadi was dumbstruck.."Par kyaa hua..yeh toh bata Beta..tu toh shaadi k do din pahle.."..Dadi couldn't complete.."Koi shaadi nahi ho rahi hai Dadi..sab khatam ho gaya.Chaliye yehan se.."..Pratigya said..

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Shyamjee was silent,Nainajee was sheding tears,Adarsh was fuming in anger, Arushi looked helpless..Jagmohanjee appologised again and again..he was also surprised to see Manorama with Nitin..they got married in a temple and came to Allahabad.Krishna escorted them all the way."Shrivastavjee..ghar me Bahu aai hai..swagat sanskar me kauno kumee naahi ho..jashan manao..khushi ka maahol rakho.."..Krishna said shamelessly..

Saxena house was in deep grief,how will they face Pratigya?It was their insistance which made Pratigya to agree for the marriage..but now what?

"Kyaa hoga jee..log kyaa kahenge?"..Nainajee said tearfully..

"Logon ki baat ki parvah hum nahi karte Nainajee..yeh sochiye Pratigya ko kaise samhalegi..usne is shaadi k naa sirf haan kaha..bal k shaadi bina kisi rukavat k ho jaaye issi lia usne har koshish ki..sab theek hi ho raha tha...par aise me..Nitin ka yeh sach .."..Shyamjee said worriedly..


"Papa..pahle toh Nitin se main baat karoonga.."..Adarsh was very angry..

"Beta..ab koi faaida toh nahi..Manorama..Nitin ki Biwi hai..apna sab kuchh chhor kar Nitin k saath chali aai..aise me unki zindagi me dakhal dena theek nahi hai.. Manorama ka toh koi dosh nahi hai.."..Shyamjee pleaded..

"Dosh toh meri Bahen ka bhi koi nahi Papa..fir uske saath aisa kyun hua?Usne kisika kyaa bigada tha?Humne kisika kyaa bigada tha Papa..jo hum aaj yeh din dekh rahe hain..?"..Adarsh roared..

"Shaant ho jaao Adarsh..gussa karne se kuchh haasil nahi hoga..Pratigya ko yeh sab batana hoga..usko samjhana hoga..usse samhalna hoga..tumhari Dadi..woh toh toot hi jaayengi..unke baare me socho.."..Nainajee requested..

"Nainajee..woh toh theek hai..par ab sochiye..Krishna ko har baat ka pata hai..ussise bachne k lia Pratigya Banaras chali gayi thi..shukar is baat ka manaiye k Pratigya ko kuchh nahi hua..Krishna k lia mushkil nahi tha Pratigya ko wahan se utha lena...humen issi baat ka darr hai k woh Krishna ab kyaa karega.."..Shyamjee was really worried about Pratigya.

"Didi ko lene Bhaiya ,aap chale jaao na..phone par sab batana theek nahi hoga.." ..Arushi said..

"Nahi..abhi kuchh din aur woh rahe wahan..."Nainajee couldn't complete,the door bell rang..Nainajee found Pratigya and her Dadi standing there..Pratigya went to her room ..Nainajee couldn't take it anymore,she hugged her mother-in-law..and bursted out with tears..


"Maa..aap dono itni jaldi kyun chale aaye?"..Shyamjee asked..

"Pata nahi Beta..parso shaam ko Pratigya boli k humen ghar lautna hai..aur bhi keh rahi thi k koi shaadi nahi hogi..sab kuchh khatam..usne aur kuchh nahi bataya ..baat kyaa hai Shyamu..sab theek hai na?"..Dadi questioned..


"Ohh God..that means Pratigya knows everything..ohho..she must had met Nitin there.."..Adarsh went to Pratigya in a hurry..


Dadi listened everything..tears dropped from her eyes.."Yeh sab kuchh us Krishna ka kaam hai.."..Dadi shouted..

"Maa..us ladke ko dosh kyun de hum?Nitin hi toh gaya tha..Manorama ko lene.. baaharwalon ko dosh dene se asliat nahi badlegi.."..Nainajee said..

"Teri baat bhi sahi hai Bahu...sara kia dhara Nitin ka hai..arre jab us ladki se itna pyaar tha..toh aaya hi kyun Pratigya se milne..aur jab sab tai ho gaya..tab usko yaad aai us Banaraswali ladki ki..."...Dadi cried..

"Maa..yeh toh achha hua..k shaadi se pahle sab pata chal gaya..shaadi k baad agar yeh baat pata chalti..tab toh aur takleef hoti..Pratigya ko samhalna hai humen..usne aapse kuchh aur nahi kaha?"..Nainajee said..

"Nahin...pure raaste usne ek bhi baat nahi ki..kitna puchha maine..par kuchh kahe tab naa.."..Dadi said.."Adarsh..Beta kuchh kaha usne?"..Dadi said when she saw Adarsh coming from Pratigya's room..

"Jee..wahi jo humen baad me pata chala..woh sab se pahle jaan gayi thi..Nitin ne hi kaha usko.."..Adarsh said..

"Iska matlab..us shaam woh Nitin se hi milne gayi thi..phone aaya tha ek..baahar gayi..aur kaafi der baad waapas aai..aur mujhse kaha k ghar lautna hai,kyaa hoga ab Adarsh?"..Dadi asked..

"She will be fine..thoda waqt lagega...par sab theek ho jaayega..."..Adarsh consoled his grand mother...

Then Pratigya came..after having a bathe.."Mummy..bhookh lagi hai.."..she said..

"Haan..Maajee..aap bhi naha lijiye..dopaher k 2 bajne ko hai..khana khaa lete hain sab..."..Nainajee said..


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After lunch,whole family sat together..Pratigya said each and every details.."You people don't worry..aisa kuchh hua nahi hai..zindagi abhi khatam nahi hui..aur theek hai..bura hua hai..par itna bura nahi jisse hum itne dukhi ho rahe hain..yeh toh achha hua k Nitin aur Manorama ka rishta kamyab hua..Thakur Gagan Singh is a very dangerous man Papa..I have seen Manorama..she will have a better life.." ..Pratigya said calmly..


"Teri toh zindagi barbad ho gayi na..Beta..,ab tera kyaa hoga?"..Dadi cried..

"Dadi please..duniya me Nitin hi akela shaadi k laayak ladka nahi hai..aur meri zindagi ko kuchh nahi hua hai..kisime itna dum nahi k meri zindagi kharab kare.. aap rona dhona chhoriye..aap sab log bhi..please..cheer up..aisa kuchh nahi hua hai..leave it..bura sapna samajh kar bhool jaaiye.."..Pratigya said and marched towards her room..

"Ab k uske lia ladka dhoondenge..toh sab kuchh jaan lenge pahle se.." Dadi said..

"Maa..abhi kuchh maheeno k lia yeh sab bandh rakhte hain..woh roi nahi hai iska matlab yeh nahi k usko zara bhi dukh nahi hai..usko is ghum se ubharne dijiye.." ..Shyamjee said..

"Tab tak kyaa karegi woh?"..Dadi asked..

"Kyaa karegi..Law ki padhai karegi..aur kyaa..form toh bhar hi dia hai..Scholarship bhi mila hai..yeh mauka chhorna nahi chahie.."..Adarsh said..

"Haan Beta..yehi sahi hai..padhai k beech rahegi..toh yeh sab khayal nahi aayenge..meri hi ghalati hai..naa main shaadi k lia zor daalti.."..Dadi said guiltyly..

"Maajee..aap aisa kyun soch rahi hain?Uski bhalai k lia hi kaha tha aapne..ab aisa hoga..aapko toh pata nahi tha..aap kyun aisa keh rahi hain..itna mat sochiye.. kismat me tha aisa hona..ho gaya..ab bhool jaaiye yeh sab.."..Nainajee requested..

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Krishna was laid on his bed..thinking about Pratigya.Her face,her smile..her anger, Krishna started to grin..totally ignoring the patt on his shouldier.."Baba..Baba..kaa hua..kaa soch raha hai..itna muskura raha hai..kaa hua?"..Thakurain asked..

"Kaa..Amma..tum bhi..Pratigyajee k baare me soch rahe the..aap bhi na.."..Krishna said blushingly..

"Ohhhoo..Partigyajee!!Abhi tak uska bhoot naahi utra..tere sar se?Tere Baojee ko agar pata chal gaya..."..Thakurain said..

"Baojee kaahe naraj honge Amma..ghar k lia Bahu hi toh laa rahe hain hum.." ..Krishna said grinningly..

"Arre uu Kayasth hai...baat tohar bheje me kaahe nahi ghusti?"..Thakurain shouted..

"Pyaar karne se pahle soche the kaa..k humri jaat ki nahi hai?Aur Amma..jaat ka kya murabba banaogi?Ladki ko dekho Amma..padhi likhi..khubsurat..."..Krishna explained..

"Padhi likhi se kaa karna hai tumko?Tum kaun se Mahapandit ho?Ek kitaab toh kabhi padhe nahi dhyaan se..aur chale Porfesor ki padhi likhi Beti se saadi karne.. tumko bandar naach nacha k chhoregi..batai rahe hain.."..Thakurain said with great disgust..

"Amma..humre paas itni daulat hai..uu logon k paas padhai likhai..haisiat me itna koi fark nahi na hai..dekhogi na usko..dekhti reh jaaogi.."..Krishna said cheerfully..

"Uu bhi pyaar karti hai tumse..?Humen toh lagta nahi k tumko take k bhaao bhi puchhti hogi.."..Thakurain said..

"Pyaar karegi Amma..ek baar saadi ho jaaye..tab toh humen bhi bhaao dena hai usko.."..Krishna said grinningly..

"Tumne uske Baap ko dhamkaya..uske baad bhi tumri Bahin ko ghar pahoochake gaya uska Bhai..Adars..is baat ka ehsaan toh maano.."..Thakurain said..

"Baojee ne kaam dia tha unibersity k elecsion ka..ab uu Porfesor Partigyajee ka Baap niklega..humko kaa sapna aaya tha?Bina jaane hi gaye..aur rahi baat Adars ki..haan..Komal aaj sahi salamat hai..oke wajah se..maante hain..hum bhi uski Bahin ko kyaa agva kar rahe hain?Yaa faansi par chadha rahe hain..saadi hi karna chaahte hain..baar baar Adars ki duhai kaahe deti ho?Hum se badh kar uuu sala Adars ho gaya ka?Damad banaogi oka?"..Krishna said in a frustrated tone..

"Damad..kaas,aisa ho paata..kaa kare Kayasth hai..oke jaisa humar bhi Beta hota.. kitna achha hota..itna sareef..par himmatwala..kaa khubsurat chehra hai..itna lamba kadh hai..gora rang hai..teekhe nain naks..kaa awaj hai.."..Thakurain started dreaming about Adarsh..


"Haan..Amma..ab socho..Adars ko dekhi ho..tab tumhara yeh haal hai..ab samjho.. Partigyajee ko dekh kar kaisi chhoori chalti hai dil me..jaat paat ko rakho taak par..Amma..log jab dekhenge..sundar padhi likhi Bahu..kauno nahi puchhega k Thakur hai ya Kayasth.."..Krishna said..


"Choop reh besaram...Partigyajee..Partigyajee..aisa kabhu naahi hoga..tohar Baojee..jinda gaar denge toka jameen pe..par Kayasth ki Beti ko ee ghar ki Bahu naahi sweekar karenge...tu bhi hos me aa..chal..baahar sab tujhe bula rahe hain..Gagan Singh se baat karne wale the tohar Baojee.."..Thakurain said..

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"Aap agar phone karoge toh bhi kachhu nahi bolega uu Gagan Singh..oo ki Betia.. Manorama bhaag kar saadi kar li hai..abhi Allahabad me hi hai..oke Pati ka naam hai Nitin Srivastav..Nitin ki saadi ki baat Partigyajee k saath chal rahi thi..par Nitin aur Manorama ka taanka pahle se bheeda tha..Nitin Banaras gaya tha usko laane k lia.."..Krishna announced..

Thakur Sajjan Singh remained shocked,..."Toka ee sab kaise pata be?" Thakur asked..

"Uu kaa hai..Partigyajee bhi Banaras me thi tab,kauno ristedar k ghar ma.. Chandu aur Tunna ne bataya k Nitin bhi jaa raha hai Banaras..hum bhi gaye oka peechhe.. usko achhe se kharcha paani dene k lia..par jaa kar dekha ..Nitin Partigyajee k lia naahi..Manorama se milne gaya hai.."..Krishna gave the details..


"Ohho..toh us din tu issi lia ghayab raha ghar se..sasoor Banaras gaya tha..Gagan Singh k hote kaise bhaagi uski Betia..be?"..asked Sajjan..

"Hum hi toh madad kie rahe Baojee..Partigyajee ki jindagi se uu langoor Nitin ko hataya humne..Manorama ki saadi ussise hui jisse uu pyaar karti hai..pehra de kar hum hi saadi karvaye rahe...punnya ka kaam kie na Baojee?"..Krishna questioned curiously..


"Saale...tu ee sab kar raha hai..Thakurain..sach bata..kaa khaa kar paida kia raha is nalayak ko..sasoor..khud toh doob raha hai..doosre Thakuron ki Betion ko bhi ghar se bhaga raha hai..kis janam ka badla le raha hai be?Nikal..mere saamne se hat..toka aaj hum jinda na chhorbo..Saktia..nikaal bandook..aaj ee ka.."..Thakur Sajjan Singh got up..

His mother rang the bell...Sajjan was too furious to handle.."Baba..tu jaa yehan se..tere Baojee bahut gusse me hai..Baba tu jaa.."..Thakurain pushed Krishna out of the house...Krishna left disgustedly..


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
dkmystery thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
you have so wonderfully included the Hindi dialogues, jst luved it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: dkmystery

you have so wonderfully included the Hindi dialogues, jst luved it!



I am very sensitive about authenticity.😃




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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya the dialogues man....they r exactly as if am seeing the pratigya show in frnt of me........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great! Love The Language Its Really Good And Funny As Well..Good Work! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANX a lot for the fast update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: limits

THANX a lot for the fast update😊



Thanks for the comment..keep reading.😃




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Posted: 15 years ago
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You have portrayed Pratigya's character very well 👏 She is strong and aisa hi show main bhi hoona chahiye tha, the way they publicized it! But in show her charatcer came out to be crap, all scary and confused! 😕

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This chp was awesome.Just one request.In the next chp pls keep more sequences where Pratigya and Krishna get to talk more each other.And yeah abt Pratigya's character,I like the way u've portrayed her in ur ff more than the way she has been portrayed in the show.She's more bold and confident in ur ff. 😃
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Originally posted by: pritirays

You have portrayed Pratigya's character very well 👏 She is strong and aisa hi show main bhi hoona chahiye tha, the way they publicized it! But in show her charatcer came out to be crap, all scary and confused! 😕



Actually from the early promos..I thought that Pratigya will be like my fiction..but it's gross..neither I can stand Krishna nor I can sympathize with Pratigya,,now a days I am fully engulfed in Thakur Sajjan Singh.Can't help it,but I had no choice.😕



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