FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya

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It was a usual day ,Sangam was crowded like any other day.Thakur Sajjan Singh was there with his whole family.His wife,his mother,elder son Shakti and his wife,Komal,Thakur Sajjan's daughter and Krishna ,the younger son of Thakur Saab.

It was 5 o'clock in the morning,the east side of the sky was enlightened with the rays of the sun.The Thakur family was there to offer a thank to the God for the recent success of Thakur Saab.He gained the contract to make the road between Allahabad and Gorakhpur.Big deal indeed.It was certainly an occasion to thank the God or the Goddess.


Professor Shyam Saxena was there with his family to make a pray for the marriage of his elder daughter Pratigya.Adarsh,Pratigya and Arushi ,Prof. Saxena was very proud of his three children as they all were well educated and well mannered with great human values as Prof. Saxena always thought about them to be.He always thought that it was because of Naina,his wife who raised the children with great care.Naina thanked to the God for giving her a husband who not only loves her but also respects her a lot.Her mother-in-law always treated her like a daughter of her own.Naina has a dream that her son-in-laws will just like Prof. Saxena so that her daughters can get a life full of peace,love and respect.


On the contrary,Sajjan Singh's wife and daughter -in-law were there to complain about their fate,their miserable lives.Thakur Saab,Shakti and Krishna ,three wild bulls,it was a tough job to adjust with them,Thakurain was also worried about her daughter Komal.Komal also became wild and ill mannered because of the company of her father and two brothers.It was a great matter to worry that how Komal will adjust in her married life.


Two families,like north pole and south pole were in the same place.One was to thank and another was to pray.Komal and her brother Krishna moved to the stalls to purchase some funny stuffs,Shakti was on his feet to protect his father ,Thakur Sajjan Singh,with his newly bought gun.Thakur and Thakurain was seated in front of the Pandit chanting the mantras while Thakur's mother and Shakti's wife were observing the ritual with eagle eyes.The rituals were done,now Thakur searched for his younger son,Krishna.."Yeh Kisna kidhar gaya?"

"Abhi bula k laate hain..yeh ladka sahi jagah par kabhi teekta hi nahi.."..Shakti replied and went to get Krishna and Komal.


Krishna came with a frustrated mood and said,"Puja kar liye..ab chalo..ghar chalo.."

"Behoode kahin k..puja naahi kia tu theek hai..Sangam par aakar bina doobki lagaye jaayega ka be?Chal..dhoti pahin le..aur utar paani me..".. Thakur ordered..

"Amma..ab ee sab hum se naa hoga..naha kar toh aaye hain ghar se.."..Krishna argued.

"Abe apni Amma ki taraf mat dekh..jo keh rahe hain..wahi kar..behoode badtameez kahin k.."..Thakur Saab got angry..

Krishna had no choice but to have a bath in the Ganges.

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Saxena family was also done with there rituals.Shyam's mother advised them to have a nominal bathe in the river.As the sun will be brighter,more and more people will gather,so many foreign tourists will also come,so it's better to have the bathe in early hour.


Shyamjee and Naina get ino the river,Arushi was scared so Adarsh was with her.. Pratigya did not need any helping hand.They were praying facing the sun.



Except Krishna all were done with their holy bathing,Thakur looked for Krishna, "Baba kidhar gaya?"

"Bhaiya toh tairte hue nadi k us taraf chala gaya.."..Komal informed her father..

"Ee ladka bhi..pahle toh paani me utarne ko raazi nahi tha...ab dekho..." ..Thakurain said..

"Chalo theek hai..hum us taraf chalte hain..Sakti..chaai mangavao...Baba aa jaaye..fir chalenge.."..Thakur Saab advised.



Krishna dived under the water,and when he got over it..he experienced a mesmerising view.

A beautiful girl,in the water to her stomach line,fully wet,water dropped on her face from the wet hair.Sun rays fell on her face,which made her looking very bright,peaceful.She wore a sky blue dress with white chunri.The girl was praying to the sun,her eyes were closed and palms were folded in a praying posture.



"Pratiyga...chalo Beta.."..the middle aged lady called the girl,possibly her mother. The girl opened her eyes..her eyes met Krishna's eyes.The girl felt akward a bit by seeing Krishna..Krishna smiled but her face got tightened.She turned back and got out from the river..

Now Krishna looked at himself..he was wearing only dhoti,his upper body was naked..this may be the reason of the girl's feeling awkward .Naturally,any unknown man would come in front of you with a bare body,it is normal to react in that way..


Krishna wanted to follow her but then he felt a patt on his shouldier,he turned back,it was his brother,Shakti."Kahan reh gaya tha?Chal..Baujee bula rahe hain, ghar chal..chal ab..", Shakti almost dragged him..


Pratigya,yes her name is Pratigya,nice name.Facing the sun she was praying,as if she was taking a oath.Pratigya,means oath,the name certainly suits her.

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Pratigya was walking with her family with an aloof mind.The family wants her to get married.But she is not feeling anything about it.Just let it be.Dadi wants her to be safe from the local goons and the road romeos ,it's better to be married instead of chased by any lumpen.Already she has faced a loafer in the river..he was an idiot,no shame,no manner,with a bare body he was standing before her. Inappropriate hair cut,unshaven face,improper glance..


"Pratigya,kyaa hua?Kahan khoi ho?"..Adarsh asked..

"Nothing Bhaiya..it's just nothing..itne din baad Sangam aai..subah ka nazara ..achha laga.." Pratigya managed to say..


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Arushi and Dadi took one rickshaw,Shyamjee started his scooter accompanied by Naina,and Pratigya was on Adarsh's bike..

Krishna was staring at the passing figure,the same girl,Pratigya,possibly they were going back home.He saw the passing bike in the view finder of his jeep.. "Pratigya,theek se mera kandha pakdo..geer jaaogi.."Adarsh warned her..

Holding his brother's back,Pratigya looked back ,a jeep was coming..the guy she met in the Sangam was in the jeep..he was also looking at her.




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Part 1-Pg 1,Part 2-Pg 2,
Part 3-Pg 3,Part 4-Pg 4,Part 5-Pg 5,Part 6-Pg 7,Part 7-Pg 8, Part 8-Pg10,Part 9-Pg 12,Part 10-Pg 14,Part 11-Pg 14,Part 12-Pg 16,Part 13-Pg 18, Part 14-Pg 21,Part 15-Pg 23,Part 16-Pg 26,Page 17-Pg 31,Part 18-Pg 34,Part 19-Pg 37,Part 20- Pg 38,Part 21- Pg 41,Part 22-Pg 43






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If this fic is so good,then I must get more comments..😛


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I loved how you described the contrast between the two families. and I just loved the beginning and how you introduced the two families. Can't wait to see how the story moved forward...I loved how prats and krishna see each other for the first time😳
aww..☺️...he was only wearing his dhoti...and his upper body was naked..
☺️☺️..wish they would show that in the show.
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Awsomeeee..loved each n every part of it..
plzz update soon..cant wait to read next part :)

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Thanks to all readers and silent readers..it was a request from reader that Hindi is being difficult..but to give the flavour it is necessary to use typical UP tone..so I have used a mixture of Hindi and English in my next update..




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Part 2



The same day,after the sunset..Krishna was chating with his friends,Chandu and Tunna.The usual talk among friends,Chandu was talking about a chap named Angad..who was slapped by a girl at the railway station in Allahabad..of course in exchange of Angad's sick behaviour the girl gave the slap.


"Bhaiya..what are you thinking?Angad is asking me to help..he wants to teach the girl a
good lesson .." said Tunna..

"This is your friend Tunva..such a useless creature..to teach a girl a good lesson he needs a helping hand..wow..usne khud kya choodian pahen li hai?Don't irritate me now.." Krishna was in another world..he was viewing the sunset..the same effect like the dawn..not so dark , not so bright..that was the beigining of the day,this is the begining of the night..and a bright face enveloped by the soft sun rays is clearly coming before Krishna..the face of the girl he met at Sangam.. Pratigya..


"Bhaiya..Bhaiya...do something..Angad is really upset.." Tunna said..

"Okay..but I will find out..if the girl is really guilty then I will step forward..else I am out of it..not interested to mess with a girl.." Krishna declared..

"Yes Bhaiya..sure..I will call Angad now.." Tunna became really happy..

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"Papa..I am getting the scholarship..please let me take the admission for LLB.." ..Pratigya requested to Shyamjee.

"You have returned from Lucknow few days ago..now again you are planning to go away from home..please Pratigya..don't do it.." Nainajee pleaded..

"Mummy,I am not going anywhere..I am getting the scholarship in Allahabad University..you please tell Dadi..why she is so against of my further study?" Pratigya argued..

"No..means no..here I am planning for your marriage..you have graduated..you want to study more now?Zyada padh likh gayi..toh ladka milna muhskil hoga.. Shyam..tell Pratigya that she had studied enough.."..Dadi became upset..

"Mother,she is not going away,she will be in Allahabad University,I will also be there..you don't have to worry.." Shyamjee said..

"And what about Jagmohan..will he permit Pratigya to study further?" Dadi asked..

"I know that family,Nitin is also well educated..I don't think Pratigya's further study will be an issue..and she will be an advocate then..it will be our as well as their pride.." Shyamjee said..

"No Beta..I don't think that is a good idea.." Dadi said..

"Okay,but they hadn't seen Pratigya yet..let them come..meet us..after the meeting, if the recommend her study for LLB..then I am sure there will not be any problem.. what do you say mother?Then it's alright na?" Shyamjee said..

"Yes Dadi..let us know their opinion..if they have no problem..then Pratigya can surely study further.." Adarsh said..


"Well..in that case..I am okay with it..I am not against her study Beta..I am just worried about her safety,situation is not good outside..we hear bad newses about girls elopement or disgrace on every second day..once she gets married..Pratigya
and Arushi both get settled in their married life..we can be relaxed..you know what I am saying.." Dadi pleaded..


"Yes Dadi..I know how much you love us..you don't worry...abhi der hai session shuru hone me teen maheena baaki hai..tab tak sab sulajh jaayega..you please don't worry..it's not good for your health..Papa..please tell her na.." Pratigya said...

"Yes my dear..you,Adarsh and Arushi..my three gems..you all be happy and established..what more I can ask for..and Nitin..as per my thinking,he is a good boy..once they likes you..I think your marriage will be fixed with Nitin..you will
really be happy sweet heart.." Dadi said smilingly..

Pratigya gave her Dadi a big hug..everyone became happy..after all it's Pratigya's life..it must be perfect and full of happiness..Adarsh said that he had decided to appear in the Civil Service Examination..he is already doing a job..but he has bigger dreams about his life..but ofcourse not choosing any wrong way..

"So Pratigya,kal tum subah mere saath chalna university,form submit toh kar do..fir tum chali aana..ghar..okay Beta?" Shyamjee advised..

"Jee Papa.." Pratigya replied similngly..


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"Be a man,to face a mere girl..you need help..shame on you..choodian mangva de tumhare lia?" Krishna said in a frustrated tone..

"Now leave it na Bhaiya..Angad..when your girl is coming..?Bhaiya doesn't have much time.." Chandu asked..

"I have been following since last week..aaj subah dekha University ki taraf gayi hai..issi raaste se waapas ayegi...don't worry Bhaiya.." Angad assured them..


Suddenly Krishna's mobile rang.."You people carry on..Baujee called..I will be back in few minutes...yes..Baujee..what is it?I am busy now..ask Shakti Bhai to go.. no..Baujee..hum sach keh rahe hain..zaroori kaam hai..Dadi teerath se aa rahi hain..woh hum kaa kare..?Sakti Bhai ko bhejo.."

Krishna was busy with the phone call..in the mean time..Pratigya was coming on a rickshaw..she was alone..she saw the same chap whom she slapped was with some more chaps like him..and they seemed to be awaiting her as they knew that
she will come in this way..they started to encircle the rickshaw with their bikes....


Rickshaw driver was compelled to stop his vehicle..The chaps were whistling at her..passing comments..Pratigya had no choice but to come down on the road..

"So..she is the one..Angad..I must say..she is really pretty..but how can she be so ruthless..you were showing your love to her..and she slapped you..!! Not fair.." Tunna said in a mocking tone...


"I have slapped him..why you are attacking me?" Pratigya asked in a raw tone..

"Ohhoo..she has guts..I must say..Krishna Bhaiya kahan gaye yaar..bulao unko.. wahin aakar utaarenge is laundi ki garmi..." Angad said..

"You bas***d..how dare you?Usdin ka thappad bhool gaye kya?I guess that wasn't enough.." saying this Pratigya made another attempt to slap Angad..and then one strong grip stopped her wrist..it was a tight hold..then the eyes met again..


Krishna was stunned to see Pratigya again,not in his wildest dream ,he thought that he would meet her like this..she was the one who slapped Angad..!


Jugnu and Lucky was showing their teeth.."Bahut achhe Bhaiya..maza chakhao isko..Angad Bhaiya ko chata maara..Police ne utthak baithak bhi karvai hum teeno ko.."..

"Haath chhodo humara..haath chhodo..." Pratigya ordered..

Krishna was looking at her..."Logon ko thappad maarne ka bada saukh hai aapko.. is tarha akeli sadak pe..jab kai saare launde aapko ghere hain..aapko nahi lagta k aap bewakoof hain jo inse ulajh rahi hain.."..asked Krishna..

"Haath chhodo..." again said Pratigya..

Krishna left her wrist.."Ee dekh be Tunna..Bhaiya k saamne kaise bheegi billi ban gayi..ab tak toh serni bani thi...Angad se badtameezi karne ki saza toh milni chahie isko.."..Chandu said..

"Ohh really?You really think so..that is why you guys made this arrangement..just to harras me..just to make the account clear on behalf your friend who is nothing but a social menace..let me know,if your own sister or any other woman of your own house..would have been teased and ill treated by your friend..then this same arrangement would have been set up by you..after all your friend is special..he can do any thing..but no one can stop him..the one who stopped him,is guilty,rather a criminal according to you..isn't it..answer me.." Pratigya shouted...


"Bhaiya..what are you waiting for.."..Angad was about to say something..

"Shut up Angad..you are the one who should say sorry to her..now..say sorry to her..come on.." Krishna instructed..

"Bhaiya..."..Angad opposed,"Kaan k neeche bajaye ka ?Maafi maango..inse.." Krishna said with attitude...

"Sorry..." Angad said to Pratigya..


"Aap jaaiye...Pratigyajee..dobara yeh aapko pareshan nahi karega..jaiye aap..." ..Krishna ordered the rickshaw driver to take Pratigya to her home...

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"What is this Bhaiya..?Why did you let her go?"..Tunna asked..

"What she said ,perfectly true..Angad ill treated her..today Pratigyajee..next day may be your sister or my sister..it can happen..if we don't stop Angad now..accept that ,Angad is guilty..not Pratigyajee.." Krishna concluded..

"And you ..Angad..listen to me carefully..never ever chase her..if you do so..I will just ruin your life...and stop misbehaving with girls..I know very well..that you started all these..you got what you deserved..Lucky..Jugnu..you also listen carefully..if I ever catch you guys disturbing Pratigyajee..then God help you..now get lost..three of you.." Krishna said angrily...


Angad left with his fellows..and then Chandu caught Krishna.."Kaa Bhaiya..what is it?You know her?You know her name?And I never saw you taking sides of girls.. you always blamed girls that they mislead boys from their goal..and today you did a favour to a girl..I can't believe it....Tunna..can you please explain it to me?"

"I am also clueless..Bhaiya ko kyaa ho gaya?Aur oou ladki ka naam humko bhi nahi pata tha..Angad ne bataya bhi nahi..Bhaiya ko uska naam kaise pata hai be?"..Tunna was really shocked..



"Sareef ladki hai Bhai..kyun uska naam uchhalta hai..chal ab..chalte hain...aur haan..Angad par najar rakhna...aur agar woh dobara Pratigyajee ko paresaan karne ki kosis kare..toorant humko batana...samjhe ho k naahi?"..Krishna said..

"Jee Bhaiya.." ,Tunna and Chandu had no choice but to agree..


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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