Arshi OS: Flirting With Love Part 2 pg24 3/23

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

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SIZZLING SAMI!!!!

Congrats Sami on making it to 10,000 posts. You are such an amazing writer and I love when you come out with new stories.

This OS had a little bit of everything for me, flirting, sexy Raizada, Khushi and Arnav's love and the best part is that I had a smile on my face through the whole read!!!

This is the second part??? Ahhh yeah you can't end it there. Nope not done, not allowed!!

WE WANT ANOTHER PART!!!!

Love you!

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res

Shit itna stalk krne par v i gt second 😡

Dis was d best surprise

Nt bcz u mntnd me wid asr

Bt bcz u r sizling nw

Congratulations dii 🤗 hoping to be a stunnerz soon nd dat tym we can demand more den os 😳

Nd yess dis os is nt finished we d fans d readers demand more u c dil mange more 😛

Btw challenging raizadas are we.. Poor arnav always have to bear bankelal nd his poems

Bt dis who was listening poems

All d attention was on eachother for scores

D way both were behaving hilarious

Omggg arnav didnt leave d aged lady also .. 🤣

Nd arnav accpeted d challenge bt seriously cnt see man nd boys flirting openly wid his wife dat to infrnt of him

He wasnt satisfied wid d result lol

Nd den next day he even counted d interview flirting

I m glad i m able to my asr only if he meet me again 😈

Loved it dii ❤️

awms one

Cntinue dis soon 😳 😈

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Mints23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yum hain hum!!! 😆

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Sami!! Muah!! I love funny stories... they make me laugh and they make me smile... You have any idea how good a job you do with these things?? I had absolutely loved 'The Language of Love'... and I am amazed that the part two is as brilliant as the first one... A competitive Arnav-Khushi are a treat to read. And the rewards are even better... so I am hoping that there is a part three... pretty please!! 😳

Loved the whole scenario... where Arnav and Khushi were getting hit on... and a possessive Arnav was always by Khushi's side... Men are so predictable!! They love to ogle at other women... but no man should look at their girl!! Story of our lives!! 😆

And Banke Lal is adorable too... I really wished that they had used him to make Arnav jealous in our show itself... Nk bhi chalta tha... A jealous and possessive Arnav is a total hit!! And I really want you to write more... Please!!! 😃

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This was so cute an OS😃

I'd loved your OS Language of Love and so this one too.

What a competition...the one who'll attract more wins😆 Don't they know that both of them are wildly attractive?😉

Still when the opposite sex of each flirts with them, they get jealous😃

Seriously, arnav ka kuch nahi ho sakta. So obsessed he is with winning😆

I demand one more part!

btw, congrats on turning sizzlerz 🥳

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Reswa 😳

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Firstly, I'm really happy that I got spot on the first page of your OS! 🥳 And generally I was after 10th page! 😆

Anyway, enjoyed reading the OS to the bits! 😳 Something written on a jealous & possessive Arnav is always a treat for me! And this time ArHi had a bet on who attracts more people from the opposite sex, really? 😆

But again, ASR the great wins! 😎 Lovely OS! 😳

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congratulations Sami...

I am so glad you wrote this, this could be the beginning of a new series ...Flirting Raizada's...!

Arnav never being able to resist his wife and giving into her...loved how they fight about who is more appealing and irresistible...

This was hysterical I loved the concept and the way your wrote and described the circumstance of each point ...loved how subtly they kept counting the scores...the gestures they used etc.

I loved the poems...the one used by the usher about the snacks was superb...and challenge or not,...ASR 's possessiveness and jealousy makes an appearance.

Loved Banke's poem too...it was brilliantly funny...

Loved how Arnav interpreted the old woman's intentions and actions...ha ha ha ...

Both being so competitive, neither can resist a challenge but who says you have to play fair...love how the rules and regulation of their flirting game gets modified according to the situation...

Loved how being a famous person the media was all over him and how that worked out in his advantage.

Just as I was wondering how a draw would end up...we see him tying to find a loophole which his shaatir dimag finally comes up with...

Geeta and Pooh...it's thanks to you he won...how about he thanks you both privately...we know he possesses flirting skills...I think he should test it on guys too...

Sami this was hilarious and I was laughing while reading...made me smile ...I think we need a series...so please continue...

Love the name...

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This was hilarious Sami, loved their fight over who attracts the opposite sex more and their mouthing the score everytime they had an admirer.

Uff that part where the elderly woman touches his cheek and Arnav tells why to Kushi was hilarious..

Finally Arnav had to win the challenge by the last two swooners aka Geeta n Pooja..I think the writer has some soft corner for Arnavji to make him win 😆

Although I'm very curious to know what Arnavji's fun day is 😛

Very Sorry for the late reply Sami..

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago