FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: shruthiR
This chp was awesome.Just one request.In the next chp pls keep more sequences where Pratigya and Krishna get to talk more each other.And yeah abt Pratigya's character,I like the way u've portrayed her in ur ff more than the way she has been portrayed in the show.She's more bold and confident in ur ff. 😃

My Pratigya is an ordinary girl..an ordinary 21st century girl,who had her own perception,she has no X-Factor...she is very ordinary..she went far from her home to study,she has seen the outside world,she is confident,brave but very much alert about the surroundings,she knows her limits.You can see these kind of girls every where now a days.I don't know who had sketched the character of Pratigya in the serial.If I get that person,I am going to wring his or her neck for sure.😡

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vishal varma

@vishal-varma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

yara koi tu hum ko bataye ka hai yeh ff mohabbat matlab ka hai is ka???????????????????????

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: vishal-varma
yara koi tu hum ko bataye ka hai yeh ff mohabbat matlab ka hai is ka???????????????????????

FF==Fan Fiction..fan fiction woh hota hai jo ek show ka fan apne style se likhta hai..matlab agar woh kahani likhta toh yeh show woh kis angle me dekha chaahta..Fiction by a fan..Mohabbat ,the name of my fan fiction.

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vishal varma

@vishal-varma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

wooow thnks yara ka sach mein sahi likhti hoo ananya i proud of u yara aj se tum, bhi humari janemaan hogaye ho bay

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Part 9

Chandu joined Krishna ,"Kaa hua Bhaiya,kauno paresaani hai ka?",Chandu asked..

"Arre..ek tohar Bhabhi jo humko puchhti nahi..upar se Baojee jo Thakur aur Kayasth ka raag alap rahe hain..ka karbo?"..Krishna said annoyingly.

"Fikar kaahe karte hain Bhaiya?Sab thik ho jaayega.."..Chandu assured him.After few minutes..Krishna's mobile rang,a call from Tunna.."Bhaiya..Bhabhi nikli thi ghar se baahar..Angadva unke peechhe gaya hai..abhi hum jo hain..Dr. Pathak k
ghar k paas se bol rahe hain..Lucky aur Jugnu bhi hai Bhaiya..aap jaldi aao.." ..Tunna said anxiously.

"Ee sala ..sara jamana hi humre pyaar ka dusman bana baitha hai...Angadva ko kahe the hum..k Pratigyajee ki taraf aankh utha kar bhi naa dekhe..sala..maar khaana oke kismat me hai..kaa karbo..chalo.."..Krishna started his bike..

Pratigya started to give tutions to school students.On a temporary basis..after three months she will join the university,she has just to take care of the school examinations of her students,as their old tutor left Allahabad after getting a Government job,so Pratigya volunteered.The area where she went ,majority was Bramhin as residents.The neighbourhood was filled by educated people,like ,Dr. Pathak,Advocate Mishra,Justice Trivedi..Pratigya was there to give tution to Justice Trivedi's grand children.After the tution hour..Pratigya took her way to reach home. It was almost 11 in the morning.Angad came to Advocate Mishra for some Legal measure when he saw Pratigya.He chased her..Pratigya sensed a bike was racing near her..she just crossed the road and again went towards Trivedi House..and slipped by the narrow lane beside that house..Angad was a bit puzzled..but he didn't give up..he called Jugnu and Lucky..

Tunna saw Jugnu and Lucky passing in a hurry,he thought it must be Angad who called them..Tunna's assumptions was right,Angad,Jugnu and Lucky were searching fpr Pratigya..Tunna was also surprised that Pratigya was nowhere in the
neighbourhood..where did she go in this short span of time?Tunna called Krishna immidietly..Angad looked back and saw Tunna.."Hey Tunna..idhar kyaa kar raha hai be?"..asked Angad,,

"Tum teeno is gali me kaunsi Ramayan likh rahe ho?"..Tunna questioned..

"Arre..Jugnu-Lucky..Tunna k saath jaao..chai peeo..Tunna hum yehan aaye the Vakil se milne.. Mishrajee..unhise..Lucky-Jugnu bhi aa gaye.."...Angad tried to give excuse..Jungu and Lucky took Tunna away .."Arre Bhai..Tunva ..humri baat sun.." ..they made Tunna busy..in the mean time Angad took to his heel and chased Pratigya again..

Pratigya was hiding in other narrow lane..Angad saw her edge of dupatta..after few moments ..he caught Pratigya..Pratigya was trying to free herself.."Leave me you scoundrel..leave me.."..she shouted.."Aise kaise jaaneman..aaj Krisna nahi aayega tumko bachane..kaise bachogi?"..Angad gave a wicked smile..

In the mean time Krishna reached near the Pathak house,where he saw Tunna,he was arguing with Jugnu and Lucky.."Tohar Bhabhi kidhar hai Tunva?"..Krishna asked.."Aur ee sala Angad kidhar hai?"..

"Abhi toh yehi tha...Bhaiya..Jugnu..kidhar gaya woh?"..Tunna asked..

"Woh toh gaye..apne ghar..."..Lucky said..

Krishna gave him a punch.."Bata..kidhar hai woh kameena Angad?"asked Chandu .."Humko nahi pata Bhaiya..kasam se.."..Lucky cried..

"Tunna,Chandu..in dono ko deo kharcha paani..hum dekhte hain tohar Bhabhi kahan hai.."..Krishna was about to leave the lane in search of Pratigya..then he, along with other chaps,heard a scream..it was a male voice.."Angad Bhaiyaaa.. "..Jugnu cried..they all followed the scream..it was from the next lane...

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Angad was fallen on the lane..screaming vigorously,holding his thai junctions. When every effort of Pratigya failed to throw Angad away..she kicked very hard under Angad's waist line..in his thai junction,a very sensitive part of a male
body..it was a too hard kick to stand..Angad couldn't take this..he just fell down.. while Pratigya was arranging her hair and her dupatta..fallen on the lane Angad was like a beheaded goat..wincing in pain..it was insuffereable..

Tunna,Chandu,Jugnu,Lucky were stunned when they saw the scene..they already understood what happened to Angad..Krishna was spotted to the root..he felt numb to see Pratigya..her face was too furious to watch..Krishna was understanding very well that how Angad attacked her ,why she hit Angad like this..Krishna's eyes became wider..Angad continued screaming.."Dobara agar mere raaste me aaye.. toh shaadi k laayak nahi rahoge..you bas***d.."..Pratigya said tossing her hair behind.She walked in speed .

Angad was yet to overcome the pain while Krishna started to beat him.. "Kameeney..tujhe bola tha na..teri Bhabhi hai..meri baat nahi samjha tu usdin..aaj tujhe samjhata hoon..chal.."..Lucky and Jugnu were served admirably by Tunna and Chandu..

After being black and blue Angad was out of sense..Jugni and Lucky started to cry..

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Again a bike was racing beside her,Pratigya looked,it was Krishna...smiling at her.. Pratigya frowned..

"Hum toh ab tak sirf aap se pyaar karte the..par aaj toh aapki ijjat humari najron me aur badh gayi..sach kahe Pratigyajee..aaj toh hum aapke kaayal ho gaye.." ..Krishna said cheerfully..

"Tumne mujhe kyaa samajh k rakha hai?Aur tum khud ko bhi kyaa samajhte ho? Mere rescue ranger..?"..Pratigya asked furiously..

"Kaa boli aap?Rescoo ranjar..kaa matlab hai iska?"..Krishna asked..

"Ohh God...give me a break...tumko aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?Maza aata hai tumko mujhe is tarha pareshan karne me?"..Pratigya asked again..

"Leo..aur suno..uu Angadva aapko paresaan karne aaya tha..hum toh aapko bachane aaye the..bhalai ka toh jamana nahi raha..aap fir se hum ko galat samajh rahi hain.."..Krishna said sadly..

"Tum naa bhi aate toh bhi main manage kar leti..khud ko Hero samajhne ki galati mat karna.."..Pratigya said in a raw tone..

"Haan ..uu toh hum dekh hi lia hain..sach kahe..kyaa sahi jagah pe maari hain usko aap..sala wahi par chitt ho gaya..humen fakar hai aap par.."..Krishna said grinningly..

"Tum bhi savdhan raho..waisi haalat tumhari bhi ho sakti hai.."..Pratigya warned him..

"Ee zara jyada ho gaya..hum Krisna hai..Angad jaisa lappoo jhanna nahi hain hum.."..Krishna said seriously..

"Tum kyaa ho,hum sab samajhte hain,sab jaante hain..",Pratigya said disgustedly..

"Kaa jaanti hain aap..batao..kaa jaanti ho?Hum jo hai so hai..par aap ek number ki pagal hain.."..Krishna said with wicked smile..

"What..how dare you to call me mad?"..Pratigya shouted..

"Angreji fir se jhaarne lagi aap?..Arre..aap bhi na...dekhiye..hum ladkon ka kuchh farj hota hai..par aap jaisi pagal ladkion ki wajah se hum log apna farj pura nahi kar paate.."..Krishna said grinningly..

"Kaunsa farz?"...Pratigya gave a disgusted look..

"Biha karne ka farj..aapko Thakur khandan ki Bahu banane ka farj,Baap banne ka farj..aapko Maa bananeka farj.."..Krishna said shamelessly...

"SHUT UP.."..Pratigya shouted again..

"Arre..kaahe ka sut up..saadi biha ki baat aapko toh achhi lagni chahie..kuchh din pahle aap hi toh saadi karne jaa rahi thi..ab kaa hua?"..Krishna questioned..

"Shaadi se koi aitraz nahi hai..par ladka mere layak hona chahie..."..Pratigya said calmly..

"Hum kaa aapke layak nahi hain..bataiye.."..Krishna asked angrily..

"Achha..tum kitne layak ho..kitni tumhari kabiliyat hai..ek kaam karo..tumhara naam..pure khandan ka naam..tum jo bhi kaam karte ho..is kagaz me likh do..hum jaakar apne Papa ko dikhayenge..unhe faisla karne do..lo..yeh pen aur paper lo.. likho.."..Pratigya gave pen and paper to Krishna..Krishna was taken back a bit..he didn't expect this..

"Kyaa hua...likh do..gharwalon ko dikhana hai.."..Pratigya said in a cold voice.. Krishna's face started to darken..he felt angry and frustrated..

"I am waiting..come on..write it down.."..Pratigya gave again a cold voice..

"Aapko apni padhai likhai par bahut ghamand hai..Pratigyajee..itna guroor achha nahi hai.."..Krishna said coldly..his eyes were getting sharper..

"Pure Allahabad me tumhare khandan ki gundagardi chalti hai..mujhe sab pata hai..uske baad bhi agar tum besharmon ki tarha ek shareef ghar k ladki k peechhe is tarha pad sakte ho..toh usko bhi toh hak hai..k tumko parakh le..k tum vaakei me
uske kaabil ho yaa nahi..ghalat toh nahi keh rahi hoon main..agar apni daulat,apni taakat ka itna nasha hai tumko..toh uske peechhe jaao jo in sab cheeson k lia mar rahi hogi..I am simply not interested.."..Pratigya said ruthlessly..

"Hum Thakur log hain..humare paas daulat hai..taakat hai..padhe likhe Vakil logon ko hum rakhte hain..apne kaam k lia..padhe likhe Officer log..humse madad maangte hain.."..Krishna said strongly..

"Yeh sirf kahne ki baatein hai..agar aisa hota..toh Manorama Nitin ko kyun pasand karti?Thakuron me ladke kya mar gaye the?Aur tumhine toh uski shaadi karai.. kyaa lagta hai tumko..k bahut bada teer maar lia tumne?Nahi..yeh ghalatfaimli mat rakhna.."..Pratigya said assertively..

Now Krishna really became angry.."Ohh..Nitin k baare me soch rahi ho..us langoor ka bhoot abhi tak utra nahi?"..Krishna said mockingly..

"Main bhala aisa kyun karne lagi?Duniya aur achhe ladke kya mar gaye hain? Wahi sab se pahle humko dekhne aaya tha..pehli nazar me usne humko pasand kia tha..aur bhi aise achhe ladke honge..woh bhi aisa hi karenge..humen yakeen
hai..Nitin ki tarha sab k..kisi Thakur ki Beti se affair toh hoga nahi..so..khwab dekhna chhor do..ab humen jaana hai..rasta chhoro..."..Pratigya ordered...

Krishna held her wrist..the grip was very strong..."Hum jinka haath pakde..woh haath chhuda kar nahi jaa sakti..koshish kar k dekh lo..",Krishna said aggressively..

Withing a moment..Pratigya placed her sharp teeth on Krishna's fist..very intense bite..."Arre baap re..."..Krishna shoved away his hand...blood line came out from his fist..as if it was sharp iron nail..Krishna became stunned..Pratigya walked
away..and then she took a rickshaw..Krishna remained stood there..he was under big shock.."Daant hain ya chaku?..Baap re.." Krishna said in frustration...

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

woowo just caught up widd all partss .THIS is really koolllll..........PRTAS is indeed strong gal.........lovinh herrrr..........n KRISHNa is tooo kewl.......THE FACT that u use the same hindi flavour make this ff veru veru INTERSTINg.........do conjiuee want to see watz happening nextttttt

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

! st one t0o comment will read n comment 😆😆

WOWOWYWYYWY loved it.......LOVING PRTSS lie that yaar..she is soo kool.hehehe angad incidence was very funny...........n KRIYA scenes was too goodd.........indeed prats taught him a leson n bolied his nager now she wll hv 2 face d consequencess..........very intersting......just a lil quest how do u mange to write such a good dialogues in such allahbad langg....?/ rally appreciate that👏👏👏

Edited by sups2222 - 15 years ago

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

nice update, loved ur dialogues.

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Divya

@dkmystery

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

hahaha... fabulous... purane epi. ki yaad aa gai yara!

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sups2222
! st one t0o comment will read n comment 😆😆

WOWOWYWYYWY loved it.......LOVING PRTSS lie that yaar..she is soo kool.hehehe angad incidence was very funny...........n KRIYA scenes was too goodd.........indeed prats taught him a leson n bolied his nager now she wll hv 2 face d consequencess..........very intersting......just a lil quest how do u mange to write such a good dialogues in such allahbad langg....?/ rally appreciate that👏👏👏

I can speak Bengali,Hindi,Marwari and Bhojpuri..I always observe about the local accent.Marwari in Gujrat region,Marwari in Rajasthan,Hindi in Bihar,in UP..I always observe that..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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