FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

That was a really good part

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Could Actually Imagine It! Loved It! Wonder What Krishna's Gnna Do Next...

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Well..glad to see your response ,keep it up.

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AqUaMaRiN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

AWESOME 👏 Want to read more n more n more!!! PLZ update soon😃

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ANANYA ROY

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Thanks for your huge response,I really feel great when I see the comments,I hope I will be able to write as per as your standard of liking.

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part 7

Nitin was in deep thought,soon he will get engaged to Pratigya,then married.He has been trying hard to pursue himself for the marriage.His past experience is too bad to remember..he can't even think how he survived.He started to forget but suddenly a letter changed all things.

"Nitin,
I only know my state.What agony I am suffering from,only I know.Baujee will never accept our relation,but Nitin,isn't our love enough to make up everything? Things are becoming worse day by day.My only hope is your love.Don't despise me Nitin,I have the guts to leave my family,now you have to show your courage.It's high time when you do something,I can't live like this.Yesterday Baujee introduced me to the son of his friend.If you still be silent,then suicide is the only way to keep my soul in peace.I love you Nitin,I need you..please rescue me from this vile situation.

Yours forever Man....."

Nitin sighed.Manorama is really looking for him to do an effort for their relationship.They met in Kanpur,Nitin went their to study Engineering,and Manorama was studying in a girls college..one day they met in an inter-college festival.Then they felt on cloud nine as they fell in love deeply with each other. Soon,Manorama's father,Thakur Gagan Singh got informed about the affair,it ended up with Nitin's harrasment being on the gun point by Gagan Singh.Thakur Gagan Singh wasn't ready to accept a Kayasth boy as his son-in-law,he threatened him literally.Nitin ignored the threats,as a result he was presented before Gagan Singh..it was a dark night.To kill Nitin and then to wash every trace of the crime the ambiance was selected by Gagan Singh.But it was Nitin's good luck,he survived.That time Police was on the proper time,their informers did a great job, alleged by several charges,Gagan Singh was arrested red handed ,the charge was ,attempt to murder.Nitin was instructed to keep his mouth shut by the gang members of Gagan Singh..no symbol of Manorama's presence remained in Kanpur. As if the Manorama was never in the whole world.

Nitin left Kanpur with a broken heart.After many months,he was introduced to Pratigya.Nitin felt relaxed as Pratigya and he had no caste barrier.Once again,Nitin tried to be happy and he actually made it real.But there came out another danger in form of Krishna.Nitin again cursed his luck.

After reading Manorama's letter,he was in a dilemma,if he had to fight with the goons,then why for Pratigya?Why not for Manorama,his real love?In both cases,the Thakur mania is on astronomical height,then a real effort must be done for Manorama..if Manorama really tries to kill herself,will Nitin ever be able to forgive himself?

Nitin made an excuse of his official tour and left for Banaras.Tunna and Chandu was watching him as per Krishna's order..they informed Krishna that Nitin took the way to Banaras..Krishna gritted his teeth..

Krishna ,Tunna and Chandu left for Banaras too...

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"Baba kidhar hai?"..Thakurain asked..

"Ee leo..humre pocket ma..lie baithe hain hum usko..leo..dekh leo.."..Sajjan replied with a disgusted look.."Tohar Baba k chakkar me uu Lala ka launda hum par thook k chala gaya..sasoora..behooda kahin ka.."

"Par aap ee to socho k us din agar woh ladka naa hota..toh Komal..sochne se bhi darr lagta hai..aaj humri Betia humar saamne sahi salamat khadi hai..uu ladke ki hi wajah se na?"..Thakurain pleaded..

"Amma..kyun us din ki baat yaad dilati ho..ladka itna bhi seedha nahi hai..humse humare ghar k baare me puchha..jab Baujee ka naam bataye hum..Bhaiya ka naam bataye..saale ka chehra dekhne layak tha..aise dekha humko k kachcha khaa jaayega..uske motor bike par bitha kar humko ghar tak laaya..geer na jaaye isi lia hum uska kandha pakdne gaye..sala bola haath hatane ko..bola peeche ka rod pakdo..haath laga kar kaa karte hum?Us launde ki ijjat loot lete kaa?Ghaamad sala..pata nahi khud ko kaa samajhta hai..aise bhaao khaa raha tha.."..Komal said angrily..

"Ee Beta..usne sab ko aankhe dikhai..kyunki tohar Krisna Bhaiya oka ee mauka diaa..tum fikar naa karo..tum jaao..TV me kauno film nahi aa raha hai ka?Jaa kar dekh leo.."...Sajjan suggested..

After Komal walked away to her room, Sajjan said ,"Jo boli ho Thakurain..ghalat nahi hai..soch k humri bhi atma kaanp uthi thi..jab humne socha k us din Komal ko agar kuchh ho jaata toh..ee sasoor log..University me bhi chunab ladhenge..sala padhne jaate hai k chunab ladhne.."

"Aap bhi toh chunab k ticket k lia kosis kar rahe ho na?"..Thakurain said..

"Sasoor,hum unibersity me nahi ghoos rahe hain..hum MLA banne k chakkar me hai..par Baba ko samjhao..uu ladki ka chakkar chhod de..Kayasth hain uu log..saala Thakurai ki band bajane pe kyun tula hai ee launda?Thakuron ki koi ladki pasand karta toh saale uthva lete oka.." Sajjan said..

"Par..jo bhi kaho..uu ladka..ka naam hai..haan Adars..baat hai ladke me..is chhat k neeche khade ho kar..aapse aankhe mila kar baat kia woh..Komal ko bhi daant dia uski gaali galoj k lia.."..Thakurain said smilingly..

"Professor k khoon me itni garmi hoti hai..kabhu dekha nahi..agar Komal ko ghar waapas naa laata toh oka wahi jinda gaar dete..behooda sala.."..Sajjan said angrily..

"Kayasth hai..yehi baat ki paresaani hai...sochiye..agar uu ladka bhi Thakur khandan se hota..toh humri Komal k lia usse achha dulha kahin milta?"..Thakurain said..

"Abe..tum toh khayali pulao pakane lag gayi be..jyada bolo mat..tumko sar pe bithate hain tum toh humri kaan me hi pishab karne lagti ho..sasoor..chup raho..ee dekho..abe oo...ghantilaal..ab kaahe k lia ghanti baja rahi hai..?"..Sajjan said looking at his mother... she was grinning and ringing the bell..approving her daughter-in-law's view..she was also impressed by Adarsh..

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Nitin was talking on his mobile phone,"Yes..hii..how are you..I am here for you.. how can I leave you alone?I want to meet you..you meet me at Chaitganj market.. yes..I will be waiting for you...I love you..."

"Bhaiya..ee sala toh I LUB U tak pahooch gaya..saale ko yehi dho daalenge hum.." ..Tunna said...

"Nahi Bhaiya..abhi nahi..yeh langoor Bhabhi ko Chaitgang me bula raha hai.. Bhabhi ko aane dijiye..jab woh aayengi..ee saale ko utha k patak denge..fir Bhabhi ko lekar aap udan chhoo ho jaana....ek dum biha kar k hi ghar jaana..ek baar biha ho gaya toh naa aapne Baujee kuchh kar paayenge..naa Prof. Saxena.."..Chandu said..

"Sahi baat..aaj toh utha hi lete hain Pratigyajee ko..chalo.."..Krishna said..

Krishna was following Nitin along with Tunna and Chandu..Nitin was eagerly waiting to meet his girl.. then he felt that someone was patting on his shouldier.. he looked back and became stunned to see Krishna.

"Kaa be..humri baat tohar bheje me naahi ghusi us din..bola tha na Pratigyajee se door rehna..tum Banaras tak chale aaye unse milne?Jindagi se pyaar nahi hai ka?" Krishna said..

"Wait..Pratigyajee is in Banaras..how do you know that?"..Nitin said..

"Munna..humko har baat ki khabar rehti hai..par tumko baat samajh me naahi aati ka?Sarafat ki bhasa samajhe ho k naahi?Bole the na..Pratigyajee se mat milna..fir kaahe muh utha k chale aaye..be..bajaye ka tohar kaan k neeche?"..Krishna asked...

"Kyaa bakwas hai..main yehan Pratigyajee se nahi milne aaya.."..Nitin said..

"Haan..aur sooraj pashchim se nikla hai aaj..hai na Munna?Kaa samjheho humko.. bewakoof?Pratigyajee yehan hain..tum yehan unse milne nahi aaye toh sala Baba Vishwanath k mandir me damroo bajane aaye ho..sasoora..humko kaa samjhe ho? Lalloo..k ullu..?"..Krishna shouted..

"Trust me Krishna..I am telling the truth.."..Nitin begged..

"Angrezi mat jhaar be..sala yehi angrezi bol bol k tu Pratigyajee ko pataya hai..par hum bhi aur bardast nahi karenge..aaj tohar kissa hi khatam karenge.."..Krishna said..

"Ohhooo..arre Pratigyajee ko pata hi nahi k hum abhi Banaras me hai..yakeen karo..aur please leave me alone..",,Nitin requested..

"Toh tu nikal yehan se..chal..nikal.."..Chandu said..

"Mujhe yehan kisise milna hai..usse mile bina main nahi jaa sakta..please..."..Nitin said..

"Ee baaton ka devta naahi hai Bhaiya..ee hai laathon ka bhoot..bina kharcha paani die ee ka kuchh kehna bekaar hai.."..Tunna advised..

"Haan..sahi baat..chalo..khopche me leo isko..aaj iski shakal hi bigaad denge.." ..Krishna roared..

Nitin was served by several punches and slaps..he was beaten black and blue.. when a female voice came into his ear.."Ohh my god..Nitin...hey..leave him.."..it was Manorama..Manorama Gagan Singh Thakur.Krishna was shocked to see Manorama..what was she doing here?

Manorama ran towards Nitin..hugged him..and said ,"Are you people crazy..what you have done to MY NITIN..?Mr. Krishna..will you tell me what is going on.. Nitin.. are you okay?"..."NO..of course not..can't you see my black and blue avatar..maar maar k faluda bana dia..and Man,you know this jerk?"..Nitin asked..

"Yehi toh hai jo mujhe dekhne aaya tha..Baujee k dost ka Beta...Krishna..I will kill you..."..Manorama shouted..

"No..this can't be true..arre main jisse pyaar karta hoon..aur jisse meri shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai..dono k peechhe Krishna hai..I can't believe that..keh do k yeh jhoot hai.."..Nitin groaned..

"Eee baat hum bhi keh sakte hai be langoor..saale..tu toh dinge haank raha tha Pratigyajee k naam ka..ab ee Manorama ka kyaa chakkar hai be?Aur Manorama.. aap..humare saamne toh ghunghat daal k aai thi..abhi toh aapki kaaya hi palat gayi..aap pant shirt me..angrezi bhi bol rahi hai..aapke Baujee ko pata hai aapke is roop k baare me?"..Krishna said..

"Main baad me baat karti hoon..but Nitin..Krishna kyaa keh raha hai..tumhare lia bhi kya ladki dekhi hai tumhare Parents ne?"..Manorama asked..

"Haan..aur us ladki se hum pyaar karte hain..unka naam hai Pratigyajee..ee langoor ko hum samjhane gaye..par isne aisi tashan dikhai humko..aur ab yeh scene..do chaar laath aur padni chahie be tumko.."..Krishna said..

"Someone please take me to the Doctor..I am ..uff.."..Nitin cried out of pain..

"Kaise lapoo jhanne se pyaar ki ho Manorama.."..Krishna said with a shameless smile..

"You please keep quite..let me understand the whole matter.."..Manorama said..

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Krishna started to laugh after listening the whole matter from Manorama and Nitin.. "Thakur ki Beti se pyaar kia..toh Thakur ne jaan se maarne ki koshish ki..Maa Baap ne apne jaat me shaadi tai ki..toh us ladki par aur ek Thakur ki nazar..woh bhi dhamki de raha hai mujhe..sivaye dhamki dene k aur kuchh aata nahi kya Thakuron ko?I am sick of it..maine socha jab jaan ka khatra hai hi..then why not for Manorama..she is the one I love.."..Nitin said sadly..

"Pratigyajee k baare me nahi sochna hai ab?"..Krishna asked mockingly..

"Man ne suicide karne ki dhamki di thi apne khat me..agar woh kuchh kar leti.. main toh jeetejee mar jaata..Pratigyajee is a strong girl..woh suicide karnewalon me se nahi hain.."..Nitin assured him..

"Oo hooo..Man..sahi hai Beta..pahle hi yehan aa jaate..tum gaye Prof. Saxena ko humari shikayat karne..humre Baojee tak baat gayi hai..humri band baji padi hai.. sab tumhari wajah se..langoor kahinka..Manorama..tumhare Baap ko is par goli chala hi deni chahie thi...ghanchakkar hai sala.."..Krishna said..

"Woh goli chalane hi wale the..aise me Police aa gayi...aur woh gaye jail..magar Man..aaj kal woh fir jail se baahar aa gaye hain..sach hai kya?"..Nitin asked..

"Sach hai..humre Baojee ne hi unki zamanat ka bandobast kia hai..Thakur Sajjan Singh ne.."..Krishna said grinningly..

"Tum log..na..sach me Raavan ho..Man..kyaa karoon batao..."..Nitin asked..

"Munna jo bhi karo..bas Pratigyajee se door raho..ab k agar Pratigyajee k aas paas bhi dikhai die..Manorama...samjha deo apne marad ko..apne pairon par khada nahi hoga fir kabhi jindagi me..waise Manorama..ek baat bataiye..ee jaun.. suicide karne ki dhamki hai..yeh humesa kaam karta hai?"..Krishna asked curiously..

"Depend karta hai k saamne wala aapne kitna pyaar karta hai..pyaar karta bhi hai yaa nahi,aapki dhamki me seriousness honi chahie..dekhnewalon ko lagna chahie k aap sahi me suicide karna chaahte ho..apni baat manvane ka raam vaan ilaaj hai..yeh..Sholay picture me nahi dekha?Pani ki tanki pe kaise chadh gaye the Veeru matlab Dharamjee..Mausi maan gayi thi na..Basanti k saath shaadi karvane k lia.."..Manorama said smilingly..

"Pratigyajee aise natak se pighalnewali nahi..koi faaida nahi hoga.."..Nitin shouted..

"Tujhse puchha maine?Abe bhagwan ne shakal achhi nahi di tujhe..kum se kum baatein toh achhi kia kar..aur tu fir se Pratigyajee ka naam kaahe le raha hai be..." ..Krishna said angrily.

"Man..chal yehan se..I am bone tired.."..Nitin pleaded..

Tunna and Chandu were enjoying the whole fiasco..langoor is out of Pratigya Bhabhi's life,finally..

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

omg, I seriously enjoyed this! what dialogues n what twist... n now suicide ki dhamki ka lesson seekhta Krishna 😆
good going 👍🏼

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwww wwwwwoooooooowwwwwwwwwww yar nitin ko to comedian bana dia tumne...he he is avtar mein wo mujhe bht pasand hain...👏👏👏

aur wah kya twist mara re....main to twist karke dance karne lagi he he he🤣

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: kaasshh
wwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwww wwwwwoooooooowwwwwwwwwww yar nitin ko to comedian bana dia tumne...he he is avtar mein wo mujhe bht pasand hain...👏👏👏
aur wah kya twist mara re....main to twist karke dance karne lagi he he he🤣

I know..you are a behoodi to the highest level..you always want to see Nitin like this..😆